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MG SS:The Dark Angel Of Fate **new thread added** (Page 107)

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THE DARK ANGEL 
OF FATE ..!!


PART 11 


Maan : par kyun …agar geet india mien thi tou unlogoon ne aapse kyun chupaya ..

Dadi : yahi tou hum jann'na chahte hain maan ..unn 3 din mien geet ke saath jo kuch huya koi nahi janta …aur aapko wahi pata lagana hai …

humien tou iss baat par hirangi hai ke Raghuveer ne bhi humien kuch bataya …yeh keh kar ke wohh delhi mien hi thay aur geet aaj hi aayi hai ghar …aur na hi geet ne kuch kaha ..
Wohh tou TEJ ki call aayi humien ke geet ghar aagyi hai …par uss waqt geet jis halat mien thi humien khud kuch samajh nahi aaya tha …woh bilkul badal gayi thi maan ..uss ka chehra mano jaise kayi din kuch khaya nahi hoo .. jism par ajeeb nishaan …hum us ko zabardasti hospital lee kar gaye tou wahan humien pata chala ke geet ko kisi ne buhat boori tarha physically torture kiya hai ..
(rape mat samajhna she is referring to beating)


Maan : what the ..dadi aapne uss hi waqt kuch kiya kyun nahi ..mujhe batati ..police ko call karti aise kaise koi …geet ke saath yeh sab kisne kiya ..kuan tha ..Handas ne tou

Dadi : nahi jante hum maan …geet ne humien kasam dee di thi …aur kaha ke Raghuveer ne aur wahan kisine kuch nahi kiya hai …humien kuch samajh nahi aaya …doctors ne geet ko mental pressure se door rehne ko kaha tha …aur phir TEJ ne humse request ki ke hum geet ki darji se baat karke geet ko unke saath Mumbai bhej den unke graduation ke last year complete karne ke liye …
Aur geet mumbai chali gayi Tej ke saath …

Maan : dadi itna sab kuch huya ..aur aapne ek baar bhi mujhe batana zarori nahi samjha ..
Ek baar bhi nahi laga aapko ke mujhe yeh sab kuch jann'ne ka haq hai ..

Dadi : humien maaf kar dijeye maan par hum majboor thay …uss waqt geet kuch bolna nahi chahti thi aur aise mien humien darr tha ke kahin wohh aapse bhi kuch aisa na keh de jo aapko takleef dee ..

Maan : aur jo takleef geet ko sehni pari usska kya dadi ..jis guilt se abb mien guzar raha hoon usska kiya …(in a low dishearted tone) … aapko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha ..mujh se itni bari baat aapko nahi chupana chahiye tha dadi …

Dadi : maan hum jante hain hum galti kar chuke hain …aur iss ka ehsaas humien buhat baad mien huya hai beta ..par abb aur koi rasta nahi tha humare paas … geet jis tarha Delhi aane se bhag rahi hai ..aur hum se sach chupa rahi hai humien darr hai kahin Handa house mien Raghuveer aur Brij geet ke saath kuch galat na kar rahe ho …iss hi liye humien laga ke shayad iss shaddi ke zariye geet aapko sach batayigi …ya fir shayad yeh shaddi humare samne Handa House ka wohh raaz lee aye jo aaj tak hum sab mien koi nahi janta …

Maan : dadi agar geet ne aapko kuch nahi bataya tou mujhe kyun kuch batayegi … dekha tou tha aapne kis tarha behave kar rahi thi sab ke saamne …. Aur Raghuveer uncel ki image kaisi hai commercial world mien aap naa hi sunnein tou acha huga ..

Dadi : maan hum ne dekha bhi aur samjha bhi …agar kuch batoon par hum kuch bolte nahi iss ka matlab yeh nahi ke humien kuch pata nahi …hum bhi iss baat ka andaaza hai ke Raghuveer ne geet ko kabhi apni beeti nahi bulke sirf ek zinmeedari maana hai .. 
Par bete jab tak geet kuch bolti nahi hum kisi ke bhi khilaaf kuch nahi kar sakte …
Aap bhi jante hain …geet ke ek baar kehne par hum Raghuveer aur Brij ka HP aur Delhi dono jaga naam dhool mien mila sakte hain …
Magar problem yahi hai ke geet kuch bolti nahi ..

Maan : dadi maa …aap mujh se abb kiya chahti hain ..

Dadi : bas itna ke aap geet se yeh jaan'ne ki kushish karein ke akhir un 3 din mien geet ke saath huya kiya tha …
Kyun geet london se bina bataye wapis aagayi …
Aur Handa House ki 4 deewari mien kya chal raha hai …

Maan : aapko lagta hai geet mujhe kuch batayegi ..

Dadi : han ..humien poora yaqeen hai maan ..geet agar yeh raaz kisi ko batayegi tou wohh sirf aur sirf aap hi hain …

Maan : par uss ne mujhe kuch bhi kehne ka koi mauqa nahi diya hai dadi ..uss ne tou ..//

Dadi : geet ne aapse iss shaddi se inqaar karne ko kaha hai …right maan ..?

Maan (shocked) : aapko kaise pata ..?

Dadi : pehle bhi ek baar hum ne geet se milne ek larke ko bheja tha Mumbai …Rhaghuveer iss sab ke baare mien kuch nahi jante ..
Yeh humara aur Tej ka plan tha … yeh jaan'ne ke liye ke geet ki life mien koi larka hai ya nahi …humien lagta tha ke shayad london mien kisi break up ki waja se aisa kuch huya hu …though humien aaj tak geet aur aniee se huyi kisi bhi conversation mien aisa laga nahi par fir bhi bas sure hona chahte thay ..

Maan : aur geet ne kiya kara ..?

Dadi : wahi jo aapke saath kara …uss larke ko hi keh diya shaddi se mana karne ko ..

Maan : hmm .. tou abb aap yeh keh rahi hain ke mien yeh shaddi ..rishta …yeh sab drama continue karoon ..Wink

Dadi : han ….aur kisi bhi tarha geet se pata kijeye ke akhir kyun wohh sab se door jana chahti hain …kya huya tha jo geet aniee ko bhi bina bataye uss ko akela chor kar yahan aagayi …

Maan (st) : iss sab ke ilawa aur bhi buhat se sawaal hain dadi …
Buhat se paheliyan jis ka anth sirf geet kar sakti hain …mere har sawaal ka jawaab wohh hi dee sakti hain mujhe ..
Kyun geet ne kabhi mujh se milne ki ya baat karne ki kushish nahi ki …
Kyun jab bhi mien London aaya ..geet mujh se chupti rahi .. akhir kya waja hai jo geet aniee se door chali aayi …
Kya aaj bhi geet mujhe mom dad ki death ki waja manti hain …
Uss ne ek baar bhi mujhe approach nahi kiya …

Mujhe mere sawaloon ke jawaab chahiye geet … 
U will have to answer them …WinkWink



Lost in his own world of riddle n queries he stood thr in front of dadi with a lost expression ..nothing could be comprehend with his facial expression as to what he is thinking about at the moment …making dadi confuse …least she know he has made his mind to get every missing piece of his life from geet …

Dadi (tapping his shoulder) : maan aap sun rahe hian na bete …

Maan : han …han dadi mien sun raha hoon ..

Dadi : maan I know …shayad ..shayad hum yeh sab kar ke galat kar rahe hain but bete Geet utni hi humari zimedaari hai jitne ke Aap Aniee aur Dev …hum unko iss tarha nahi dekh sakte maan …aur hum jante hain sirf ek aap hi hain jo yeh kaam kar sakte hain ..

Maan : dadi plss aap tension mat lejeye …kuch aur ho ya na ho dadi but I promise aaj ke baad koi problem geet tak pohanch nahi paayegi …aur jahan tak in sab sawaloon ki baat tou ..

But before the conversation could go further a loud bang sound made maan stop in his words n both rushed towards the kitchen ..only to see the jelly bottle broken on the floor n aniee standing thr all messed up in b/w the broken glass pieces …with a spoon in her mouth ..



Shocked maan stood paralyzed for a second at the door .. along with dadi n then moved ahead panicked to see aniee stepping over the glass pieces ..

Maan : aniee wait …rok jao

Dadi : aniee yeh kya ..

Maan : dadi relax mien nikalta hoon usko …

Aniee (in tears) : bhai mene jan boj kar nahi kiya ..woh mien ..

Maan (offering his hand with a smile) : its okiee princess ..koi baat nahi ..chalo haath doo n carefully step out of the scattered pieces ..

Sitting on the table ..dadi scolded aniee who was now clinging to maan scared ..

Dadi : aniee aapko kya zarorat thi iss tarha kitchen mien aane ki …ek bread butter lagana tou aata nahi hai aapko …tou yahan aayi kyun aap …hum se kehti ..nakul ko bolati …par aap tou

Maan : bas dadi …ek tou wohh waise hi darri huyi hai aur aap usko hi dant rai hoo …plss chor do usko …wohh tou aapko hi disturb nahi karne ke khayal se try kar rahi thi aur aap bhi ..

Dadi : uff hoo maaf kar dejiye humien ..bhool gaye thay …aapki pyaari aniee ko thorai koi kuch keh sakta hai ..

Aniee (crying) : dadi mene in tentionally nahi kiya ..

Maan (wipping her tears) : han princess mujhe pata hai tum ne intentionally nahi kiya now stop crying ..roona band karo abhi ..
Dadi aap jaiye buhat raat hugayi hai ..soo jaiye ..good night ..

Dadi : han han … jaa rahe hain hum ..

Walking few steps ahead dadi turned only to find maan pacifying his baby sister forgetting all his own worries ..everything ..all that mattered was aniee n her tears ..

Dadi(st) : aniee ki choti si takleef bhi nahi dekh paate na aap maan …bas ek pal laga aapko apna har dukh ..har gham ..har chinta chor kar aniee ke khayaal ke saath ..
Ek waqt tha jab yahi jaga ..yahi toote huye sheshe aur yahi aap thay …bas aniee ki jaga geet khari thi …
Hum umeed hai ke jo parwah kal aapke dil mien geet ke liye thi aaj bhi wahi hogi …


After few minutes in maan's room ..
Aniee was sitting on his bed ..while maan was sitting infront of her on his knees cleaning the wounded cut caused by the minor glass piece ..

Aniee (sniffing) : acha huya aapne dadi ko room mien bhej diya warna abhi tak tou pata nahi mujhe kitna dant parti …

Maan (protruding his neck) : par princess tum itni raat ko kitchen mien kar kya rahi thi ..
Agar kuch hujata tou ..see lag gayi na ..

Aniee (childish voice) : sorry bhai par aapko tou pata hai ….mujhe adhi raat ko bhook lag jati hai …aur upar se aaj who geet ke ghar na dinner mien spice bhi tha tou mene bas thora hi khaya …

Maan : tou aap dadi se keh dete ..wohh wapis aakar aaapko dinner dee deti na ..

Aniee : par uss time mujhe neend aayi thi na ..

Maan (smiling..stood up finishing his task) : okiee baba theek hai …par abb jelly ki bottle tou toot gayi ..abb batao bhook lagi hai abhi ..

Aniee (grinning) : buhat zoor ki ..

Maan : hmm ..tou kya khana hai ..?

Aniee (thinking) : umm ..mujhe na Italian Cheese pasta …

Maan : okiee aap yahin raho ..mien aapke bana deta hoon ..
 
Aniee : okiee bhai ..but aap nakul kaka ki help lee loo na ..

Maan : nahi its okie princess ..nakul servant quarters chala gaya hai ..
N han …take some rest chot lagi hai na ..ill make something for u ..

Aniee : okiee bhai ..dont worry ill do nothing naughty with ur stuff ..

Maan (st) : I hope so meri naughty princess …but guess the chances r v.less ..LOL

As he said ..the moment maan left the room a naughty plan pooped in aniee's mind n she grabbed maan's cell phone n dialed some ones number ..



The other side geet who was bye now in her bed sleeping calmly was awakened n took her call …in half sleep chk the caller id n was amused to see it unknown  …rubbing her eyes she picked it …

Geet : helloo ..who is this .??

But thr was no response from the other side …n she cut off the call in her sleep ..putting the duvet back on her face ..

this continues till next 20 minute until geet was  wide awake ..cursing profanities to the un-known caller …

n here maan came back to the room with a worried face ..making aniee shocked ..

Aniee : bhai aap itna jaldi aa bhi gaye ..pasta ban gaya ..?

Maan : umm ..wohh aniee actually fridge mien cheese khatam hugaya hai ..

Aniee (with a sad face) : par ..

Maan : sorry princess ..nakul se bhi pocha mene utha kar ..ghar mien hai hi nahi cheese ..no option kuch aur khana hai tou tell me ill arrange ..

Aniee (after few moments of silence …with a wide grin) : han ..hum geet ko bolte hain wohh bana degi ..

Maan (surprised) : what …aniee its 3am at night woh sugayi hugi princess ..aapko jo khana hai tell me ill arrange …

Aniee : nahi bhai ..geet nahi soyi hai ..i know aur aap ek baar geet ke haath ka pasta kha kar tou dekho …its worlds best pasta …geet se acha koi bana hi nahi sakta …

Maan (hesitant remembering all what dadi told him was actually not prepared to face her at the moment but can't say in front of her) : han but iss waqt kisi koo uthana aniee …acha nahi huga na ..

Aniee : arre hum kisi ko thorai utha rahe hain …hum tou geetu ko bol rahe hian ..it our gudya bhai …ek kaam karte hain hum geet ko call karte hain …aur agar us ne mana kiya tou we'll have something else ..

Maan : but aniee …

Aniee : bhai plss na …bas ek call ..



Maan : okiee roko mien karta hoon ..but sirf 2 bells ..nahi uthaya tou ill cut it ..

Aniee (brimmed in happiness) : han theek hai karo jaldi se ..

Maan : pehle mujhe number tou batao madam anvesha khurana ..TongueTongue

Aniee : uhh bhai 1stly don't call me that ..n 2ndly  geet ka number aapki dailed list mien hai ..

Maan : meri dailed list mein …aur wohh bhi geet ka number ..how come ..?Tongue

Anie (bit her tongue) : umm wohh choro na bhai …aap dial tou karo …

Maan : aniee kya kara tum ne ..Ouch

Aniee : mene kya kara bhai ..Tongue

Maan : u know what I really know u in n out …spit it now ..LOL

Aniee : kuch bhi nahi bas thora sa tang kiya uss lady hitler ko …after all mujhe akele london mien chor kar aayi wohh yuhi tou nahi choron gi ussko mien …LOL
Par aap yeh choro aur geet ko call karo ..

Maan : umm okiee karta hoon ..

While on the other side ..geet was turning from left to right in side her duvet as due to so many calls she lost her sleep …n now was wide awake cursing the caller …clutching her cell in her hand ready to pick the call in 1st ring …

Geet (frustrated) : ghadda ullo …meri neend uradi khutte ne …aab call aya na tou bataongi iss majnu ko …nani na yaad dila di na tou mera naam bhi GEET HANDA nahi ..LOL

N the very next second her cell buzzed …n she picked up without even noticing who is callin n started blasting in full rage …

Geet : u stupid ..idiot ..jerk …bloody ass hole …ghar mien maa behan nahi hai jo adhi raat ko larkiyon ko tang kar rahe ho …ghadde …ullo …jahil gawar …muchtande kahin ke …samajhte kya tum log …dimag naam ki koi cheez hai ke nahi …jitne ka balance barbaad karte hu na ek din in sab fazool phranks par utne mien hi kisi begger ka din bhar ka khana hota hai … u bloody freak …listen I am telling …dobara call kiya na tou sach mien phone mien ghuss kar aisi halat karongi zindagi bhar aapni maa ko mosi bole ga ..samjha …

She stopped when she was out of breath …n then said ..

Geet (amused) : tum kuch bologe nahi …

Maan (gritting his teeth) : tum kuch bolne do gi tou koi kuch bolega na MISS GEET ..




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PLS READ THE NOTE BELOW ..

PRECAP :-
oppsii ...romeo in juliets garden looking to enter in her room's gallery ...but look she is also waiting for him ...Embarrassed LOL

keep thinking ..

ME WAITING FOR UR REVIEWS N LIKES ...


Edited by sobia4maaneet - 06 January 2013 at 12:56pm

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~~ NOTE ~~


so finally i ve completed the past narration ..
pheww kitna dimag khaya mera iss past ne ...Ouch
ba ba re ..mar gayi mien tou ..Dead

but chalo i am happy to see some new readers here ..Big smile

so here it ...i dont know what u all r expecting from this ..but just wanna tell u here geet is going to show in numerable shades of her character ...Embarrassed

n maan ...well wait in watch to see ...Wink


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hope u all r enjoying the mystery ride here ...lolxx

sorry the story is that way  only ...n all the bits n pieces will be revealed slowly ..
n i can only hope for u to be patient ...n enjoy the real FATE GAME ..

so people get ready for some spicy maaneet moment ...Wink


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sorry for this late reply
I'm really sorry

awesome update

all I can say is
I love u aniee

wow wow

oops

he he


I'm speechless

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Wow..awesome

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awesome update
annieLOL bechara maan got gallis from geetLOL

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Just loved it

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So finally we know all d past from dadi's POV but Geet's perspective still remains hidden.
But I m paitent,and waiting for truth to reveal itself.

Loved d Annie-Maan bonding.It brought tears in my eyes.

And den d call,hilarious dialogues by Geet.

Loved d update.

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superb update
 
me waiting to know why and wat is with geet tat she is avoiding maan

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