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MG SS:The Dark Angel Of Fate **new thread added** (Page 30)

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sobia4maaneet

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awsome part i am just loving this SS

waiting for next part

MAANEET MEETING

seriously there is something big in geets past precap is damn teasing update fast this ss is ur best work till date


thnxx for ur support yrr ..
ur comment always makes me feel like yes i am going in the right direction ..

n really sorry i know iss SS ki updates mien buhat late kar deti hoon par kya karoon ..
studies are hell ..
aur yahan par jaldi mien koi mistake kardi na tou end tak garbar hujayegi ...

n me on cloud9 MY BEST WORK TILL DATE ..!!!!!!

LUV YA

thnxx for ur liking n appreciation ...
hopefully u will like the further story as well ..Smile



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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anshra

loved it
awesome


thank u sooo much di ..
glad u liked it ..

thnxx for ur liking support n appreciation ...
hopefully u will like the further story as well ..Smile
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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:16am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by suhaaana

Originally posted by sobia4maaneet

Originally posted by suhaaana

awsome part i am just loving this SS

waiting for next part

MAANEET MEETING

seriously there is something big in geets past precap is damn teasing update fast this ss is ur best work till date


thnxx for ur support yrr ..
ur comment always makes me feel like yes i am going in the right direction ..

n really sorry i know iss SS ki updates mien buhat late kar deti hoon par kya karoon ..
studies are hell ..
aur yahan par jaldi mien koi mistake kardi na tou end tak garbar hujayegi ...

n me on cloud9 MY BEST WORK TILL DATE ..!!!!!!

LUV YA

thnxx for ur liking n appreciation ...
hopefully u will like the further story as well ..Smile



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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:25am | IP Logged

HI FRIENDS ME POSTING NEXT PART OF THIS SS ..

last part mien net issue ki waja se pics nahi post kar payi thi ..Confused
here are somethings which i want to show u all ..
n is necessary 4 u all to know the further story ...Smile



this is how geet's attire is in MUMBAI ...



THIS IS MAAN'S MOTHER ...PREETI KHURANA

SORRY I FORGOT HER REAL NAME ...Ouch


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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 1:58am | IP Logged
hi friends ...
hw r u ..??
me back with another update of this SS
hopefully u all will enjoy this ...

here it is ...Smile

The Dark Angel Of Fate ...!! 

PART 4 

Geet ( st ) :jab mien shaddi aur pyaar mien vishvaas hi rakhti tou phir kya matlab hai kisi ke saath aise rishtey mien bandh ne ka …dadi maa tou jaanti hain mujhe phir bhi kyun unhoon ne apne poote ke liye mujhe chuna …..par jo bhi hoo mien yeh shaddi nahi kar sakti …kisi kimat par nahi …



Plss babaji ..meri madad karna kal agar dadi ke saamne apne aapko nahi sambhal payi tou pata nahi kya huga …aur aniee …I just hope aniee is not coming with her …I wont be able to hold my self seeing her ….uss ko tou kuch nahi pata …aur kabhi pata chalna bhi nahi chahiye …mien uss ko yeh sab kabhi pata nahi chalne de sakti ….never 

Maan was not less disturbed ..

Standing in front of a long window stairing at the black sky …

Maan ( st ) : kaise samjhaoo dadi ko ..janta hoon who meri khushi chahti hain ..par mien kisi relationship ke liye tyaar nahi hoon …pehle maa gayi ..then papa mujhe chor kar chale gaye ….akela hugaya tha ..aur iss hi akele pan ka faida uthaya uss sameera ne …aur ab ….ab jab me relationships mien believe hi nahi karta tou kaise kisi ko apni life mien shamil karne ke liye haan keh doon ….yeh tou dhoka huga …uss larki ke saath bhi aur aapne aap ke saath bhi …

Jab mien ache se jaanta hoon ke mien kabhi kisi se pyaar nahi kar sakta tou phir kya faida kisi ko jhootti umeed dene ka …..mujhe kuch bhi kar ke kal uss larki ko reject karna hi hoga …

Jaanta hoon aesa karke dadi aur aniee dono ka mood off hujaye ga par phir bhi mien kisi se shaddi nahi kar sakta ..kabhi nahi ..mere liye aniee aur dadi maa hi sab kuch hain ..bas kal kisi tarha iss problem se jaan chotte …

Abb tou aniee bhi yahan dai maa ke saath tou mien kuch time ke liye bussiness tour ke liye chala jayoon ga ….

Both were making plans hw to make the situation favourable for them ….least did they know whats fate has in its store for them ….coz we can just plan what we will do tomorrow but the outcome of our plans is fixed n preplanned by the Almighty already …

Morning at 8am ..KM

dadi entered maan's room to call him for the b.fast ….n saw aniee sleeping on his bed n maan was coming out from his personal study grabbing his files n lappy …

Dadi Maa : maan yeh aniee ..

Maan : shh dadi ..aniee soo rahi hai lets go outside …

On the dinning table …

Dadi maa : maan aap ne hi aniee ko begara hai …ye bhi koi tareeka hai ….jab bhi neend nahi aai ya darr lage tou aapke room mien chali jayeingi …bachi nahi hai wooh

Maan (smiled seeing dadi's fake angry expression) : dadi maa kyun itna ghussa hain aap …aur kunsa aniee budhi hugayi hai …bachi hi hai who ..she is just 19 for god sake ….kya fark parta hai agar mere room mien aakar sogayi ….darr gayi thi who …aap janti tou hain uss ko kitna darr lagta hai phir bhi …

Dadi Maa : maan plss aniee itni bhi bachi nahi hai …aur aap usko spoil kar rahe hain .. usski har zidd poori kar ke na aapne begaar diya hai unko ….jo mann mien aata hai who karti hai ….bina soche …

Maan : ohoo dadi koi nahi spoil hui meri princess …aur aap plss usko dantna mat …buhat tensed thi kal wooh ..itne time baad wapis aayi hai ..sudden new change ki waja se neend nahi aayi usko aur upar se woh fiasco movie ... tou aagayi mere room mien …


Dadi Maa : bilkul bilkul humari majaal jo hum MSK ki behen ko kuch kahen … madam ghussa hugayi tou phir tou iss KM ka bhagwaan hi malik hai …after all maan singh khurana ki behen hai ghussa bhi tou unke jaisa hi hoga …

Maan : dadi …!!!!

Dadi Maa : maan bete hum jaante hain aap aniee se buhat pyaar karte hain par iss tarha unko begaarna theek nahi hai ..kal aap ki shaddi hugi tab kya …….tab kya kare gi aniee ..aur aap ki choro unki khud ki shaddi hugi tab bhi kya apne ghar se aapke paas aajaye gi..

Maan : dadi maa plss ……..meri shaddi hu ya nahi aniee humesha meri princess rahe gi …uss ki jaga koi nahi le sakta ….aur mere room mien aane ki jahan tak baat hai ,…uss ke liye aniee ko na kal kisi ki permission ki zarorrat thi na …..aaj hai …aur na hi aane wale kal mien uss ka yeh haq uss se koi cheene ga …..so plss yeh baat dobara nahi hogi ..

Dadi maa : maan aap samajhne kushish kareye ..

Maan ( maan stood up from his chair n starts walking ) : dadi maa mien late huraha hoon…. Meri important meeting hai ..aur aniee ko pls dant ye ga mat …

Dadi Maa : maan humien aap se kuch important baat karni hai uss larki ke bare mien ..

Maan : dnt worry office se direct uss larki ke ghar aajaoon ga ..aap mujhe address msg kar dijeye ga ….

Dadi Maa : humari baat tou sunye ..

Maan : haan dadi bolye …

Just then maans mbl buzz n he left KM …Confused

Dadi Maa : kya karen abb hum humien inn ko geet ke bare mien itni important baat karni hai aur yeh hain ke sunne ko tyaar hi nahi …ek tou yeh maan bhi na bas kuch keh do Aniee ko aur hujaye ga inka mood off  …

The day went well for maan …as usual busy with his meetings …dadi n aniee were super excited for the evening …

While handa house was all set for the dinner ….n to welcome the Khuranas …

But on the other hand a person was sitting lost in a dark room ….holding a picture frame close to her heart …it was non other then geet ….a tear trail was lingering on the edge of her eyes from quite a long time n she was gazing the pic cont. …n said looking at the pic...

Geet : sorry mujhe pata hai …aane wale kuch din mien me jo kuch karoon gi shayad who aapko dukh dega ..par mien yeh shaddi kar ke …dadi aniee aur aapke bete ko iss se ziada dukh nahi dena chahti maa ….i am sorry ..


just then the door opened with a bang by an angered Brij …

Brij : ab kis ka sog mana rahi hai yahan beth kar ….2 ghante mien larke wale aajayein ge …aur unke saamne agar koi tamasha hua tu rab di sou geet …mien iss barr tujhe zinda nahi choroon ga ..

The coldness shown by geet's side was adding in brij's anger but geet was least interested..

Just then palavi came in the room with the dress for geet …

Palavi : brij plss mien baat karti hoon gudya se …tum jayoo yahan se ..

Brij : damjha dejeyi iss ko ..warna ..!!!

Palavi to geet : yeh sab kya hai gudya ..plss maan ja bache tou jaanti hai ab kuch nahi kar sakte hum tou ye zidd kyun …

But geet went towards the dressing table n put the pic frame in the drawl …

Palavi ( standing at the same place away from geet ) : ek baar pehle bhi tumhari zidd ki waja se hum tumhain khoo dete aur abb phir tu ….

But geet saw her with a blank face …determine with her own thoughts to break this alliance …

Palavi ( grabbing geet by her shoulder harshly ) : plss geet who tujhe maar dega samajhti kyun nahi ho tum ..

Geet : zindagi jeene ka shauq bhi nahi hai mujhe …..mien zinda hoon kyun ke iss zindagi ko jeetne nahi dena chahti …….jitne imtehaan …jitni takleef iss zindagi ko mujhe deni hai ..dede mien unn sab ka saamna akele karne ke liye tyaar hoon ..lekin kisi bhi kimat par kisi ajnaabi ko apni zindagi mien shamil nahi karne wali mien …

After 2 hours …it was almost 8pm at night ……5 cars stopped in front of Handa House … ( me wondering yeh larki dekhne aaye hain ya poori baraat lekar aayein hain …)

Gaurds from the car following them came forward n opened the door for dadi n aniee ..

While on the opposite side maan came from his car towards dadi …

Dadi Maa : shukar hai aap time par puhanch gaye …

Maan : dadi maa aap janti hain MSK kabhi late nahi hota ..but I am surprised ke aap aniee ke saath aayi hain phir bhi time par hain …

Aniee : oh plss bhai ..mien itna bhi late nahi karti ..

Dadi Maa : maan pouchye mat ..subha se aniee ka kya haal hai ….inka bas chalta tou yeh suha uthte hi yahan aajati …

Aniee : dadi abb poore 2 saal hugaye mujhe geet se mele huye tu excitement tou hugi hi na …

Maan : geet ..!! kuan geet

Aniee : bhai plss yeh mazaak ka time nahi hai ..ek min ……!! ..don't tell me dadi ne aapko yeh nahi bataya ke jis larki ko dadi ne aapke liye pasand kiya hai who geet hai …

Dadi Maa : woh bete humare dimag se hi nikal gaya …aur phir jab bhi try kiya tou aapke bhai ka tou aapko pata hi hai ..koi na koi office call ya meeting ..

Maan was still lost somewhere when aniee waved her hand in front of his eyes …

Aniee : kya hua bhai ..kya soch rahe hoo ..??

Maan : yeh naam kahin suna hai ..kahan yaad nahi aaraha ..Ouch
girls i said it interview ke first few min mien maan was lost ..LOL

Dadi Maa : maan bete aniee se hi sona huga ..ab chorye ye sab aur chaliye andar ..aur aniee aap zara tameez se pech aayega andar samjhi …!!

Aniee : fine dadi aap subha se mujhe yahi gyaan de rahi hoo ..
Acha bhai suno na ..since dadi ne aapko geet ke bare mien kuch nahi bataya hai tou mien batati hoon …….

Dadi went forward while maan n aniee were walking slowly behind her ..

Aniee : pata hai bhai …geet na kabhi kabhi bilkul aapke jaise behaive karti hai …. God she is soo confusing …..kabhi kabhi bilkul chatter box ban jati hai aur kabhi bilkul mute hujati hai ….jab phranks karne par aajaye tou baap re uss se tou clg ke professors bhi nahi bach pate thay aur jaante hu jab bhi geet ghussa huti thi na mujhe humesha aapki yaad aati thi …

While aniee were onn n onn talking about geet un-aware of the fact that to whom she is saying all that is engrossed in his mails ….Tongue

N dadi was bye now inside Handa House receiving a warm welcome …

Aniee : bhai aur pata hai geet tu …..oh god ..!!

Now maan was alert seeing her panic …he asked

Maan : kya hugaya aniee aese kyun chillayi …

Aniee : bhai dadi andar chali gayi ……god bhai aap kitna baat karte hoo ..ConfusedLOL

Maan just stood smiling at his kiddo sister …

N aniee just ran inside the house leaving behind maan ..

Inside Handa House …

Darji : bethye bhabi ji …pani wani kuch ..

Dadi Maa : arre nahi bhai sahab who sab baad mien …aap yeh tou bataye palavi kahan hai ..

Palavi ( entrying in the hall ) : namaste maa ji …kaisi hain aap ..

Dadi Maa : hum tou bilkul theek hain …aap bataye aap kaise hain ….maana parega palavi …shaddi ke 25 saal baad bhi aap bilkul nahi badli ..aaj bhi waise ki waisi hain ..

Palavi : maa ji aap bhi  …waise maan bete aur anvesha nahi dekh rahe ..

Dadi Maa : aa tu rahe thay humare saath par lagta hai ..aniee ki batien gate par hi choro hoo gayi ….aate hi honge ..
Just then aniee arrived n hugged Palavi n greeted darji verbily …

Aniee : aunty geet kahan hai …mujhe uss se milna hai ..who iss tarha achanak London se kyun aagayi ..buhat larne wali hoon mien uss se …
 
Palavi : who upar hai anvesha bete …aati hi hogi …

Aniee : loo bhai bhi aagaye ….

Maan greeted every one verbily only n All sitted by now …then started some casual family talks ….darji n brij asked maan about his life ..to which our great MSK answered ever so coldly …

Then palavi n darji told maan about geet n that she is been living here with palavi n raghav only …

Darji : buhat hi pyaari bachi hai humari …bilkul shaant aur sankari …bholli bhi kitni hai ..dunya ki samaj nahi usko par phir bhi parhai mien buhat tezz thi ….

Maan was least interested but Listening to their talks maan assumed the girl to be a typical family person ..living within the four walls …whom he will be able to reject quite easily ….Ouch

N then dadi maa asked to meet geet since aniee was continuously asking dadi to do so …

Palavi : ji mien abhi geet ko lekar aati hoon ..

Aniee : aunty ek min …mujhe bhi geet se milna hai tou ……..ek kaam karte hain na aunty aap mujhe bata dejeye geet ka room mien bhai ke saath wahin chali jati hoon …look aap abhi geet ko bulane jayengi …then bro aur geet baat karne lagein ge …tou phir mien geet se kab miloon gi …tou simple mien aur bhai jate hain …aur mien bhai ko chor ke aajaongi …n then they both can talk with each other cool na ..Embarrassed

( a told u already she is a complete chatter box n quite a naughty one too Wink)

Maan : aniee relax …let it be I am here only so y ..

Palavi : nahi nahi maan bete …u both can go upstairs …aniee geet ka room who corner wala hai …right side wala ..

Darji : han bete aap jao mil lo geet se …

Aniee : thnk u soo much …chalo bhai …( dragging maan along with her she went upstairs )


Aniee : bhai dekhna geet bilkul surprised hujaye gi …mujhe dekh kar ..wooo uska chehra dekhne wala huga …

Maan : aniee tumhain sab ke saamne aese nahi kehna chahiye tha …bacha they would have minded ur idea na …u knw they r frm a small town n that brij ….

Aniee : dnt worry bhai ..ab tou hum ja rahe hain na geet ke room mien …I am soo excited…

Aniee reached geet's room …n knocked ..

Geet ( said from inside ) : chutti maa its open ..Embarrassed

Maan heard the same voice was standing confused …involuntarily his heart beat rose ..remembering the previous events …n just then aniee opened the door n barged in running hugged geet tight n geet also reciprocated the hug …while in the whole senario maan was standing stunned seeing the same girl in front of him he was gapping at in Mumbai's beach ……..

thats geet's dress ...

Dressed in typical indian attire ..unlike her dress up in mumbai …hairs neatly tied up in a plat ..no make up as usual but still her natual beauty was enough to make the MSK drool over her…

Aniee was hugging geet ..swinging around ….repeating the same words nth times …

Aniee : I missed u I missed  u …….i missed u sooo much ..

Coming out of the trance ….Maan saw her sister and was amused to see her soo happy ..he never saw aniee jumping like that …soo much happiness was evident from her big smile ….

N then his gaze shifted to geet's face hw was having tears in her eyes …closed eyes hugging aniee tight like she was afraid of something ….

N next moment he saw geet wiping her tears n loosen the hug cupping aniee's face ..n with a big smile on her face …she said

Geet : I missed u too sweeto …kaise ho …

Maan was amazed with the change in her tone …non can say she was in tears …..soo emotional a minute before …

so here it is ..Big smile
part 4
hope i didn't bored u all ..Smile
sorry not much maaneet moments but in next part pakka ..Embarrassed
n for all those who r eager to know geet's past ..plss wait a bit everything will be revealed but bit by bit ...it is a real nail biting one ..Wink
Precap :-
first fall ...mahi ve ..mahi mahi ve ...

plsss plss do leave ur response n press the like button i really need it with this one ..plss my humble request just a single word wont take much long ...Smile

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 2:09am | IP Logged
superb awsome update

me just loved it

aniee is still a kiddo well something too has happened with her

maan and geet as always mysterious...

i loved the fact that maan loved aniee like his child

and brij on the other hand i just wanna kill him...

yar aisa kya hua hai geet ke saath that she doesn't wanna live

update soon

i am waitinggg



Edited by suhaaana - 27 September 2012 at 2:18am

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lovely update 
dekhte hai age kya hota hai
continue soon

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suhaaana

superb awsome update

me just loved it

aniee is still a kiddo well something too has happened with her

maan and geet as always mysterious...

i loved the fact that maan loved aniee like his child

and brij on the other hand i just wanna kill him...

yar aisa kya hua hai geet ke saath that she doesn't wanna live

update soon

i am waitinggg


thnxx for such a lovely response ..Big smile
me soo glad u liked it ..Smile

n i'll try my best to post this soon NOW ..Embarrassed

n about past i told u its a real nail biting story ...Wink


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