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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 67)

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 5:52am | IP Logged
hm nyc update Dear
 
very  nyc
 
 
poor sharon CryCryCry
 
par meine soch the ki jab sharon kk flash bak aayega toh swayam kk bhi ki
 
but nver mind hm kya kar skte hai
 
update soon very soonCryUnhappy

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 5:53am | IP Logged
Don't be late plzzz update soon want to see swaron
 
 
 
love swaron

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 6:28am | IP Logged
What a shocking update.
I had goose bumps while reading this update.
Poor sharon she had to face so much in life...her mom died...her dad was not wid her...n a stranger who she started trusting just broke her trust in a cruel way.
Hope swayam just gives her d care n love she deserves...plz continue soon...want to know swayam's reaction.

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 6:46am | IP Logged
emotional update..
Sad for sharon she had to face so much at her young age...Cry
i wish sharon gets all d care n love she deserves from swayam n swayam helps her in gaing comg out of d shell...
waitg for d update
want to know swayam's reaction.



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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 7:04am | IP Logged
Hey Mishty sorry for not commenting on last update actually i was into some work so was not able to comment on that part but it was also beautiful. This part was very touching somewhere this part resembled to a feeling which i guess nobody should ever have. But very nicely showed emotions and reactions and all small things that sharon went thorugh before becoming the arrogant and bitch girl who cared for nothing and trusted no one.
 
I really believe when parents donot take care of their children's emotions this stupid beep beep beep beep guys come in their cofidance and exploit their little children just like that shameless bloody creature vikrant did to sharon. When children do not get love and suddenly if somebody showers love on them they naturally drop their pressence of mind and start trusting that person. And not all the persons in this world are good. The bad ones are more than good ones really. Never trust strangers even if he/she is too much good and sweet with you.
 
You really brought my heart to my mouth at the time that bloody creepo vikrant was on sharon. Trust if I get to see that type of jerk before me I can tare aprat him in i don't know how many pieces. How can use such innnocent child like that... I hardly cry but reading this update I cried and I feel no shame in admiting that boy hoke bhi maine roya ye update padke it was that good and you have hurt no feelings trust me. But I really want the readers who are girls mostly never trust any stranger so easily as sharon did in the update.
 
Thanks for the PM. It was really nice update. Do provide an update soon...
 
Pratik...

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 7:35am | IP Logged

Dont know what to comment !!!  I always hope that every girl child should have a safe childhood, , which should be a beautiful memory  not a bitter/scary memory...

 
 
Coming back to update , I  was expecting something like this, .. The jerks like him should be hanged to death..phidophile's... argh... cant explain how angry and sad Iam ... Poor Sharon !!!
 
Hope Swayam handles these things well and Hope ,Just hope that , that creep doesnot come in this FF anymore


Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 13 December 2012 at 8:47am

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 7:58am | IP Logged
Anindita Big smile
I am so sorry for not commenting last time...
But i loved itt!
Swayam and sharon ka romance..then swayam asking about that mysterious guy..and then sharon's sudden behaviour..swayam's anger and concern for her daisy...it was all lovelyy and thrilling at the same time..i loved swayam's concern and love towards them.
Then the next updateee...
Freeaakkk. I hate that bas***ddd!!!!! My blood boiled at that time!
I just hope swayam gives her all the love and happiness of the world.
Nicely explained..apt work Star

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Awesome!! Gosh Sharon had to go through hell!!! No wonder she got into a shell!!! I hope SWayam breaks her shell soon and gives her all the love and affection she deserves.

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