Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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LonelyPlannet Senior Member

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 7:02am | IP Logged
well hi to me only because no one knows me and either I am not going to introduce my self Tongue. Now U will say Attitude yes I have and I am proud of it
well This is my first FF and the MAIN REASON of writing this FF is
I WANT TO IMPROVE MY ENGLISH. and I am writing this FF for myself so not expecting any likes or comments. Now the question will arise in your mind Why MAANEET. I am in love with them. I believe they are a magical couple and I love them so decided to write my first FF on Maaneet
I hope u will bear it Wink

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The thunder storm struck the country. It was raining heavily. It was said that it is the worst storm the city faced ever. Roads were empty not even a soul dared to peek outside from the cozy environment of their homes. A boy in his early seventies was running madly on the road. Its look like he is not in his senses because the heavy rain failed to stop him, to put some sense in him. His eyes were blank, showing no emotions. It looks like life tested him a lot and he was not able to take the pain he was suffering from.

He fell on his knees in the middle of the road crying loudly. "Why me? why me God? Why u choose me to suffer this pain?? Why you show me the real face of life and relations?? I was happy in my own world. Why u did this to me??? Why??? Look at me Yesterday I was the happiest person on the earth. I had a family. I had some very beautiful relations. I had a life to live. I had dreams. And see today I am empty handed. No one is here to see my grief to feel my pain. Why u snatched everything, every relation from me??? Am I that bad??? Why don't you snatch this life??? Why don't you take away my breath??? What is the purpose of my life now??? How I am supposed to live now??? Why should I breathe??? For whom should I breathe??? I don't want this life. You took everything from me, my family, my dreams, my friends and my love. Why u left these heartbeats with me??? Why don't you end this??? No I am not going to live like this." He wiped his tears and rose up with a firm determination in his eyes. "I am not going to live like this." He looked up the dark sky and laughed hysterically, "You snatched everything from me. I am snatching the last I have my breaths, my life, my soul. Yes I am going to finish that u start. I am going to end this game of yours. How are you going to stop me now???? Let's see how???" He smirked when he saw a high speed truck coming towards him. It seems that the driver lost his control of the vehicle; He stood calmly watching the most beautiful scene of his life, watching the most awaited moment of his life, watching the death approaching him. He was near to his end. He was going to end all the pains he suffered till now. Finally he came to the end. He closed his eyes in peace, "this is the End of me" and smiled. The truck was few feet away from him now.


Same time somewhere in a small village of the far region of the country, in a small room only lightened with a lantern a young girl in her early teenage is screaming. It looks she is in sheer pain. Two women surrounded her. Atmosphere is tensed and the storm is making it more horrible for the girl. "She is in pain. We have to do something soon otherwise it will be difficult for her to survive." said the younger one to the other. "Hmm yes u r right. It's becoming difficult by every passing minute. We have to act fast." Saying this woman put her hand on the girl's forehead and said "It's up to u now my daughter. Don't lose hope. Stay with us plz" but the Girl was screaming in pain. The pain was unbearable for her. "I can't" she said in a weak voice "I can't". Just then a knock on the door broke their conversation; a lady came in "why is it taking so much time??? Why did not she deliver it yet???" she asked in frustration. The young lady snapped, "I told you she is young enough for all this. She can't carry a baby at the first place, forget to deliver a child, she is 14 only. And by the way we can save only one mother or child, choice is yours, whom you want to save." She said bitterly and put an assuring hand on the young girl. The lady was shocked to react suddenly there was a knock on the door again and a man's voice came "save the girl, we don't want the child. Let the bas****** die." "No" the young girl screamed with pain, "You can't do this. It's my child. What will I say to HIM??? No I want this child." "Shut up. No matter what if the baby survived I will kill him with my bare hands. I swear I will" the man shouted and called his wife outside. The lady gave a sigh put an assuring hand on girls forehead kissed her forehead muttered sorry to the girl and followed his husband's lead.

After hours of pain finally she delivered the baby. "Is the baby alive???" asked the girl faintly. "Yes" she got answer. He will kill my baby, what I will say to him sorry I can't save my child" she looked at the locket in her hand and muttered sorry again. The doctor took the locket in her hand and get shocked, "is he the father" she asked briskly. The girl nodded. "Then this baby should be dead" saying this the doctor put his hand on the little soul's mouth to muffle her cries and the young girl fainted not to bear the pain of her own child's death    

Edited by LonelyPlannet - 20 July 2012 at 7:28am

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Prologue Above 
CS Below

Edited by LonelyPlannet - 21 September 2012 at 8:16am

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 7:31am | IP Logged
   Generate Your Own Glitter Graphics at
here is the CS

Sardar Maan Singh
He is Sardar Maan Singh a well known business man, Totally self made person. The owner of SGIS Industries and one of the most powerful persons of city or should I say the country. although he is a famous person but keeps very low profile. Very reserved but loved his daughter a lot. He says he has only one daughter left as family and very few friends. He wears a ring in his left ear but Nobody knows the reason and even no one dare to ask.  He is a man of few words for others but very different person when he is with his daughter and friends. he says he earned very few people and they are his life. He says his daughter is his family but there are few more people who acclaim him as family.
Lets Meet his Friend and Family(?). well dont know the truth but lets meet them

Angel Singh
She is the daughter of Maan and a real Angel for him. She came to his life when he had no one with him. She is Jaan of his DaDa. Maan can do anything for her nd she loves her dada a lot. She is Adopted but Maan loves her more than himself. She is ray of happiness for him.

Veer singhania and Radhika Sanghania
no no its not a pose for the camera. its the reality. They are married but fight like kids. No no u r taking it wrong again. its not a forced marriage. the truth is its a Love marriage but if u spend a day with them u will came to knw that 23 hr out of 24 they spend in fighting and leg pulling of each other but its another fact that their 1 Hr of love is so strong that they don't need any one else. they are happy in thieir ways, Best frnds of Maan actually after Angel his most precious possession. Their fights irritate him but now he is used to it. They are frnds from school a group of 5 actually fantastic five

Armaan Malik
here is the Fourth member of Fantastic Five name is Armaan but only hospital staff call him armaan for frnds he is Amy. he is cool nd by his looks u cant judge he is a doctor but well he is. a flirt but not serious one looking for his dream girl so most of the time sings " Meray Sapno ki Rani kab aaye gi tu" but she is still out of picture so here our Amy sees her Sapnoo ki rani in every girl around. 

Lets meet the ppl who claims to b his family
Dadi Savitri Singh Khurana
Sweet lady old by age but young by heart. not like typical Dadi has maintained herself. love her grand children a lot. often taunt her son abt his look and used to say that she looks young than him and its true.
Ranjeet and Mehar Singh Khurana
Ranjeet is a business man and have a construction company name KC. He used to b a jolly man but one day just one day took everything from him. He says, " just 24 hrs of a fateful day take 20 years of my age". Her mother taunt him that he doesn't care of himself and that she looks young than him.
Mehar just like her name a very loving nd caring lady. She is gynecologist actually the best gyne specialist. She loves her family a lot especially her sons and more than sons her Daughter in laws. Actually she wants a girl but she had only sons but she is happy now because she got daughters in her Daughter in Laws. so give them every kind of favour legal illegeal. she is a darling MIL nd very caring DIL. She hates lies but she is repenting her one mistake. one mistake which took her most beautiful relation from her but she is determined one day she will get her son back.

Harjeet and shalini shingh khurana
The elder son and DIl of kurana's. he works with his dad and Shalini is a doctor child specialist. They have a sone name Harshan Singh khurana. Shaan is Jaan of whole family. Every one loves him a lot.

Yash and Meera Singh khurana
Yash runs a production house and produce some gud serials and movies. He is not interested in family business so he choose this line for himself happily married to Meera who is interior designer by profession. They want to enjoy life so don't want baby soon.

and here is the prince of khurana's Maan singh Khurana. well I think u already met him yeh Our sardar Maan singh and for business community SARMAN is the youngest son of the family. but because of some unknwn reason family disown him or shld I say He disowned his family. this is a mystery. God knws  
so here are the khurana's

Edited by LonelyPlannet - 04 November 2012 at 5:50am

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this for nothing Big smile

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 8:04am | IP Logged
 Sorry to break your hearts 
but HOME DELIVERY of this FF is not available. All of u have to help yourself 
so ADD this to ur watch list will help u to keep a track on updates if u want to read. no offense LOLLOL
SORRY Again Big smile

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Hug to all 60 ppl who checked this

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