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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 70)

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Hug I totally loved this part dear.
Sharon's fear towards that unknown person was well portrayed and you were just superb,in showing,donald's concern towards his life daisy... Embarrassed
I loved how swayam managed to get the phone number from rey..Smart Guy!! Cool
Loved it and running fast to read the next one.. Big smile

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Aweee... Embarrassed   Hug Day Dreaming
Oh dear...it was "Chumeshwari" update..
The very first picture of Sharon sleeping on Swayam's chest made me go in a 'hawa hawa swaron dreamland!!!!'
aweee re!!!!
Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming
The baby scene was very well written!!! that donald soft toy concept was awesome!!!
"Mere ghar me tsunami aya hai,koi mujhe bachao" and swayam's hawa niklaying on seeing sherni sharon made me "hans hans ke girru!!!!" ROFL

Mind blowing boss!!! Cool

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Swayam's bhoot look was .. Wink
kya yaar,hated kaka for interrupting in the wrong time!!! Ouch
Sharon in 3-quarter boxer was superb!!!! Big smile
Real me pehenti to kaisi dikhti... ROFL
Loved swayams consolation... Smile
well done dear...
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Edited by tanzz15 - 15 December 2012 at 10:16pm

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Res... Big smile

Will unres soon.. Big smile

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This part was very touching.Its very true that a girl in teenage needs support of her parents the most.Sharon's pain of losing her mother and staying away from her father was very well portrayed.It proved to be the greatest mistake of her life to trust an unknown person.As she was already in great need of some mental support,the incident has surely taken off land below her feet.You have done an excellent job in setting up the story,my dear...
Continue soon,looking up to see swayam's reaction on knowing this bitter truth and handling with great care,as daisy's donald.

love Tania.. Smile

Edited by tanzz15 - 16 December 2012 at 1:52am

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koto gulo update kore diechis.. r ami amder college r fest r kaj e atke ektao porte parchi na.. 10 n 11 ta pora hoini.. pore mimi theke comment korbo.. :) plzz dnt be angry..

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read chapter 10 and 11 at a go...
very nicely put chapters...
kaka teasing them both was amusing read...
the past that sharon had to go through was so dreadful..nicely penned...
looking forward to read how things gonna take shape from now on...
do update soon...
thanks for the pm...
sorry for commenting so late was inactive...

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Di pls update na

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