Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

MG SS:The Dark Angel Of Fate **new thread added** (Page 116)

freya123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 February 2013 at 4:24am | IP Logged
superb  part

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-misty--love- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 February 2013 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sobia4maaneet

hayee finally meri pyalli shweet cutie pie DODO meri story read karing ..
i love u moni darling
glad u r liking it

wanna knw more abt ur view for this story ...

luv ya
Embarrassedaisha kyaTongue
the story is awesome sobi baby...Big smile
baki ki taarif kal..aaj ke liye itni kaafi haiLOLWink

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sobia4maaneet IF-Dazzler

Joined: 03 June 2012
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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 3:04pm | IP Logged

hi all,
kaise hu sab ..?

really v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v... sorry for the delay but its all coz of my studies n health it happened
plss pardon ...
waise bad news yeh hai ke i am having my board exams in next 3 months tou abb se updates will be late much i dont knw may be ill update 2 ..3 update regularly than will be vanished for month tou plss mujhe ghussa mat hona ...
will try my best to update it as long as i can

abhi ke liye enjoy this teaser will try to update ASAP

enjoy reading 

With the help of an old rod maan dropped the basket down with the support of the long rope n the watchman Ramu kaka got hold of it down in the garden ..then maan stood on the top of balcony wall stretching his hand for geet …n with a dead scared face she placed her cold hands in his' …n stood with him at the top of the wall ready to jump …

Thr was a clear fear on geet's face indicating how much scared she is …still she was trying her best to look fine …maan saw her state n held her hand tightly in his hold … thr eyes met and both kept looking at each other ..for a moment thr were soo many questions in maan's eye n soo many mysteries in geet's eyes …yet something that was same PAIN ..may be thr pain …after an ackward silence maan said ..


Maan : don't worry kuch nahi huga ..mien hoon tumhare saath ..

Geet (looking down the ground) : uss hi ka tou darr hai ke aap mere saath hain ..

Maan (confused) : what …geet mujhe tumhari ek bhi baat samajh nahi aati ..

Geet (irritated) : abb iss mien nahi samajh aane wali kya baat hai …definitely aap mujh se badla tou lene hi na mene aapko call par idiot ..jerk …bloody ass hole

ghadde …ullo …jahil gawar …muchtande aur pata nahi kya kya bola …tou


Maan (ammused) : tumhain sach mien lagta hai ke mien tumhain yahanse gira kar tumse unsab batoon ka badla loonga …

Geet (innocently) : han ..loo ge hi ..mujhe pata hai

Maan (smiling) : don't worry nahi lunga ..

Geet : sach mien nahi luge …

Maan (smiling looking at her) : nahi ..nahi lunga ..


For a moment geet just looked at him immune to everything …trying to search something in his words …or may be was trying so say something but words failed her …its was one of the most confusing moments of her life when suddenly she realized that from past soo many minutes she was actually talking with him like she use to …thr fights …nok jhok .. just like that n his backing off from thr fight actually  made her realize he has forgot her … thr friendship coz if  he had been the same Maan …he would have defo killed her by his non stop taunts n accusations for all her words back on call …n with maan's words she came back to reality …

please do leave ur reviews over it ...

sorry for the mistakes ..

i haven't checked it

do hit like button

luv ya


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ylaraib Goldie

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Posts: 1281

Posted: 04 February 2013 at 4:17pm | IP Logged
so cute teaser 
they are ready to jump 
lol geet ne un intensionaly maan ko phir se wo sab kha jo phone pe kaha tha 
wo bhi face to face 

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vrinda22 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
nice teaser

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kiran_rati IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
superb teaser
waiting for the update
plz give regular updates dear
missing ur updates
thanx for the pm

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anupm04 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
Lovely teaser
Update soon
All the best for ur exams

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Rajshree12 Goldie

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
Awesome teaser Sobi...
First time Geet is talking with Maan like herself...
Eagerly waiting for it..

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