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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 3:43am | IP Logged
just read the last 2 parts..awesome!
suspense killing me also..waiting for the next update!

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 7:40am | IP Logged
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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 7:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nature2

update
 
plzz update...CryCry

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 7:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nature2

Originally posted by nature2

update
 
plzz update...CryCry
 
plzz update...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 12 December 2012 at 2:21am | IP Logged
Anindita Hug
amazingly amazing updateBig smile...SwaRon romance was way too cute and adorable *Touchwood* and ramu kaka teasing SwaRon was like an icing on the cakeBig smile
very well written and fantastically pennedClapClapStar
and the way you showed  swayam's concern for his daisy just stole my heartEmbarrassed
keep up the good work and please jaldi batao woh kaun hai ?!?Wink



Edited by Mahirah - 12 December 2012 at 2:24am

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Posted: 12 December 2012 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Awesome update Anindita I loved it.
And you know the pics which you have included makes me stop for a second and just relive those moments, especially the hug sceneDay Dreaming I'm in dreamland.
Coming to the update the suspense is also killing me just the way its for Swayam. Why is Sharon so scared to tell him, thinking that he will hate her. Its very intriguing, please update soon

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 12:25am | IP Logged
So cute! Luved it

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 3:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Neeti96

*EDITED*

WOW This update was so sweet
Sharon in his boxer shortsLOL
And her being afraid he will hate her..AwwEmbarrassed
But Swayam banging his fist on the wall..Cry
Pls di jaldi suspense khol do kaun hai ye Mr Secret Guy.
Waiting to know


hey my baby sis Hug thank you so much for ur lovely comment dear...love you Heart

Originally posted by sadiyaswaron

Dii well first of all a big hug for a long update.
Coming to update
It was cute,sweet,romantic n a lil bit emotional update
kaka's timing was really bad ek kiss to karna dete...:p
I really loved how they r behaving like a newly gf bf+best friend.N i can imagine sharon(sneha) in swayam's attitre she must be looking like a cute doll.N now this mystery is killing me.Cliffhanger not fair??
Waiting for next part
Update it ASAp

hey sadiya thank you so much for the lovely post dear...Hug

Originally posted by sanstina

Res
Unres
Swaron blushing when Kaka teased them
Hoping that Sharon will share her insecurities with Swayam soon n Swayam will solve her problem

thank you so much for ur sweet comment dear...thank you Big smile

Originally posted by deep_Tanha

Hey Cutie PieHug

Lovely update like always...m loving ur fast updates...awww...that kiss...



kaka came in between their first kiss...I loved even the kaka's teasing part...lovely...


Sharon changed into swayam's boxers and tee ...the way you described..she must be looking cute and adorable...the room description was beautiful...

Her fear...and the way he consoled her...awww...the hug...1st hug...m waiting for the suspense to open ...lovely lovely part baby ...plz continue soon...



aawwiiee di Hug from where do u get these beautiful pics...they are amazing...thank you so much di for this lovely comment...thank you so so much...Heart

Originally posted by Tanuka_TanHa

Anindita Hug

This time i am not the first one to comment Ouch
 
res
unres
 
 
Awesome update !
very well written
kaka's entry time was amazingly funny LOL
sharon must have looked uber cute in swayam's cloths .
swayam actually said I love you to sharon in this part .
the way swayam was making sharon understand that he can nevr hate sharon and she should tell him the truth was really nice .
but u had to stop at place where sharon was convinced of telling abt the person :(
eager to know who was the man in the lift and what happened 4 years ago.
will be waiting for the next part , update soon..
thanks for the PM.

awww Hug its okay dear...this time again u r the first one LOL thank you so much for ur lovely comment tanuka...the suspense is about to reveal in this chapter...hope i could do justice to it Ouch love u Heart

Originally posted by Joshua_TANHA

Beautiful update loved it completeley!!!

 
Chalu KaKa  ..LOL should have let them kiss Tongue someone other bothers swaron when ever they get romantic LOL LOL
 
Sharon cleaning the room to her coming out wearing swayam 's cloth , all are explained beautifully...I can even imagine her in oversized cloths LOLLOL
 
Then things start getting intense... Love swayam's unconditional love here!!!
 
Even I am eager to know the truth , but you have given a cliffhangerAngry!!
 
Thanks once again for the photosHug..they just go well with the story and bring back so many memories!! No one can Blush like Sneha blushes  Blushing
 

hey dear thank you so much for ur lovely comment dear Big smile

Originally posted by sweetsimi123

Awesome update dear...Smile
Interrupting Ramu kaka...arrghhh but teasing Ramu kaka was fun...
Anyways loved the blushy blushy Sharon...Embarrassed
This update was totally fab...Loved it Clap
Can't wait to read the next update to read wat happened in Sharon's life...
Please update next chapter soon...PM me as always...Big smile



thank you so much for ur lovely comment dear Big smile

Originally posted by ABBY92

The way Ramu Kaka entered was hilarious and I'm sure Sharon must have looked extra cute in Swayam's clothes !! Just imagining her in that big sized clothes puts a smile on my face !! I'm happy that Swayam managed to convince Sharon to tell him the truth and now, the suspense is killing me as who was in the lift !!

hey abi Hug yup sneha must be looking so awesome in his dress na Day Dreaming n don't worry the suspense is reveled in this chapter Smile hope i could do justice to it Ouch

Originally posted by sweetcherry95

res

madam tu res karke bhul gayi na unres karna LOL pagal Tongue

Originally posted by swaronamit

Wow...luved it...

thank you so much amit...i am glad u liked it Big smile

Originally posted by Nehal92

res after examz sorry dear Disapprove

hey nehal don't say sorry plz...i do understand...Smile take ur time...all the best Thumbs Up

Originally posted by creepy_classic

awesome update...

thanks for the pm...

update soon...

thank you so much for ur sweet comment dear Big smile

Originally posted by frankyfio

loving ur awesome update

continue sooon

thank you so much for ur lovely comment dear...i am glad u liked it Big smile

Originally posted by nature2

 last ko chod kk
 
awosm update ClapClapClapClap fab workBig smileBig smile
 
 
cuteee jab ramu kaka aayeLOLLOLLOL dem nyc
 
update soon next chpBig smile

thank you so much neerav for ur lovely comment Big smile

Originally posted by namratajadhav

oo my my..!!

anu dis was a fantastic part..

ok il call u barbie frm now on coz ur really lyk a doll to me..!!

seriosuly u wrote d chappy so well n u say u mess up n dnt knw to write duffer..!!

i loved deir bonding yaar..

hope dat cheap creep hasnt done nythng bad plz..

update soon..!!

hey candy Hug thanks for the sweet name..Heart n thank you so much for ur lovely comment dear Big smile

Originally posted by binuja_

this was yet another beautiful one...but again cliffhanger...Confused
u really know how to test ur reader's patience..since when we are waiting for sharon's secret...better reveal it in the next update...Wink

kaka should have come after sometime...Tongue and swayam is always mr.perfect...even in FFs...Embarrassed
i loved the way she let out her tears in front of him...it shows how much she trust him...hopefully she vl reveal it in the next update...

overall awesome Anindita...Hug

hey dear Hug thank you so much for ur lovely comment dear..about the revelation read this chapter Tongue Big smile

Originally posted by lassipriya

ausum update..
swaron first kiss disturbed by kaka n kaka teasg dem.. Wink 
bohot jaldi hai mujhe bhagane ki. Their white cheeks turned red listening to that.dekho toh kaise tum dono ke gal lal ho rahe hai."
sharon cleaning d mess created in d room n decoratg it.. room interior was nicely discribed "it was looking presentable, bright, romantic and pure. Just like their love."
Sharon in swayams clothes LOL 
swayam askg her who was he in d lift n sharon getg afraid dat swayam hate her nswayam makes her belive dat he can never hate his daisy...Swayam consoling her n helpg her to cumout of her insecurities was nicely penned down..Thumbs Up
as already said pics  in ur f r cherry on d cake.. dey fit d story well n also brings d old sweet memories of our beloved swaron Day Dreaming

eager to know the truth wat happend in sharon's life.. waitg for nxt part..
 


thank you so much dear for this lovely comment...thank you a lot...Big smile

Originally posted by Sudha-SK

Ok.. this suspense is killing me now..but i loved the part when Swayam consoled and comforted Shaorn and she is feeling much better to open up to Swayam now.. and coming to the start..Kaka's timing kya perfect hai LOL the teasing part was hilarious.. but the fear in Sharon is making getting on to me.. please update soon. 

hey sudha Hug thank you so much for ur lovely comment dear...Big smile sorry this time it became a lil late in updating...Cry

Originally posted by truptiswaron

awesume chapter.pls update next part soon.Thumbs Up 

thank you so much for ur sweet comment dear Big smile




Edited by Anindita91 - 13 December 2012 at 3:55am

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