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MG SS:The Dark Angel Of Fate **new thread added** (Page 14)

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by khwaishfan

Fab start...well written..update soon n do pm

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by x_Mishti_x

Maan is such a terror at work but he loves his Dadi sooo much... Waiting for Geets entry.. Wonderful update.. Waiting for next one.. Thanks for sharing 

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by freya123

superb  part

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suhaaana

seriously sobia i just loved it...
i just cant help myself in admiring this hard maan i thoufght of him to be a dark character but he seems to be quite decent arrogant handsome...
post the next part soon i cant wait ( with a baby face)
 

Suhana dearo ur comments makes me feel like my all hardwork n efforts r paid off ..
n yes maan s not at all a dark character but he is reserve one ..

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 7:09am | IP Logged
THE DARK ANGEL OF FATE ..!!



sorry for not updating this for such a long time ..Ouch
here it is ...

PART 2 


After changing into his vest n tracks he came down to have a check on dadi …so goes in dadi's room felt relief seeing her sleeping peacefuly ..tucking the duvet properly he made his way out of her room …
He was in kitchen after having his dinner ALONE …grabbing a glass n water water …he was standing beside a small dinnaing table placed thr ..
Sipping the water he was lost in his past ….n some female sounds echoed in his ears n blur images of a lady running behind a small 4 years boy came in front of his eyes …

in the following convo thr thr 2 ladies present n a 4yrs maan playing with them or say troubling them ...

Echoing sounds : ( the small kid was running around the kitchen at grt pace)  maan  …maan bete plzz ruk jao aur kitna bhagaoo ge apni maa ko ….plzz beta have ur milk …( then he tripped at a placed and another lady came from front saved him from hurting ) maan putar sambhal ke ….( the lady who was running behind him firstly came thr running ) dekhaao lagi tou nahi …( the baby maan nodded negatively ) ..no maa maan strong hai …( both the lady chukled at this sweet sentence ) ….( then the lady who came afterward interupted ) bilkul humare maan buhat strong hai …aur who iss bhi ziada strong hujayein ge jab who ye poora milk finish kar lienge …hai na ( laaye ye doondh ka glass humien dejeye preetie hum apne maan bete ko pilayeinge ….)
 
Then all the blur images got fainted maan could not remember anything else ..frusted he drank the whole glass in one go n made his way towards his room but stopped in the hall n went towards the wall were his parent's numerious pics were hunged …

Caressing his mom pics he stood thr smiling in tears …

Maan : maa aap kyun mujhe itni jaldi chor kar chali gayi …
Bas kuch dhunli si yaadien chor kar …
Aap janti hain aaj bhi iss ghar ke har corner se jori who yaadien mujhe tarapta hua chor jati hain ….kyun mujhe kuch yaad nahi hai …kyun aap se juri meri har yaad ek dhundli tasveer ban kar reh gayi ….mera apna bachpan mere liye kisi paheli se kam nahi hai ….

Moving towards his dads pic …carsing it …looking at it with a wide smile ..

Maan : see dad mene apna promise poora kiya ….kal phir se ek baar mujhe Best Business Man of the Year ka award mil raha hai …..how much I wished ke aap dono bhi mere saath hote ….par dad mien khush hoon …coz mene aapka sapna poora kiya n app ko diya hua apna vaada bhi …dadi aur aniee ka khayaal mien aapni aakhri saans tak rakhoonga dad …koi problem ..koi dukh mien unn dono ke paas kabhi nahi aane doonga … dad mien apni galti phir se nahi repeat karoon ga …ANGEL ne kaha tha ……

forget those who have hurted u n start thinking about the people who have tried their best to make u happy …make them happy …n do what makes them happy …

I will dad …mien humesha apni family ki khushi ka khayaal rakhoon ga …
Removing the tear trail from his mist lashes he looked at the huge couple pic n smiled ..

Maan : aap log uss angel ke liye god se pray karna ke who iss dunya mien jahan bhi hoo uss ko kabhi koi takleef na hoo uss ne mujhe meri life ka maqsad diya tha ..aaj mien jo kuch bhi hoon iss mien meri uss ANGEL ka buhat bara haath hai …aap tou jaante hoo na … I just wish uss ki life mien kabhi koi problem na aaye ….luv u dad n maa …miss u ..

With that he made his way towards his room …n slept with thw same blur images flashing in front of him ...

Next Day started with normal ruitine of maan's excersize then b.fast

At the b.fast table …both dadi n maan was done with b.fast n maan told nakul to bring dadi's medicine …

But just then there came a call

Maan : dadi wait tarun cordless yahan lee kar aao ..

Dadi ( dadi snapped ) : NAHI …. Humara matlab hai maan cordless kharaab hugaya hai hum hall mien ja kar hi baat karte hain …

dadi n she made her way towards the hall ….while maan was checking some mails in his blackberry n then saw the time …he made his way towards the hall to see if dadi has finished call but dadi was still onn with her discussion on the call …n then he gestured dadi to put the call on hold n take her medicine ……

but naughty dadi was in noo mood to oblige n just then maan got a call from Office reminding him about his flight timing ….he saw the time he ws getting late n here dadi's call was not ending any sooner so that he could make her eat medicine n go out …

just then his eyes fall on the cordless which was in working condition …then he came towards dadi n grabbed the reciever from her hand n got to know it was no one at the other end then showed her the medicines placed in front of her …

dadi knew that now no other option is left other than having her medicines …so she quitely obliged ..

Maan : hmm …tou yeh tha aapka aaj ka plan ..

Dadi ( making a cutie pouting face ) : jo aap ne flop kar diya ..

Maan ( bending on his knees with a fake angry face trying to stop his smile ) : dadi aap itni sharartien sooch kaise leti hain ..who bhi sirf medicine se bachne ke liye …
Aur yeh call kis ne kiya aapko ….

Dadi : par kya faida aap bina dawai khilaye maante hain kya ….jaante bhi hain kitna ganda taste hota hai unka …

Maan : dadi seriously u r way too much …now I am 1000% sure Aniee pakka aap par gayi hai …. Look at the time aapne mujhe late karwa diya …
Acha sunnye …mujhe Mumbai jana hai ..2-3 days ka trip hai …mien jaldi aane ki koshish karoon ga ….par plzzz jab tak mien yahan nahi hoon aap apna poora khayaal rakhien gi …n plzzz dadi I beg of u don't skip ur medicines plzz …

To Nakul who was stading beside them ..

Maan : nakul u be with dadi 24/7 …agar dadi ne apni medicine skip ki tou dekhna mien tumhari kya halat karta hoon ….
Aur dadi aap sochye ga bhi mat ke meri absence mien aap kuch bhi khana kha ke apni diet out kar sakti hain ….coz mujhe aapke har pal ki  news mumbai mien bhi milti rahe gi …so u better don't try it this time  ..

Dada Maa : maan bete bas ..bas kejeye aap 2 din keleye ja rahe hain 2 mahine ke liye nahi .,..hum theek hain ….aur apna khayal rakh sakte hain …aap araam se jaye …koi tension lene ki zarorat nahi hai …yahan itne saare log hain humare dhyaan rakhne ke liye …aap humari fiqar bilkul mat kijeye …aur wahan kaam ke beech apna bhi dhyaan rakhiye ga ..

Maan : aap apna dhyaan rakhna …ill call u often ..

Maan stood up pecking her forehead he made his way towards the airport ….
Maan came out wearing his black shades looking breath taking hot in his formal attire …Two shinning black shoes were stepping inside a black BMW followed by 2 cars …

The car moved onn …n he was travelling to mumbai in his private jet …working as always ….

After few hours …

He landed in mumbai ….after freshing up in his sea facing small comfortable house he made his way towards the mumbai branch of KC to look at the work over thr …

By the time he came back to his house it was time for the award ceremony where he was going to receive his 5th best businessman of the year award ….

The moment his car stopped infront of the venue …all cameras n reporters turned towards the hottest hunk of business world …looking stunning in his black attire …ready to take every girls breath away with the attitude he was heading towards the entrance …followed by adi n sasha ...

Just then few reporter approached them ..

Reporter 1 : Mr. Khurana recently aapne apne sab se bare rival Mahesh Chopra ke Mumbai ki Cons. Firm ko over take kiya hai …what u wanna say about it ..

Maan ( making his way 2wards the entrance ) : no comments

Reporter 2 : Mr.Khurana how does it feels winning the wards continuously for 5 years …

Maan ( smirking at the question ) : just the way a king feels after winning the battle n standing on top his enemy's dead body …

Before they could ask further questions adi interrupted saying them to ask what ever they want to in tomorrow's press meet n his guards cleared the way …
 
The party goes very well with maan hearing constant appreciation for his achievements …n enjoying the tint of jealousy in some of his rivals face …

N sasha trying to take MSK's attention ..but all in vien …
Adi was all the way ingrossed with business talks …
N finally by 12:00 maan made his way out of the party venue towards his house …
 
Morning at 9:00am
Maan along with adi was in a press meet ..
 
Reporter 1 : sir what u wanna say about winning this award yet … what will be the aims of KC after becoming the no. 1 construction company in India ..??

Maan : the aim n goal of KC will be the same as always …n that is PERFECTION ..

Reporter 2 : sir we all know u brought up KC from a point when it was at the verge of closing n Chopra's were highly confident with the fact that they will any how over take KC but today u have over taken Chopra Cons. Firm …how does it feels ..??

Maan : I am proud of the fact that I am a self made man unlike others who r lost in the power they were inheriting from their insisters ..

Reporter 2 : I suppose u are indicating towards Manesh Chopra ..

Maan : say what u want …I never mentioned any thing ..but if  Mr.Chopra has this impression upon u all …what can I say ..Next Question ...

Reporter 3 : Mr.Khurana u were just 19 when u joined KC …n today u r an inspiration for the teenagers of the country ….every teenager idolize u n wants to be like u …live a life like MSK …what u wanna say about that …n what u will convey to all those fan teenager ..?

Maan :I am here coz of my efforts ..my hardwork ..n.. my intelligence …..n if any one out thr wants to be where I am standing at the moment he will have to struggle more than me …work even harder than me ….n for sure have to possess a mind sharper than me …coz I am gonna allow anyone to be at my place for this life time …

The session goes onn with numerous question …n maan made his way out of the Press Conference ….

Maan was on his way towards KC's office engrossed in a file reading it ….but then his car stopped at a signal …n his eyes got off the file ..
N he noticed a tiny fist knocking his window …

It was by a small kid …selling few magazines …four body guards from another car following his car from back came to shove off the kid n three came to box guard his car from the other car in front of his car …
N then came a strong manly voice …

Maan ( calling one his guard ) : take this money n get me those business magazines ..
The guard followed his orders ..

By the time signal was cleared n he was gazing at the magazine with a proud smirk on his face …
Written over it …

From a 19 Years old Boy to The King Of Construction World…
Bussiness Tycone
MAAN SINGH KHURANA
The Best Business Man Of The Year……!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Looking at the words written on the cover page …he was grimly smiling at it ..then putting the magazine aside he pulled out a diary from his bag n started reading a random page from it …. Where an extra page was sticked over …..

Dated : ( it was a date seven years back )
 
The Time I Wasted In Achieving Perfection, I Regret …
And Now I Seek The Little Joy Of Being Perfect …
…………….
Running Behind Life Made me Unhappy and Restless …
When Paused … I Called Myself Incomplete n Effortless …
N he was bye now lost in the past …
 
FLASHBACK 7 years later London ..

Writing something on a paper …thinking deeply  …
He was sitting in a lonesome area of a park ….
Holding a paper pen n a diary …

His head dipped down …lost in his own thought …

The only words ringing in his ears were of his girlfriend ..his first love which was with him since 3 years …n now she left him ..

Sameera :yes a broke up with Maan …..waise bhi mein uske saath iss liye thi coz mujhe lagta tha ke Maan ke saath mera future secure hai ….after all he is a richy rich … par ab tou poori dunya jaanti hai ke KC ki kya halat hai … kabhi  bhi tala ( lock ) lag jaye ga … n then the richy rich will be no less than a LS boy with no money …tou phir mien usske saath reh kar kiya karti … mujhe tou model banna hai …top model n I am sure david mera yeh sapna zaror poora kare ga …….aur rahi baat Maan ki tou let it be ..jeeye ya maare mujhe kiya …

He came back to reality when a ball hit him with quite a force n then the paper he was holding writing something was blown by the air …
He walk ahead to get back that paper and saw a Girl Writing something on the same paper ..

For a second he stopped … as if hypnotized by her Simplicity …she was not very young looking like a teenager …not very beautiful either but her simplicity ..the natural beauty n the way she was sitting thr with lots of snaps n a diary gained his attention …

White baggy shot n Yellow top was complimenting her cotton white skin perfectly …her slightly curly hairs held by a clip falling on her shoulder was making her look soo mesmerizing  ..her simple looks were quite different with others ….

The moment she looked up his heart skipped a bit staring at those deep hazel eyes ….calm but still there was soo much in those hazels …like she was hiding a complete world in those almond eyes …they were deep like a sea ….but what amused him was the glint of pain in those eyes …n he could relate to it …he didn't knew y but he felt like he is able to see beyond her smile ….deep in side her soul through those hazel brown eyes which were reflecting the pain which seems to be a part of him also …

He came out of his trance when he saw her walking towards him …his heart beats rose n then she walked passed by him towards the area he was sitting …he followed her n saw her searching something …

He felt himself utterly foolish for gaping at her like that …gaping at a 14 years old teenager …for god sake …she can never be elder than 15 …just a kid ..

He mentally slapped himself for behaiving like that n went towards her …

Maan : excuse me ….that paper belongs to me ..can I have that back …

Girl : oh here u go …so its written by you ….i must say its really good but y are you soo upset …

Maan : how can u conclude that …I never said I am …….n u doesn't even know me ….so please stay out of it ..i am no more going to allow people come in my life n fool me ..

Girl : oh the same story …. God why u people are always bothered about those who never cared about you …

Maan : thnkxx for the paper but pls stop commenting on something about which u know nothing ….

Girl ( she started talking in her cute n mesmerizing voice ….simple as a child yet deep within …..her every word was had soo much depth ) : may be I know nothing about your problem but one that I know ……n…… I guess u should also know is that …those who are with us at the moment …the people who loves us n makes us smile are really precious in our life so we should never leave them for a person who are not with us at the moment ..who left us …those who never loved us …n who is least bothered about our happiness …

Maan ( remembering all the dark memories with sameera he snapped at her ) : saying something like that is really easy n especially in your age but facing it is all a different story girl ..

Girl ( a sudden change in her voice which didn't go un-noticed by him ) : I know but do U know one thing….. IF u lost a person who never cared for us u will forget that in the matter of days …but if u found out that after those days ….U lost your love ones the people who loved u un-conditionally… u will regret for the rest of your life …
( suddenly she was back to her cherpish self …having a cute adoring smile plastered on her face which was fake …he knew don't know y but his heart said she is faking that smile n then she said )…….. So pls forget those who have hurt u n start thinking about the people who have tried their best to make u happy …make them happy …do what makes them happy …

Maan : itna sab kuch itni asaani se keh diya par jis chot ka dard dil tak utar gaya hu usko mita na itna aasaan nahi hai …

Girl ( with a blank face ..no one coulld depicts whts going on in her mind n wht makes her say this )  : iss dunya mien har kisi ko lagta hai ke jo uss ne dekha who sab se dardnaak hai ..par sachaai ye hai ke hum bhi nahi jaante ke dunya ke kis corner mien kis insaan ko upar wale ne hum se bhi ziada dukh diye hain …

Maan ( gazing at her face n listening to  her each n every word ..she seems to be quite mature the way she talks about life ) : life ke baree mien itna sab kuch ….kaise jaanti hoo ..( he said lost in her simple yet deep words ..)
 
Girl : ….

The 19 years old Maan came out of his trance with no response from her n saw her searching for something again…

Maan : hey  ..( don't know hw to address her n instantly the name came from him ) ANGEL ..!!!
What are u looking for ..??
I will help u …tell me ..

Girl ( lost in her search ) : uhh I am searching for my friends throw ball ….they sent me here to get that …n I started talking with u …babaji plss help me …kahan phasa diya …abhi sweeto aayigi aur bin badal barsaat ki tarha mujh pe baras pare gi …uhhh god now whr the hell is that ball gone …

Maan was standing at the same place lost in her sweet yet innocent cribbing ….a sec before she was talking so maturely n now look at her simply a child ….sweet n simple ..!!

N then started walking towards her …

Girl : I thought u r going to help me …..but just look at u …u are standing there smiling at my plight …yeah right y u should be bothered …
N the second moment she found two hand with the ball in front of her ….she sighed in relief …

Girl : thank god mil gayi  …warna unka match incomplete reh jata ..Thank u Mr. …..( again loss of words to address him so she said ..) Mr.Sad-dy ….

Maan : wht …Mr. Sad-dy …

Girl : yup …u are looking so SAD ..that's y …okiee now I got to go my friends must be waiting
( n she started walking back to where she was in the middle of the park n he was walking along with her )

Maan : so u r here with ur family ..

Girl : no I don't have any family ..i lost them when I was 5 yrs old …( she said with a blank face )

Maan : ohh I am sorry …

Girl : don't be … coz I have 3 best-est friends in the whole world …Amy, Ridz, n Sweeto … ( n she started walking fast but he cld easily match her pace )

Maan : if u don't have any family then with whom do u live …?

Girl : no body …actually I have my friend's aunt besides me …

Maan : par u r so young ..n

Before he could ask further …a boy looking almost of her age came n dragged her with him …

Boy : lets go we r leaving ..

Girl ( running with him ) : bye Mr. Sad-dy …

Maan was standing lost ….looking at her retreating figure ..
N then after sometime he was again sitting on the same bench ..holding the same paper in his hand reading what she have written over it …

I Will Swallow My Failure n Hope For Eternity …
         But Hope Is Just A Medication For Life's Adversity …
         At Last I End Up Enjoying This Life Cycle …
         I Will Name It, Shape It, Somehow Will Make it,
But Never Fake It …
I Will Over Come This Darkness n Win The Fight …
Just Like The Sun Out Of The Tent Of Night …
This Is My Life and Distinction …
Why Others Give It Their Opinion n Interpretation …
 
Maan ( St ) : how can a girl in her age be so mature …her every word is soo deep …she is a mystry …for a second she is soo serious n the very moment she turns in to a cute angel … ANGEL ..!!!
Did I just named her angel …
But y shld not I …she is an angel who answered my every query …. I was lost in my dark memories of past n she made me look at the shinning future ….

She was right ..i shld not think about that filth anymore ….she was soo true I left my dadi ..my house just to avoid those memories ….i left my dadi all by her own in such a difficult time …but I will no more waist my time regreting my past ….from now on my life will be for my family n the foremost goal of my life will be to get KC back to the heights where dad wanted it ….

Putting the paper back in the dairy he walked out of the park ….n turned back just to check one last time if she was there …disappointed he went onn …

Half-Minute meetings …

How often it happens in our daily life we met people …walking on the streets ..sitting beside us in a bus or train …sometimes we just pass by them and sometimes these meetings turns into a casual talk ….for a brief moment of time people living thr own life comes in our life circle only to disappear forgetting us completely they goes onn with their life ….we might never meet again with those people for we know if they will ever remember us ever again … 

But for him …a single half minute meeting changed his vision of life completely …a mere teenager and her simple yet deep words holds the capability to make him understand the life n brought him out of his sorrows …how unbelievable it sounds that in just few minute he made up his mind but it happens sometime some strangers n some strange talks makes u see beyond ur capability n that's call the game played by fate … a pure game of fate which makes him meet that ANGEL …a person whom he never saw …. A girl whom he will never be able to meet again ….her words …n her motivation made him the king of his world …n now he owe this success to her …

~~~* FLASH BACK ENDS *~~~
 
Sir : office aagaya hai sahab ….

The drivers voice got him back from the past n he made his way inside the office putting the diary with his files ..

Its lunch time n maan decided to talk with dadi to inquire about her health n medicine …n instructs her to take care but he was still lost in those memories of past .. n was sounding quite lost which didn't go un-noticed by dadi …

Dadi : maan bete aap theek tou hain ..aap itne khoye se kyun lag rahe hain ..sab theek hai na bete ..

Maan : han dadi maa sab theek hai aur mien bhi theek hoon …bas yahan itna sab kaam hai aur staff ki negligence tou bas uss hi bare mien soch raha tha …aap pareeshan mat hu ..i am fine .

Dadi maa : take care of ur self bete …itna stress lene ki koi zarorat nahi hai ..kaam health se barh kar nahi hota bete ..

Maan : I will dadi aur aap plzz apna khayal rakhye ga …ill talk to u later ..
N ended the call not wanting to face any other questions from dadi maa …
 
Finding him lost through out the day finally adi gathered some courage n went towards him after the whole staff left the office accept them n asked him ….
 
ADI : sir.r.r …are u okiee ..i am observing u from the time u entered in the office u were lost somewhere n now also u are in deep thoughts thinking about something …may I know if everything is fine …

Maan : yup adi everything is fine …bas soch raha that ke aaj mera jo life style ..ye status teenagers ka dream bangaya …..kaun believe karega ke mujhe yahan tak lane ki  shuru-aat karne wali khud ek 15 ki LARKI thi …
MAAN SINGH KHURANA ….ko uski life a maqsad dene wali ek 15 ki larki thi ….

Adi ( giving her signature smile )  : eh..he.he.. sir..r..r iss ka matlab aap phir se uss hi ANGEL ke bare mien soch rahe hain … mien bhi na 7 saal se aapke chehre par yeh expression tab hi aata hai jab aap uss ke bare mien sochte hai ….
Waise sir yeh baat tou hai ….kuan mane ga ke MSK …jis ke saamne kisi ki nahi chalti … unhoon ne apni life ka decision kisi 15 saal ki larki ki baat sun kar le liya …. Aap ke saamne tou log College mien bhi log bolne se pehle socha karte thay …I still remember humare college ki larkiyan ..ufff

Maan : Adiii ..!!!!!!!!

N adi instantly shut his mouth n maan was now engrossed in his work …

Adi ( st ) : ooppss mien tou bhool hi gaya maan sir aaj bhi college ke naam se nafrat karte hain ..kyun unko uss bi*** Sameera ki batien jo yaad aajati hain ….hopefully maan sir kabhi tou apne uss past se bahar aayenge …..unko lagta hai ke unhoon ne uss sab ko bhoola diya par sach tou ye hai ke aaj bhi who yaadien unke dill mien nasoor ban ke bethi hain …hope upar wala phir koi angel unki life mien bhej de aur woh unke dil se nafrat ke iss nasoor ko humesha ke liye mitta de ….aur unhein zindagi jeene ka maqsad de de …itne saloon se maan sir sirf apne ghar waloon ki khushi ke liye jeete aaye hain … Babaji plss ek baar phir koi aisa farishta bheejo jo unki life mien bhi khushiyan le aaye ….
 
Maan : Adi ..agar tum apne dream land se bahar a chuke tu mujhe kal ka meeting schedule batao ge …

Adi : Soor..orry Sir … as decided by u kal aapko apni new company Chopra Construction Firm ke visit ke liye jana hai …n whole day we will be looking into its matters that needed ur attention …

Maan : hmm ..fine ek kaam karo dekho agar mumbai ki kisi site par mere visit ki zarorat hai warna mien kal hi London jaoonga next 3 din baad Aniee ka semester break start hai tou mien uss ko lene jaraha hoon …so pehle ja kar apna kaam khatam karna hoga ..

Adi : right sir ..

Next Morning …….its Tuesday ..
 
In some corner of Mumbai in a sea facing small simple but beautiful house ……

A girl in her two piece night dress is turning on her cozzy bed …disturbed with some rays of sunshine coming from the glass window ….
Finally with the clock hits 6am she opens her Hazel brown eyes n skretches her hands in the air sat up n folds her hands to say Almighty Thanks …

Walking towards the window she opened the curtains fully n watches the early morning sunshine ….n turned to the small idol of Goddess Laxmi placed on her study table then bowed her head folding her hands in front of the idol ……….Changing into jogging track she went on her usual jogging along the sea with her ipod n head phones on …

On The Other Hand …

maan was standing on the window of his room enjoying the cool breeze n sea view …with his fav. Black coffee …with the first sip of the hot coffee a cool breeze passes through his body closing his eyes he saw the same face of that Angel he met 7 years back ….n a small smile kept on his face n he decided to enjoy at the sun sight by the sea …

On Beach

He was sitting in a lonely corner away from the early morning hustle bustle of the people …. Staring at the sun which seems to be emerging from the depth of the sea ….he saw a girl standing just infront of the emerging sun bending on her knees doing something …when he focused …he found out she was tying her shoe laces ….involuntarely his gaze was locked by that girl … n he walked towards her direction decreasing the distance n saw her face more clearly ..

Beautiful n pure like a fresh dew drop on a rose petal ….without any make up…not even a kajal in her deep hazels …no gloss on her soft petal like lips …not a single strand of her hair was out of her pony ..but still her simplicity …n her natural beauty was enchanting him in that early morning sunlight …

She stood up n thr eyes met …it was not even for a  min …but the mere look of her deep hazels left him speechless …thr was the same deepness in them …like thr was many thing she was hiding in them …behind the hard expressions of her face …the blankness he saw in those eyes was something which pricked his heart …

But thr was something which he was unable to understand but still could relate himself to it ...he can see some part of him in those almond eyes …
The first thing that came to his mind was his ANGEL …her eyes ..n her talks ..her voice ..her cutie cribbing ….n the flicker of pain he saw in her eyes ….

He kept watching her for almost 20 – 30 min.s n then he lost track of her as the number of people on the beach were increasing …restless he went towards the same direction to see a glimpse of her …

It seems to be stupid to be attracted to a person like that …but what can u say when destiny n nature wants you too meet some one like that ….may be it was start of another Half-minute meeting ….or may be another game is starting by the fate ….

He was by now at the same spot where she was passing bye but he couldn't see her yet….

then something caught his attention ...first reaction which was clearly visible by his face expression was cheer anger which changed into shock as he saw the same girl hitting a boy below the bed as he was passing dirty comments on her trying to touch her in wrong way ...

looking at the girl with astonishment since her face was depicting soo much innocence n beautiful her eyes were …depicting pureness like the sea …. he was lost in his thought when suddenly the thing stricked him ….what the hell am I doing ….watching a girl since half an hour ….bull shit  … then he saw her coming towards him putting her heads phone back ….

Shuddering his thoughts he went away from thr without even looking back at her …

After jogging the girl went back to her house collecting the milk n newspaper from the door steps ..

Putting the milk on gas …n then after warming the milk she went to have a shower …

Coming out standing in front of the mirror combing her hairs ….

Girl : so Miss. Geet Handa now starts a new battle of life …ab apne poorane flirt boss se bachne ke liye aapne job tou chor di …par new job dhundni pare gi ….Chopra's ki offer achi hai …mien short list bhi hogayi hoon …now hope ye final interview bhi theek thak hojaye waise tou I didn't like that cheap show off girl taking my interview but still ….dekhte hai what more life has in its store for me ….




PRECAP : second meeting ...n oopss maan burst out at her ...Ouch


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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 7:32am | IP Logged
awesome update 
so it was geet who changed maan's life in a good way 
oh no i wanted geet to work in maan's office not in chopra's 
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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 7:53am | IP Logged
nice part...
that line said by geet was soo gud... so MSK was outcime of that..
geet joining maans company... yeh toh hona he tha...
waiting for more

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