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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 65)

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 7:04am | IP Logged
Hey Mishty sorry for not commenting on last update actually i was into some work so was not able to comment on that part but it was also beautiful. This part was very touching somewhere this part resembled to a feeling which i guess nobody should ever have. But very nicely showed emotions and reactions and all small things that sharon went thorugh before becoming the arrogant and bitch girl who cared for nothing and trusted no one.
 
I really believe when parents donot take care of their children's emotions this stupid beep beep beep beep guys come in their cofidance and exploit their little children just like that shameless bloody creature vikrant did to sharon. When children do not get love and suddenly if somebody showers love on them they naturally drop their pressence of mind and start trusting that person. And not all the persons in this world are good. The bad ones are more than good ones really. Never trust strangers even if he/she is too much good and sweet with you.
 
You really brought my heart to my mouth at the time that bloody creepo vikrant was on sharon. Trust if I get to see that type of jerk before me I can tare aprat him in i don't know how many pieces. How can use such innnocent child like that... I hardly cry but reading this update I cried and I feel no shame in admiting that boy hoke bhi maine roya ye update padke it was that good and you have hurt no feelings trust me. But I really want the readers who are girls mostly never trust any stranger so easily as sharon did in the update.
 
Thanks for the PM. It was really nice update. Do provide an update soon...
 
Pratik...

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 7:35am | IP Logged

Dont know what to comment !!!  I always hope that every girl child should have a safe childhood, , which should be a beautiful memory  not a bitter/scary memory...

 
 
Coming back to update , I  was expecting something like this, .. The jerks like him should be hanged to death..phidophile's... argh... cant explain how angry and sad Iam ... Poor Sharon !!!
 
Hope Swayam handles these things well and Hope ,Just hope that , that creep doesnot come in this FF anymore


Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 13 December 2012 at 8:47am

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 7:58am | IP Logged
Anindita Big smile
I am so sorry for not commenting last time...
But i loved itt!
Swayam and sharon ka romance..then swayam asking about that mysterious guy..and then sharon's sudden behaviour..swayam's anger and concern for her daisy...it was all lovelyy and thrilling at the same time..i loved swayam's concern and love towards them.
Then the next updateee...
Freeaakkk. I hate that bas***ddd!!!!! My blood boiled at that time!
I just hope swayam gives her all the love and happiness of the world.
Nicely explained..apt work Star

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Awesome!! Gosh Sharon had to go through hell!!! No wonder she got into a shell!!! I hope SWayam breaks her shell soon and gives her all the love and affection she deserves.

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 9:37am | IP Logged
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR...
POOR SHARON...
WAITING TO SEE HOW SWAYAM REACTS...
UPDATE NEXT PART SOON AND BADA WALA CHAHIYE...
THNKX FOR THE PM DEAR...
DO PM ME WHEN UPDATE

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 9:41am | IP Logged
awesome update..

thanks for the pm...

update soon..

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 9:43am | IP Logged
I sort of have expected something like that in Sharon' past but I guess I wasn't able to mentally prepare myself to read it. After reading this update there was an anger in me as well as a pain. And there you excelled as a writer. To write on such sensitive issue with so much precison and in a manner that readers started feeling the pain of victim is quite commendable. This chapter could not have been written in a more better way. It was heart wrenching. I just hope Swayam bring back her innocent Daisy.

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 10:29am | IP Logged
Hey anindita, thanx a lot for pm...
i cant imagine that the story will turn in this mode.. unbelievable..
so,this is the reason behind her fear and pain..
i hate vikrant deshmukh for this.. itna bura koi kese ho sakta hain..?
(this is just for fictional character vikrant,nothing else)
i like this direction of story.. completely different for me...
i like sharon's lonlyness description most.. becoz u describe the real feelings of those childrens,who are far away from their parents...
loved u'r update but miss our swaron so much in this part..
picturization is perfect as always, becoz i think vikrant's pic is completely justifying his character... and farm house pic is awsum..
i loved u'r update so keep update me asap..
waiting for next update..

thanx,
prateek


Edited by prateekdave7 - 18 July 2013 at 3:48am

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