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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 78)

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Posted: 05 February 2013 at 3:01am | IP Logged

Hey My Cutie Pie
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I really dont know how u manage to write so so cute yet romantic updates...this is one of the cutest date ever...this makes this FF unique ..its super cute and have an unique charm to it...the blushing sharon..teasing and cheesily romantic swayam...u cant ask for more..reallyyEmbarrassed


Loved the set up..the food..the dress..the jewelry.. decoration..the song..the description for each line..ahaa...so so lovely...i really loved the way they spend time..alone without any interruption from outer world.. ..finally we got the dreamy moment...awww..cant stop smiling whiling reading this...out of the world...

Swayam moved a little bit now touching sharon's shaky lips. He was looking into sharon's eyes and waiting for any disapproval from her. She slowly closes her eyes and moved her hands in his hair from his neck. He started to move his lips on hers slowly and softly tasting her soft rosy lips. She started to respond to his kiss with the same passion tasting his honey sweet lips. After like eternity swayam pulled away from the kiss out of breath. Sharon looked at him and then shyly looked away blushing.

I love u so so much baby...my cutest writer ever...EmbarrassedHeart

Luv
Ur Di



Edited by deep_Tanha - 07 February 2013 at 7:28am

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Posted: 05 February 2013 at 3:05am | IP Logged
Awesome update Smile
Beautifully penned
Loved the way Swayam planned surprise n also caring for small things also
Idea of rose bucket was amazing


Edited by sanstina - 05 February 2013 at 4:33pm

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Posted: 05 February 2013 at 3:08am | IP Logged
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Awieee I loved Swayam's Suprise Day Dreaming
Sharon was all set to make romantic date to a holloween date LOL  Thats a perfect date ...
 
Sharon: what? Nahi khana?  ROFLhere swayam is giving all romantic look and all sharon bothered about is jelly candy ROFL
 
Their dance ...Day Dreaming and Kiss Blushing  Brought back all the momories ... short but very cute update..
 
when I get a PM about this FF, along with story , i will be looking forward for the pictures too Embarrassed 
Thanks for the photos ..No one can blush like SK Star


Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 05 February 2013 at 9:59pm

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Posted: 05 February 2013 at 4:37am | IP Logged
Awsum part sooo romantic awww I just luv their chemistry thanx for the pm 

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Posted: 05 February 2013 at 5:05am | IP Logged
JUST READ LAST FEW PARTS AND LOVED THEM ALL
REALLY SUPER AWSM SWARON ROMANCE WAS INTENSE AND BEAUTIFUL AND BEAUTIFFULY WRITTEN
REALLY LOVING THIS FF...MY FIRST AND ONLY SWARON FFHeartHeartHeartBig smileBig smileBig smile
AUR KYA...HA...RAMU KAKA TEASING SESSIONS WERE FABLOLLOLLOL
AND A VERY REMONTIC DATE...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
THANX 4 THE PM AND PLEASE UPDATE SOONSmileSmileSmile

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Posted: 05 February 2013 at 5:15am | IP Logged
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m Loveing it ani
 
n Fast update 
 
love this update 
 
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Posted: 05 February 2013 at 6:00am | IP Logged
once again an awesome chapter beautifully penned down
swayam planned everything very beautifully and the whole date was very fantastically written
you are such a deep writer as you always uses beautiful pics to describe each scene and expression of swaron is just awesome. i loved it and enjoyed the update completely
update soon  


Edited by arch2012 - 06 February 2013 at 3:11am

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Posted: 05 February 2013 at 6:58am | IP Logged
Awesumly penned down..
My fvourite song..!! Woww...suited the situation the best...
Loved this one...as alswayss...
Thnks 4 the pm..update next ssooon !! :)
Luv,
Sakshi...

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