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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 62)

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 11:07am | IP Logged
this was yet another beautiful one...but again cliffhanger...Confused
u really know how to test ur reader's patience..since when we are waiting for sharon's secret...better reveal it in the next update...Wink

kaka should have come after sometime...Tongue and swayam is always mr.perfect...even in FFs...Embarrassed
i loved the way she let out her tears in front of him...it shows how much she trust him...hopefully she vl reveal it in the next update...

overall awesome Anindita...Hug

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 11:23am | IP Logged
ausum update..
swaron first kiss disturbed by kaka n kaka teasg dem.. Wink
bohot jaldi hai mujhe bhagane ki. Their white cheeks turned red listening to that. dekho toh kaise tum dono ke gal lal ho rahe hai."
sharon cleaning d mess created in d room n decoratg it.. room interior was nicely discribed "it was looking presentable, bright, romantic and pure. Just like their love."
Sharon in swayams clothes LOL
swayam askg her who was he in d lift n sharon getg afraid dat swayam hate her nswayam makes her belive dat he can never hate his daisy...Swayam consoling her n helpg her to cumout of her insecurities was nicely penned down..Thumbs Up
as already said pics  in ur f r cherry on d cake.. dey fit d story well n also brings d old sweet memories of our beloved swaron Day Dreaming

eager to know the truth wat happend in sharon's life.. waitg for nxt part..


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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 6:08pm | IP Logged
Ok.. this suspense is killing me now..but i loved the part when Swayam consoled and comforted Shaorn and she is feeling much better to open up to Swayam now.. and coming to the start..Kaka's timing kya perfect hai LOL the teasing part was hilarious.. but the fear in Sharon is making getting on to me.. please update soon. 

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 7:13pm | IP Logged
awesume chapter.pls update next part soon.Thumbs Up

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 1:07am | IP Logged
awessumm...Embarrassed

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 1:51am | IP Logged
awesome update

waiting for next update

Pls PM me

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 2:04am | IP Logged
Thanx a lot for pm, so, again very fast and furious update... great job..
loved this update.. ramu kaka and swaron convo was sweet and teasing.. but the magical kiss was not possible this time.. so hope best for next time..
the interior scene of room was awsum and swaron's bursting out their feelings to each other was intense and awsum...
picturization was commendable.. as always..
so, i am happy that i will be known about that person in next update..
thanx
prateek


Edited by prateekdave7 - 18 July 2013 at 3:48am

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