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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 63)

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 2:52am | IP Logged
Here is my comment Wink. Well Kaka continues to amaze us with his dialogue. I liked how this time Sharon was also along with Swayam to face the teasing of Kaka. Now I am seriously missing Swayam sis and his parents :( But any way it was amusing. I liked how you described Sharon in Swayam's clothes. She must be looking like a cartoon no doubt but in the mean time I am certain she would be looking awesome too. This reminds me it would had been awesome to see Sneha in such weird wardrobe on the show. But ab kuch nahi ho sakta. Now coming to the last part. Just marvellously penned. Sharon's fear, pain and some sort of insecurites everything marvellously written. In the mean time beautifully depicted the mental state of Swayam on seeing Sharon like that. Awesomely done.

P.S - I liked how you have not used their real name in their convo ever since they had came to know about the truth about other. Well done.

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 4:22am | IP Logged
Lovely update like always...

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 11:49am | IP Logged
thanks for the pm and awesome update :D cant wait to now about Sharon's past

Nikki <3

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Sooo sorry for the late comment...
The realisation and flour fight  was just magicalLOL
The pure love and concern really touched my heart...Big smile

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