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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 8)

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 5:23am | IP Logged
Anindita..this is awesome buddy...
Swayam's character is awesomely written...
liked the friendly family atmosphere you have written...
thank you for the loonnnggg update...please dont reduce the size*baby face*
thanks for the pm...

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Anindita91

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 5:28am | IP Logged
brilliant update man so awesome and the pics made it even more fab yaaar and swayam ki leg pulling and he is pouting awww the family moment was too cute cant wait for sharon and swayam to meet pls pls pls update soon

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 5:47am | IP Logged
Loved the fact that it was such a long update and yes, it was absolutely needed to set the base of the story !!! I'm loving the way you write...Simple yet perfect !!! Can't wait for chapter 2 !!!

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Did you just clled this update boring  ? From which angle this seems boring to you. It is one of the best begining i ever read for any FF. Loved the detailed manner in which you explaind everything . And the dialogues were so realistic like the one which we uses everyday. It was indeed a pleasure to read them. And the bond between Shekhawats were beautifully penned. Waiting for the next update .

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 6:07am | IP Logged
Swayam is soo adorablee! He wants to create his own image! D family part was very sweet..especially wen dey wre teasing swayam :D:D And dat car obviously is of sharon :)) And puhleasee dun b sry..dis ws sucha nycc updatee..nd moreover it ws required to show d family part na! So chill :)) I like the pace of ur ff...smooth! waiting fr d nxt :)

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 6:29am | IP Logged
Awesome...swayam's family conversation was well written...love d way his family teases him...d pics also supported d descprition very well...update soon

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 6:44am | IP Logged

Nice update... waiting fr the nxt part... continue soon

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 6:46am | IP Logged
it was awesome! 
great start...! waiting eagerly for swaron to meet!
loved it amazing !
thnkss for the pmSmile

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