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ArHi FF!! Event Horizon - Ch 8(A), Sep 11, Pg 25 (Page 4)

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 12:35am | IP Logged
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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 1:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by CynicalNoob


QT, besides the yawn-o-holic plot, the writing is impressive. I particularly
like the flow and the language. I hope that the plot turns out to bebe more interesting than the characters.Welcome to the world of writing.
CN
PS- Also, I appreciate your age from 9 to 16


CN I think it might be worth your while holding back your cynicism for a while. The story has barely begun, how do you know it is an yawn-o-holic plot?
Makes me wonder if you are the author of this story under the guise of Quiet Thoughtful. And your comment is aimed at getting people to defend the story? Now, now that is not very clever is it?

Apologies, some of your cynicism seems to have rubbed off on me.

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 1:11am | IP Logged
^^^ agree, it's (the cynicism) sorta contagious...LOL

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 2:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Japonica

Originally posted by CynicalNoob


QT, besides the yawn-o-holic plot, the writing is impressive. I particularly
like the flow and the language. I hope that the plot turns out to bebe more interesting than the characters.Welcome to the world of writing.
CN
PS- Also, I appreciate your age from 9 to 16


CN I think it might be worth your while holding back your cynicism for a while. The story has barely begun, how do you know it is an yawn-o-holic plot?
Makes me wonder if you are the author of this story under the guise of Quiet Thoughtful. And your comment is aimed at getting people to defend the story? Now, now that is not very clever is it?

Apologies, some of your cynicism seems to have rubbed off on me.


That's called being stupid, not cynic. Worse yet, you could have called it "fraudulent self deprecating sympathy shit" which I don't do. I call it as I see it.

I honestly don't want a talented writer like QuiteThoughtful to write Mary Sue and Gary Stu as her main leads. Currently, they reek of being like that. So it was just a friendly jolt to wake up and smell the coffee - you know? like writer to writer sort of thing?

CN.

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Am loving the banter more than the story..;) keep going Wink

Though the story is so cliched the writing style is good and perky..;)


Edited by Onlooker - 22 July 2012 at 5:21am

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 5:49am | IP Logged
@CynicalNoob *shakes head*                                                               @QuiteThoughtful, sorry for spamming your thread like this, but where have you disappeared? People are posting such strong views/comments on your thread, won't you come and atleast 'like' the comments... Anyways, waiting for the next update... :-)

Edited by Happy-go-lucky - 22 July 2012 at 5:51am

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 6:25am | IP Logged
lovely.. please continue soon.. very nicely written.. great job.. Clap

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 6:35am | IP Logged
this is amazing...
khusi is indeed khusi...loved the way u etched her character!
arnav and khusi starcrossed seriously loved their interaction...luking very much to this...plzz pm me when u update!

a friend request on ur way!

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