Note: Hi Guys! How are you all doing? I have been traveling and...surviving redundancy. Yeah redundancy of two very senior folks I had to work with whose knowledge can be found in second year engineering syllabus. So I was stuck between 'let me dig a hole right here and die' and 'the technical solution you provided makes Commodore 64 look like futuristic technology'. Anyway I am back, embracing my city once again and desperately trying to find sometime to breathe slowly, braid my hair and...write.
So here is the plan. I don't have too much of time on my hands to write very long updates so I thought I will post small updates frequently - say once a day or once in two days. This way the story gets its own flow and dynamics is manageable.
Do you guys this it's a wise idea? Tell me in your comments. I get all gooey when I see a comment. I mean comments on my posts on Comic Vine is great but on IF - its just phenomenal!
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On to story now!
Chapter 4a:
It took her all of seven minutes to realize that the silence
in her house had premeditated expectation for her presence. Her sister was in
corner folding clothes her hands mechanical and her mind elsewhere. She called
her not once or twice but four times.
"Oh. Khushi, you are awake," Payal said monotonously and
went back to her chore. It wasn't an anticipated response and it made Khushi
bit nervous.
"Is everything alright?" Khushi asked noting her sister's
slumped shoulder. Payal's hands stilled. She twisted the towel she had picked
up to fold contemplating on an answer. Finally she sighed.
"You know this house's owner is related to our neighbors
back home, right?" Khushi nodded at that. "They were here yesterday and we were
talking which led to them raking up the events which happened months ago. Everyone
was upset after that." Payal said softly. Khushi swallowed. Upset, was probably
a tame word here.
"Why didn't you tell me last night?" She objected. If she
had known…if she had known…then what? Could she have undone the past? She
breathed out hard and long.
"I did tell you Khushi," Payal turned around and said her
eyes sharp and her voice steel. "But you were far too indulged in your idyllic romanticism to recognize the
tragedy of reality," she threw the clothes in her hands on floor and walked out
of the door, slamming to punctuate her point better.
Tears sprung in Khushi's eyes at Payal's words. They weren't
untrue but they were…harsh. It was her choice, her decision, her words which
had brought them to this state and she never once repented her actions. Dowry
was and forever is a social evil; she would never let her family succumb to it.
Unfortunately her family did end up succumbing to bankruptcy
and yapping tongues which drove them to the edge of catharsis. The dam had
burst and her father accepted reality and sold everything that people were
ready to buy for a reasonable sum.
She stood under shower fully still in her nightdress and
allowed the cold water to cool the heat in her veins. Disappointment, anger,
intense dislike and sudden weariness flushed through her system along with
water. She cried for her sister's halted wedding, her mother's recoiled face at
a relative's insensitive remark, her father's sheer disappointment, her aunt's
disbelief and her own ideals. Ideals sometimes could lead to drastic actions
and even amidst accusation and hostility, she stood by them.
In her tears, in her heart break and in general coldness
that surrounded her, she stood by her ideals.
*****
To be continued.
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