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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Hi gals
how are you all
first I am really sorry for the late update. sorry I was held up but I promise I will give you one more update soon. Smile

ok A lot ppl having confusions. so Am trying to answer some of the questions

1: ANGEL is an adopted girl. Maan adopted her when she was 1 yrs old.
2: Angel is 11 or 12 years old not a kid
3: Why he left Khurana's
well thats a secret and a very few ppl know abt it. It will be revealed soon.
4: IT IS A CONTROVERSIAL SUBJECT. No one on the IF tried this. I think so. but it most of the incidents of the strory are from a true story. but with differnt end I changed the end. my grand ma told me this.
so bear with it
and  read it.
tell me if u like it   
   
           Part 4: Messing with business                                             Tycoon????????


She spat fire and pull Angel toward her "Go and inform yours stubborn and arrogant friend that Savitri singh khurhana has taken her granddaughter Angel singh kgurana with her. He can pick her at 7 in the evening from KM and please don't come before time because we will not be there before 7." Saying this she spared a glance to Veer and escorted Angel towards the exit and the other khurana clan followed her. Veer and radhika were standing their worried how to tell Maan abt this.

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In the office Maan is highly pissed off because of the labour strike and the delay in the project is adding fule to his Anger. Poor Adi is the direct victim of his Anger and now he is again going to put his foot on Axe mean he is going to maan's cabin. Adi knocked in the door and and entered in the lion's den oops I mean in Maan's cabin. "What??" Maan groaned furiously. Adi said in a serious tone "Sir the union leader is here. He is stubborn sir. He says labours will not work unless their demands are not fulfilled." "I don't know adi why I hired you then cant you handle a mare union leader. Tell them their demands invalid. We already are paying them more than the usual pays of labours. What they want now. Its not the union leader. Am I right Adi. Who is behind this Adi. Tell me the damn name."  he roared in anger Adi shivered in fear to sense the anger in his voice and said just a word "Arun verma" " Arun verma???" Maan repeated the name in disbelief and asked "why" . "Sir he too was interested in the deal. He too submitted his quotation but when tender opened we won it. So he wants to spoil our name."

"Are you sure Adi. Is the news true? You know the consequences if the news turns out swrong." there was a chillness in his voice. "NNNo sir theee news is hundred percent truer. Varma is behind this but sir we don't have time to confront him. The workers are on strike sir and you know its very important for us to give delivery on time. And we can't accept workers demand because if we do this tomorrow they will come with another demand. What to do sir."

Maan was also worried as the things were getting worse by every passing minute.  He was in a deep thought suddenly he looked at Adi. "Adi todayis the auction of the land we are interested. Who is representing us there?"  Adi looked at his boss like he has lost his mind here he is telling him abt the strike going on in his factory and he is asking abt the land but he knows that Boss is the lion of jungle and he can ask anything. "Sir Kyshap is representing us there." Maan has a very meaningful smile on his face. Call him and asked him to b on blue tooth. I want the live coverage of the auction. He asked to adi. "Yes sir," Adi said and in next five minutes Maan was staring the screen in front of him displaying the whole view of hall where the auction was taking place. He noticed Arun verma sitting there in the second row. Just then the auction started. The starting price was 54 million. It was a government land on a very gud location. Maan wanted this because he wanted to build a farm house there but rumor was that he wanted it because to start new steel mill there. Maan never accepted or denied it. That's why Arun was highly interested in it.

"Listen me carefully kyshap. Just do wat I am saying. Put your Bluetooth and be sure that Arun and other notice you talking on phone call me with the name and I will tell you what and how much you have to offer. Understand," Maan gave the instructions to Kyshap. "Yes sir" he replied promptly. Maan start telling him the amount he has to offer for the land. Arun taught that Maan is highly interested in the land so he increased the amount every time SGIS offered some. The land price reached to 189 million. Even the event manger was surprised by this because the expected sale price was 60 million. Maaan offered 190 million and Arun immediately added 10 more and offer 201 million for the land. That's what Maan was waiting for. He asked kyshap to stop and not to offer more than Arun. Arun looked at Kayshap with a victorious smile but soon his smile faded when he found Ktshap smiling back at him giving a thumb up to him. He became restless the auctioneer started counting and with every sec Arun's heartbeats dropped and finally the land was announced to be his. He was dumbstruck ppl around him congratulate him but he was lost. Kyshap too congratulate him and gone. Arun was sitting there lost. Why the hell he want Maan to b a looser and for that he bought a 201 million worth land which isuseless. Oh no how he will cover this loss now. The land is useless for him. While signing the papers he was sure that he has invited trouble to interfere in Sarman's life.

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In the Mall

Savitri singh khurana escorted Angel to their car but Angel refused. Savtri saw her with questioning eyes.

"Dad will not approve this. Sorry but I can't go against my Dad's wish. Plzz." She pleaded. Savtri smiled and patted her cheek. "You love your dad a lot. Aren't you? I am happy that his daughter loves him so much that she can do anything for his sake. He is lucky to have a darling daughter like you" she said caressing her cheeks. "No I think I am lucky to have a father like him. He is the best Dad of the world." Angel Said promptly. "Ok ok both of you are lucky." Meher assured her "Let's go now" she started walking again but Angel refused again. Mehr observed her expressions fpr some time and then turend to her MIL saying "As stubborn like her father. Hain na maa" then she turned to Angel and said "Your Dad will not Angry I promise and we are your Dadi na so we have rights on you. I am using my same right so be a good girl now and lets go your chahu's and Chachi's will b happy to see you." Angel stopped protesting and silently followed to her Dadi and pardadi. She too wants to meet his dad's family.

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 In office

Maan got the news that varun got the land and he was sure that he trapped Arun in his own trap and he is nearing to bank corrupt. He deserves this how dare he mess with Sarman so nowits time to face consequences. He was busy in his thoughts when he got a call from Veer. H e picked the phone thinking that both Radhika and Angel will be teasing him and he wants Maan to rescue him from the devils opps I mean Angels. "So both the girls are not in the mode to forgive you Mr. Singhania. Well I think you deserve this. Why don't you b punctual for once" he was saying while smiling and imagining the plight of Veer in front of two beautiful girls. He was about to say something more when Veer cut him off "Maan" Maan sensed anxiety in his voice and got alerted "Is everything alright Veer??? Why are you sounding worryingly??? Angel and Radhika are alright na." Maan got panicked and almost shouted on the phone. Veer feared his anger and was in dilemma what to tell him when Radhika took the phone from his hand and said "Veerji who Mehar aunti and dadi maa took Angel with them." But before she complete her words Maan roared in anger "What are you saying Radhika. How dare they. What both of you were doing? How dare they touch my daughter? Wait I am coming there. No I am going to take Angel back" he said while pushing his chair back and started walking when Radhika's voice stopped him, "Dadi maa said that you can pick Angel at 7 in the evening rom KM. She said not to come before 7 Because they will not be at home." Radhika finished and Maan's anger had no limits. He yelled, "How dare they do this. What do they think I will fail to know where my daughter is. No they are wrong and they took a very wrong step by putting their hands on my daughter. I will not spare any of them. They have to face me The Sarman." He cut the call in anger and immediately dialed another number when someone answered he said without any greeting " I want the current location of Khurana's. You have 10 minutes. After 10 minutes I want the address. Understand??? Your time starts now". Maan cut he call and start pacing to and fro in the office. After sometimes his cell buzzed. He picked the call. "Sir the khurana's are heading towards their farm house and Angel singh is also with them". Maan cut the call and storm out from his office. He was hell angry. Don't know what he is going to do with Khurana's who dared to mess with him

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Suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder. She froze with fear and turned around trembling but could not control her shriek to see the person standing in front of her. She tried to run from there but the Man grabbed her hand and started pulling her towards the cleaning in the middle of the jungle. Girl was continuously trying to push him away but Man was stronger than her. All her efforts are of no use. suddenly a trunk of tree hit her hard on her knee, she lost her balance and fell down. The Man did not bother to pick her up and start dragging her towards the cleaning. At this state of her she was trying hard not to harm the bundle she was holding. She was trying her best to save it. Though it was impossible but still she wants to fight the losing battle. Fortunately the man did not notice the bundle. Her back was hurting because of stone throns and branches of the trees but she was kless bothered abt that. She want to save the bundle at any cost. Even at the cost of her own life. She saw some more people standing there waiting for her. No I cant lose hope. I have to do it. Not for me but for this. She saw the bundle lovingly and pick a stone from the land. She hit the man hard with the stone. He loosed his grip from her wrist. That was enough for her. She stood up at once and start running again. Main while man was recovered from the shock so he chased her and caught her within a minute. He slapped her hard that she hit the ground. "Bit** what do you think you will deceive us." Then he noticed the bundle in her hand "you are doing all because of this. What do u think you will be able to save it. No I will destroy it and YOU WILL NOT BLE TO SAVE IT. I WILL DO IT INFRONT OF YOUR EYES. Watch it now, saying this he throw the bundle on the ground. The girl shirked "nooo, plz don't do that. I beg you plz don't". Man laughed hysterically hit the bundle hard with his sword.The thing the bundle contained was now all over the sword. The girl ran towards the man but a lady held her tightly. "Nooo you cant do that. No ooo Maa" but lady held her more tightly and closed her mouth with her hand. She looked at the lady. Lady shook her head in no and lowered her head. "nooo" the girl shirked  again  she saw the man coming towards her with the same sowrd, she knows its her turn now but she did not moved or try to save her. Man raised his sword in the air to kill the girl suddenly someone shirked again "nooo"

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Precap: Encounter with Khurana's

               Why I am a daughter????

                                   Pre: Part 4 Messing with Buisness tycoon????

                                   Next:  Part 5

Author's note

Ok most of u will may be disappoint with the update. But I really want to show the business man side of Maan that how can he do everything to take revenge from the ppl who dare to mess with him.

I hope you will like it Smile 


 




Edited by LonelyPlannet - 02 October 2012 at 7:50am

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 11:12am | IP Logged
wow,,amazing.
love it

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
update wow
nice part
thanks for the note
but me still confused
who is the girl why she is running
who is the man
wat is the she is trying to protact nd why?
Lovely part
where is Geet

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
amazing update
who is the girl??
is she geet???

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
Awesome Part !! Big smile !!

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
awesome update.
but I am hell confused with the mystery of the girl.

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 5:27pm | IP Logged
will geet n maan meet...why maan is angry on khuranas means his own family...

 beautiful update...

loved it sooo much...

thank u very  much fr d lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting eagerly...

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awesome update...

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