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(KR+SS) Cross Connection SS! ch7 pg131 *PAUSED (Page 119)

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aishu3003

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Woww amazing update shenz Clap
Loved it Big smile
Awww kriyaansh kiss Embarrassed
Waiting eagerly for d next part Embarrassed
Thanks aishu

Glad u liked it

keep waitingTongue

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kriyansh24

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ayega ayega ayega aane waala...

aakhir thak jayega...

mere comments over the update page ki vaat lag gayi...

stupid spam errror
haan aur baaki sab ko peeche dhakael diyaBig smile
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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kriyansh24

leaving that kiss MU

i loved the update...

ab padhne ke baad laga thats out of the box mera kriyansh...

challenge thoda acche se dikhati... acche wale taunts...

i mean challenge ke thru direct kiss thoda ajeeb sa laga...

par ki farak painda hai...

i get 2 kisses... 

yes finally i said it that these were 2 kisses...

coz u see woh dur chali gayi thi after rey had started kissing...Wink

and kya mast kiss kiya...

thoda privacy dila deti inhe...

lamba chalta kissi,...

so swaron planned something...

might as well lock them up..

2-3 kissies aur mil jayenge...Big smile

overall i am loving especially the way u writing it...

ekdum adequuate proportions...

nothing forced... but all fun...

ab jaldi se baaki ki kissies... Approve
finally tujhe pasand aaya *relieved* 

I know woh challenge achhe se nahi aaya.. but ab pachta ke kya faidaUnhappy

finally u agreed that its 2 kisses...

haan wahi toh phone pe samjha rahi thi.. but tu toh samajhti hi nahi

pehle hi kiss mein privacy dedeti toh pura scene nahi ho jaata?

teri demand nahi badhti jaa rahi?? 2-3 aur??? mar gayiDead

thankfully tujhe pasand aaya...

announcement kar de...
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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kriyansh24

rey ko dur nhi rehna chahiye... Wink

swaron ka dimag bas jaldi se mast idea pe chal jaaye...

sabhi ki lottery lagegi...
kabhi bolti hai privacy kyu nahi di kiss thoda aur khichh jaata aur kabhi kehti hai ki durr kyu rakhaa public scene create karvayegi? 

ab tak toh kiss hi kiya tha...

public mein  durr nahi raha toh pata nahi kya-kya kar dega... woh bhi public meinShocked
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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 8:28am | IP Logged
na rakh rey ko dur... Wink
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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kriyansh24

na rakh rey ko dur... Wink
pagal karke hi chodegi tu mujhe..

tu likhde pura scene (update)  mere liye
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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 8:45am | IP Logged
tu likh... Tongue
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