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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 91)

AninditaSwaRon Senior Member
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Posted: 12 February 2013 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
who the hell is that boy !!!!Ouch

i am super sure yeh sab jealous karne ke lie hoga !!!!

LOL

but still jaldi update karna ..Big smile
awsome update anu... this one is veryyy cute

love,
annyEmbarrassed

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Posted: 13 February 2013 at 4:38am | IP Logged

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Posted: 13 February 2013 at 3:37pm | IP Logged
Anindita,its anything wrong..?? thats why u cant able to send me pm from last two updates..
u'r last pm to my inbox was chapter 13..after that i cant receive u'r pm for both new updates..
but today i just check my post..then i found that u'r ff is going through 15 chapter...
For comment,i have to read both new updates.. so if u are comfortable,then send me links...
and yes, pls pm me.. if u are interested... if not,then no load..
i am always here for swaron ff..
enjoy

prateek



Edited by prateekdave7 - 18 July 2013 at 3:43am

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 4:10am | IP Logged
THE ONLY THING I CAN SAY IS 
HAYEE...CHOO CUTE.pandaemoticon

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Posted: 16 February 2013 at 3:09am | IP Logged
@Anindita91: Nyc story!!!!Smile

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Posted: 16 February 2013 at 5:57am | IP Logged
Ani Hug
Awesome Update as uasual...I dnt knw how you manage to give such cute updates...Big smile Swayam was such a cutiepie...Donald and Daisy are so sweet...they both are so comfortable with each other...awwiiee dats cuteeEmbarrassed

Sharon: [cuts him and shouts] HOW MANY TIMES I WILL HAVE TO TELL YOU THAT I CAN NEVER BE UNCOMFORTABLE AROUND YOU?

OMG...Sharon is so adorable m loving her character in this FF...And Now Sharon is on a mission to make Swayam jealous LOL Gosshhh this couple is just fab...I wonder who the boy is...and lets see if Swayam falls for Sharon's tricks...Tongue 

Hope this FF never ends, Wink this is one FF which helps me not to miss Tanha much...love your picture selection...simply brillaint...Luv u Heart

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Posted: 17 February 2013 at 9:05am | IP Logged
Sorry for being late..jus caught up with the missed updates...they were really lovely..
thanks for the pm...
PS: sorry for short comment...

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Posted: 22 February 2013 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Well,i am here after long time.. late commer as always... so,ANINDITA.. this time.. i want to say..u are the one of the greatest writer at IF... super awesome.. home_made romatic date... just loved this update...first of all..surprise part was great... swayam is too good.. loved the way..u describe whole surprise stuffs...such as... pictures,outfits,candy,flowers,ornament,food items..(muh me pani aa gaya)..and last..a note..a special note...loved the lines..A special date for my love with lots of love.
then their little convo..related to food was awesum..then the lunch part..was so romantic..and  loved the way swayam places sharon on his lap...then the starting of magical dance. with beautiful song.."u select super appropriate song" just perfect song for perfect couple...then loved all the variations between dance...then at last,kiss part...well describe... just loved the lines..like..
He started to move his lips on hers slowly and softly tasting her soft rosy lips. She started to respond to his kiss with the same passion tasting his honey sweet lips...and then..u ended...
so,mindblowing update..u cant miss a single thing for a perfect date..picturisation is great as always..well description of their first date+first kiss... keep updating...
thanx for u'r pm..(which was very late)...

prateek..


Edited by prateekdave7 - 18 July 2013 at 3:44am

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