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This one is for all those who were asking for a happy story from me Embarrassed' so here it goes a story full of emotionsBig smile n maaneet mahi momentsEmbarrassed n itsy bitsy nok jhoksTongue n..n..n a bit of twists n thrillers ..WinkEmbarrassed


...The Sun Rose, Determined To Torn Me Apart '
...By the Time It Was Dark, I Lost it '
...Lost The Battle Of Life '.n
...From That Day I Stand '
...With My Heart Full Of Hurt '
...I am a Broken Soul '.

Almighty send him as a ray of happiness in her domed life ...
but she didn't wanted any ray of light to highlight her pain ...her remorse ...

hidding herself in a shell from the whole world ...she was in the darkness of past ...Ouch

but destiny tied two opposite people living in two different parts of the world  ...

they were made to live a relation of compromise ...which turned into a bond of faith ...later they became eachothers best friend ... n then in the mid of truth n friendship ...started an eternal love story ...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

but as it is said ...every time two lovers comes 2gether ...fate n time playes its game n tests them ...

a moment came when she was the happiest person living on earth ... with her love beside her ...the very moment the same destiny which made them together ...parted them ...

he left her ...left her foreever ...

now what will she do ..??

will she fight back her fate ...her destiny ...the whole world which is now standing against her ...???

or will she again hide herself in the same shell of darkness ...will she fight for what she thinks is right or the two love birds will be seperated forever ...??



The most elegible Bachelor of India ..
A shwerd Bussiness Man '
King of Indian Construction World '
Looks for which every girl is ready to die for ..
Intelligence with which he rules the world on his own '
People knows him as a rough n rutheless bussiness man ..
For his family he is the most caring brother 'grand child n 
A support system to the whole family '
He can go to any extent just to bring a single smile on his love ones ..
No one knows' WHAT or shall I say WHO will be the one to become his reason of smile '

... The Sorrows, Pain n Hurt ...
... And The Wounds That Could Never Be Healed ...
... Is What He Carry With Him ...
... As He Went For A Deep Sleep ...


A girl Came from London belongs to a small town Hoshyarpur n now living in Mumbai'
Done with her Architect Designing '.
She is a perfect blend of Beauty with Brains '
A beutiful pearl hidding herself in the darkness of shell '
She has everything in her life '
Friends 'family 'luxury 'but still
She have nothing 'for her everything is fake '
Running from all n everyone in her life '.she is hidding herself in the darkness of past '
Past which is un-known ..
N then came a person in her ' who made her reliaze the worth of life n bought the long lost smile back on her angel face '

...I am an Empty Shell ...
...Not Happy, Nor Sad ...
...Neither Angry, Nor Mad ...
...Only Things That I have ...
...One Is My Own Dark Fate ...
...And The Other Is My Pain ...
...My Two Great n Only Friends ...

Savitri Devi Khurana 

Maan's dadi ..eldest in the Khurana Family '
Loves her grand childs a lot ..
Not much worried about the two younger ones ..
Since she knows their elder bro is always there for them even before they call him ..
But worried for her Eldest grand-child who seems to be least intrested about his happiness '
N is searching a good match for MAAN '

Anvesha Khurana 

Youngest in the Khurana family '.
The most pampered sister in the world I suppose ' by non-other than her dear Maan Bhai ..
Living in London to complete her education ...
Not have a lot of friends ..
Her best friend is non-other than Geet '
A naughty '.chater box ..loves her Maan Bhai the most in the world '

Dev Singh Khurana 

He is a mystry for his family ..
Not very talkative '
Calm n compose '.never express himself to others very well ..
A handsome hunk living in london along with his younger sister Anvesha ...
Currently handling the bussiness in London with the help n guidance of his Maan bro '

Palavi n Raghav Handa 

Geet's chacha n chachi ( chotti maa n chachu ) '..and her gurdians ..
Lives in delhi '
A very happy Romantic couple their early 40's 
Holds  a good status in society ..
Loves Geet more than anything '
Have a Son 'elder brother of geet TEJ HANDA '

Other characters TEJ'ADI ..PINKY 'Sasha 'Nakul 'Brij 'Darji 'are same as GHSP '

Some other characters are also in this SS but will introduce when needed '

as the story has revealed some bits me editing this CS ..
Handa's described here are just what they pretend to be in front of the world ...but lots is hidden in them yet to be revealed ...

*~ BackGround Of Story ~*

Handas n Khuranas are family friends ...Savitri devi n her Husband ( dada ji we can say ) helped handas in their bad times so they respects her a lot '.

Dadi maa loves geet a lot '

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geet's parents have died ?? 'will reveal as the story progress '
maan parents are also no more 'will reveal as the story progress '

*************************** n *******************************

geet is currently living In mumbai '.reason will be reaveled with her past '

anvesha n geet are best friends since they were together from the childhood n aniee is just like a younger sister to geet but no more in touch since 2 years after geet came back from London..

geet has completed her Architect Designing 1 years back n now she is searching for a job ..


okiee so this was the Prologue n Character Sketch for my 2nd MG SS'.

May be some of u will have lots of confusion regarding Geet's character '.so for them I can just say everything will be revealed as the story will progress so dnt worry about that '

There were some bits of info which was required for me to give u as I was confused hw to convey all this ..That's y this Background was needed '


Thanks a lot for all your Support 'Liking ..n.. Appreciation for my 1st MG SS  Ek Duje Ke Vaaste '

Now please do let me know if u want me to continue with this new idea of mine '

N I will be waiting to know how many of u still wants me to write this story Smile

Plsss all the people who are here as a silent reader 'do leave ur comment 'just even one word ..but do let me know '. As u will be able to read this one ONLY if u all will comment n let me know if I should continue this or not 'so plss it's a humble request to u all ..if u want this story plss let me know through your likes n comments '

Hug'.'...~~~***LUV SOBIA***~~~'...Hug

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 20 March 2013 at 3:50pm

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awesome prologue dear and nice it yaar cont soon...

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interesting concept

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nic concept

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Nice cs n pro...
Hmm geet hs sum past...ok
bt the thing m confused abt n also worried is dat maan left her n dat to 4 ever???
Bt y??????
Updte soon

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congrats on the new story
awesome prologue
nice cs
cont soon...
thanx for the pm

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