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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 6)

Anindita91 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 1:54am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Nehal92

arey ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai..zaroor continue karna chahiye..aur pm karna..jab bhi update karo!!

Thank you so much nehal for liking it...i will surely pm u...


Originally posted by Sravani...

God you have included all my fav continue soon.:P Swayam going latto after seeing Sharon etc etc ;;:D

They all r my fav characters too...especially Donald n daisy...thank you so much for liking it...


Originally posted by tanukaswaron

yippee a new swaron ff 

amazing concept anindita !!

and obviously u should continue .

update soon...

thanks for the pm.

Thank you so much tanuka... will update in few minutes...


Originally posted by Srishti_SwaRon

Awesome concept and character Sketch. Do continue ad PM me when you do. :)

Thank you so much srishti...will surely pm u...


Originally posted by luvSwaron4ever

please continue and do PM me...swaron as be fun...though there are many other imp ppl also plzzz do gv more of swaron they are neighbors i wud expect a lot...

Thank you so much for liking it...i will surely pm u...swaron moments will surely be there but may be from 2nd or 3rd chapter...most probably 2nd chapter...


Originally posted by Luvsd3

Luvd it...perfect character sketch...just one word comes out from my mouth after reading "WOW"!!!
do Continue soon can't wait to read more...JALDI UPDATE KARNA

Thank you so much for liking it...i m updating in few minutes dear...


Originally posted by sadiyaswaron

Update it soon n do

Thank you so much for liking it...will surely pm u... will update in few minutes...


Originally posted by meevee

GoshAnu... there is no scope for any rethoughts...just update the first chapter fast  its a nice concept & cool CS...u will do just fab I'm sure

Thank you so much meera di...will update in few minutes...thanx for ur encouragement...



Originally posted by neetha

aww...anandita..i loved ths conept..eeepp..i loved the daisy n donald at first...loved the character sketch..m sure its gonna be pm me gal..u already in ma buddy list..

Thank you so much neetha...will surely pm u...


Originally posted by Sudha-SK

Wow Anindita, its interesting..please update soon and don't forget to PM me :)

Thank you so much sudha...i m updating in few i won't forget to pm u...



Originally posted by shaani2209

looking forward to this one...update soon...thanks for the pm...

Thank you so much shaani for commenting...updating in few minutes



Originally posted by -mimi-

darun starting ta.. but jaldi update dis.. amar rastai hatis na..

Thank you so much re tor rastaye hatle amay prothom theke abar porte hobe story ta ki chilo n last kothaye end hoyechilo...


Originally posted by Suku_SwaRon

Awesome! Awesome ! plz continue

Thank you so much for liking it suku...


Originally posted by ABBY92

I'm so glad that you're starting the FF...I can't wait to read the first chapter !!!

Thank you so much abi for encouraging me...i am updating in few minutes...


Originally posted by frankyfio

ill read later
bt still keep on sending pmz 
pllsss pretttyyy plllsss

Thank you so much for commenting...I surely will pm read when u get time...


Originally posted by swayamsharon

new ff seems good do continue

Thank you so much for liking it...


Originally posted by SwaRonluver666

nice concept re... do continue soon ..thanks for the pm

Thank you so much appu...m updating in few minutes


Originally posted by swaron_d3

loved it!
simply awesome...well,i should say your choice of characters is really good!

Daisy AND Donald.aaawww!
looking forward to it! update soon!
can't wait to read more!

Thank you so much ananya...daisy n Donald r my favourite...thanx...updating n few minutes...


Originally posted by toshanaik3011

nice one...

do pm me when u update...


Thank you so much toshanaik...will surely pm u...


Originally posted by D3fan_forever

neki aur pooch pooch??
subh kam mein no deri!!
start it.u have built a pretty strong base.n quite professionally i must say.itna kuch to d3 k logo ne bhi socha nhi hoga serial shuru karne se pehle.

Thank you so much i am really honoured...thank you...

Edited by Anindita91 - 22 July 2012 at 2:44am

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Anindita91 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 1:54am | IP Logged

Originally posted by abhilasha_dream

Do pm me wen u update

Thank you so much for commenting...will surely pm u...


Originally posted by marauder

Nice concept Pm me when u update. 

Thank you so much shishir...will surely pm u...


Originally posted by -Ripal-

lovely concept 

perfect charater sketch

update 1st part soon :)

Thank you so much ripal...m updating...


Originally posted by AmritaluvSwaRon

I love the character sketch...its so cute. SS childhood friends and use to call each daisy and donald 


Looking forward to read this one...thank you for the PM. 


P.S If possible please use some other pic of Sharon/ Sneha.

Thank you so much amrita for liking it n giving me suggestion about the pic...


Originally posted by swaronland

loved concept & character sketch.
Continue soon & pm me

Thank you so much for liking it...m updating n will surely pm u...


Originally posted by ShrutikaSwaRon

Grt concept...wuld luv to read more...continue soon.

Thank you so much shrutika...m updating...


Originally posted by misha24

Interesting... update soon and do pm me

Thank you so much misha for liking it...m updating n will surely pm u...


Originally posted by sadafarsha

hey it was awsum continue it i really luved the part update soon

Thank you so much for liking it...m updating...


Originally posted by mahirahmarium

pleeej continue 

oh God this FF is sooo cute and sweet I really wanna read more soo pleeejjj continue and dont forget to pm me wen u update 

P.S- the character sketch was soo cute SwaRon ka disney characters se pyaaar hayeee 

cant wait for d update

Thank you so much mahi for liking it...will surely pm u...



Originally posted by cenation123

yayyy update soon cute and interestuing concept do pm me

Thank you so much for liking it...m updating n will surely pm u...



Originally posted by damonelena

Amazing concept! :)

You don't know hw much i love reading stories like these...lost lost friends trying to find each other! :D


Update soon and Pm me when u update! :)

Thank you so much for liking it...m updating n will surely pm u...


Originally posted by nature7

nyc introoo

Thank you so much for liking it...


Originally posted by d3lover90

Awsm concept pls update soon 
swaron friends not knowing their original name :o ..
Eagarly waiting for first part..

Thank you so much for liking it...


Originally posted by Rutu

continue pls...and thanks for the pm

Thank you so much rutu for commenting...


Originally posted by swaron19

Nice concept and character sketch .. please PM me anytime you update..



Thank you so much shruti for liking it...will surely pm u...


Originally posted by Coolioqueen

Its gonna be a nice OS. Whoz gonna be d raj 4 simran? Plz add d character too...

Thank you so much for liking it...i will surely add the character of raj but not now later on when the story will demand him...



Originally posted by cuteswayu

really nice start,update soon n pm me..wil b waitin for it..^-^

Thank you so much nisha for liking it...m updating n will surely pm u...

Originally posted by chimpukli10

hey dear do continue and pm me once you update

Thank you so much chimpukli...will surely pm u...

Originally posted by surbhimathur

Arree its perfect anindita! 
do continue!
i loved d different! 
and d character sketch..haha..liked d ram kapoor and all pics 
kindly continue and pm me also 

p.s.--awwiee...donald and daisy!!! 

Thank you so much surbhi fr liking it...m updating n will surely pm u...

Edited by Anindita91 - 23 July 2012 at 3:41am
Anindita91 IF-Dazzler

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Hello everyone first of all I want to thank all of u who has liked and commented...thank u guys for such a great response...i have tried to send pm to everyone who has liked and commented...but if I have missed any one of u then I am extremely sorry for that...i request u to let me know about it by either sending me pm or commenting here itself...thank you



Edited by Anindita91 - 22 July 2012 at 1:56am

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Anindita91 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 1:55am | IP Logged

Chapter 1

Shekhawat Mansion, London

Someone from the kitchen shouts...

Nandini: Dinner is ready...sab khane k liye aa jao...

[from their respective rooms]

Deepak: aaya

Swayam: coming mom

Simran: yes mom coming in two minutes

Deepak comes and takes his seat with a file in his hand. Swayam enters.

Swayam: dad aap khane k waqt bhi kaam karoge?

Deepak: haan..nahi woh yeh kuch jaruri papers hai...actually property k papers'aur yeh kisike liye gift hai...

Swayam: gift? Kiske liye?

Deepak: woh main tujhe baad me batayunga...tu bata packing ho gayi teri?

Swayam: ha dad almost done.

Deepak: mujhe ab tak samajh nahi aa raha hai tu london chodke kyun jana chahta hai?

Swayam: dad maine bataya tha na ki mujhe yaha achha nahi lagta...yeh extra attention n all I just hate it...I don't understand sabko hamesha swayam shekhawat se hi kyun friendship karni hoti hai...woh swayam se friendship nahi kar sakte kya?

Deepak: tu bhi na swayam ajeeb hai...tere age k boys girls ke attention pane k liye kya kuch nahi karte hai aur ek tu hai iss attention se bhag raha hai...

Swayam: dad please aapko pata hai na I don't like all these...aur main independent hona chahta hu...aapke k rehte aisi koi bhi chiz nahi hai jo mujhe na mile...mujhe kuch karne k bhi koi jarurat nahi paregi itna bada emperior hai aapka...par dad usme mera koi haath nahi hai...sab aapka aur aapke empoyees ka haath hai...main chahta hu ki agar log mujhe jane toh mere hard work k wajase jane...not bcoz I m swayam shekhawat the son of deepak shekhawat...

Deepak: samjha par yahi reason hai na india jane ka? Ya phir koi aur reason hai?

[simran enters]

Simran: ya bro batao na koi aur reason hai kya?

Swayam: matlab by aur reason kya mean kar raheho aap dono?

Deepak: yahi ki koi ladki hai kya india me jiske liye tu ye sabka attention chodke ja raha hai?

Simran: ha bro batao na kaun hai meri bhabs?

Swayam: what nonsense ye kya baatein kar rahe hai aap dono?

Deepak: arre tu hamesha girls se bhagta rehta hai...isiliye puch rahe hai..koi special hai kya? [looks at simran and winks]

Simran: [smiles at her dad] ha bro koi toh special hogi na...yaha toh kisi ladki ki taraf dekhte bhi nahi ho...toh of course india me koi hogi'

Swayam: dad sim bohot huya ok...aapk log ko aaj main hi mila hu leg pulling k liye...

Simran: bro hum aapka leg pulling kaha kar rahe hai...hum toh bas puch rahe hai...

[nandini enters with the food]

Nandini: bas bohot huya tum dono ka...kal woh chala jayega aur aaj aap log usse aise saata raheho..waise swayam tum unhe na saahi mujhe bata sakte ho agar koi hai toh...batao kaun hai meri bahu?

Swayam: [irritated] mom aap bhi? Not fair...[face baby]

Deepak: achha ab bas karte hai...iska face toh dekho...

Simran: ha dad mere bro ko aur mat satao...

Nandini: bro ki chamchi...come help me in serving the food...

Simran: yes mom

[both of them serve the food n they start eating]

Deepak: swayam mujhe tumhe kuch important kehna hai..

Swayam: ha dad say...

Deepak: tumhari mom aur main hamesha tumhare saath majak karte rehte hai...par one thing we want to say...we are proud of you my son..I am sure you will reach the heights...

Nandini: ha swayam hum tumhare decision se bohot happy hai...n our blessing are always with you...your the best son in this world..

Simran: best bro too...

Deepak: ha n the best boyfriend also jiske k liye ye india ja raha hai..

Swayam: dad phirse? [pouting]

[everyone laughs n then swayam also joins them]

Deepak: dekh swayam baki sab toh thik hai par ye tera rented house ka decision mujhe thik nahi lag raha...mumbai me itna bada ghar hai humhara aur tu rented house me rahega...

Swayam: dad agar main waha raha toh same chiz hi hoga na...mujhe true friends chahiye...aur us ghar me rehne se sabko pata chal jayega that I am your son...aur sab mujhse phir money k liye friendship karenge...I don't want that to happen...

Nandini: par beta waha gautam ki family bhi rehti hai...agar tumhe kisi chiz ki jarurat paregi toh they can take care of it...

[swayam remembers that he will have to visit there after reaching mumbai...after all he has waited for 11 years to meet his best friend daisy]

Nandini: swayam kya soch raheho?

[comes out of his thoughts]

Swayam: kuch nahi mom...don't worry I will be fine...aap tension mat lo...

Deepak: mujhe pata tha tu nahi manega...isiliye I have a surprise for all of you...

Nandini, swayam n simran in unision: what?

Deepak: [hand over the file to swayam] this is for you my son.

Swayam:[after checking in the file] dad aapne mere liye yeh flat kharida...iski jarurat nahi thi...

[nandini n simran smiles]

Deepak: chup kar tu...mujhe pata hai tu apne principles ka pakka hai...tujhe kisika help lena achha nahi lagta...but I am your just shut up and accept it..

Nandini: ha swayam we are your parents...humse kuch lena galat nahi hai...

Swayam: mom dad of course aapse kuch lena galat nahi hai n mere paas jo bhi hai sab aapka hi toh diya huya hai...n i am so lucky to be a part of this family...aap dono se toh understanding n friendly parents aur koi ho hi nahi sakta hai...main toh bas bol raha tha mere akele k liye yeh flat lene k kya jarurat thi?

Deepak: tere akele k liye kaha? Tere chamchi ne bol rakha hai after 1 year uski school khatam hote hi she will shift to mumbai...tere paas'

[swayam looks at simran n smiles]

Simran: yes main aapne bro k bina nahi reh sakti...I will go to mumbai after completing my school [looking at swayam]aur aap aur main alag rehenge toh mere raj ko kaise dundenge? Mere raj ko toh aap hi ko dund k dena hai...

[deepak, nandini n swayam smiles at her innocense]

Swayam: ha ha meri cutie pie...main dund k dunga tujhe tera raj...par ek condition hai [swayam calls simran cutie pie pyaar se]

Simran: kya?

Swayam: promise kar mere jaane k baad mom n dad ka kheyal rakhigi n achhe se padhai karegi...n no shaitani ok? Ye sab abhi bacha k rakh..jab mere paas aayegi tab karna...

Simran: promise bro.

Next day in london airport.

Everyone goes to see of swayam. Ramu kaka their cook is putting all the luggage of swayam into a trolley. He is with them for the last 20 years. Though ramu kaka is their cook but they all love him like their family member.

Swayam: mom mera toh do hi bag tha na yeh theesra bag kaha se aaya?

Nandini: yeh tumhara bag nahi kaka ka bag hai...

[Ramu Kaka]

Swayam: kya? Kaka bhi mere saath chal rahe hai kya?

Deepak: yes.

Swayam: par dad kyun? Iski kya jarurat thi?

Deepak: mujhse mat puch...yeh tere mom ka decision hai...ab woh is ghar ki boss hai...main kya karu?

Swayam: mom?

Nandini: swayam tumhe main achhe se janti hu...tumhe coffee aur sandwich k siva kuch banana nahi aata hai...tum roj breakfast, lunch aur dinner me sandwich aur coffee toh nahi kha sakte...

Swayam: par mom aappe bohot kaam par jayega...I will manage na...

Simran: no bro main hu na mom ki help karne k liye...

[deepak, nandini n swayam look at each other n burst out laughing]

Simran: what? Aap log has kyun raheho?

Swayam: kuch nahi sim...[turns towards his mom] mom best of luck n happy cooking...

Deepak n nandini: [laughs out loud]

Simran: main kisise baat nahi karungi...main ja rahi hu[baby face]

[swayam holds her wrist n stops her from going]

Swayam: aww meri cutie pie gussa ho gayi...solli...le yeh tere liye...

[he takes out a big chocolate box from his backpack n give it to her]

Simran:[getting excited] wow chocolates...thanx are the best..but phir bhi main aap sabse gussa hu...I know how to cook ok?

Dee-Nan-Swa: ha ha humme pata hai [laughs]

Swayams flight is been announced. Everyone hugs him. Then swayam n ramu kaka leaves for mumbai..

That day after reaching mumbai they both unpack their stuffs and sets the house. its almost 12 at night... Swayam goes to sleep thinking tomorrow will be a new day. A new beginning, he will join his new college and after 11 long years he will meet his best friend daisy.

Raiprakash house, Mumbai

It was 6 o' clock in the morning. A girl comes out from the bathrroom wearing bathrob. She hears her phone is ringing. She picks it up.

Sharon: hello

Rey: hey sharon. Good morning.

Sharon: good morning rey.. tum kaha tak pohche? Main bas paanch minute me ready hoke niche aa rahi hu..

Rey: sorry sharon main tumhare saath venue dekhne nahi aa sakta...woh princi ka msg aaya tha...unhone abhi mujhe college bulaya hai...

Sharon: that's ok rey'tum college jao...koi important kaam hogana...main venue check karke college aa jayungi...

Rey: ok sharon'see you in college...

Sharon: cya..bye.

Rey: bye.

Rey hangs up the phone. Sharon gets ready and sets out for checking the venue for charity event.

Swayam's flat, Mumbai

Swayam was sleeping but he heard someone calling out his name and was jerking him.

Kaka: swayam baba utho...aaj tumhara college me pehla din hai tum late ho jaoge...baba utho.

Sw: [he gets up gives a smile to kaka] good morning kaka.

Kaka: good morning beta tum jaldi se taiyar ho jao main tumhare liye nashta banata hu.

Sw: ji kaka.

He gets up from his bed and goes to the bathroom. Takes shower. Then dresses up and goes to the hall finish his breakfast and heads for college in his cycle.

He was on his way to college when he saw a puppy in front of his cycle. To save it he turned his cycle towards the right. He didn't notice a car was proceeding towards him.


Here is the end of chapter one. I know this chapter is boring. No swaron in this chapter. Plz forgive me. But this was needed. Sorry. N above all plz forgive me for my mistakes. I am writing for the first time. Plz share ur suggestions. I need them...I will try to improve.

Don't forget to press the like tab n leave ur precious comments'.


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Edited by Anindita91 - 09 November 2012 at 12:36am

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swayamsharon IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 2:48am | IP Logged
i liked it, waiting 4 swaron & i guess that car is of sharon & pm me 

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-Ripal- Goldie

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 3:07am | IP Logged
hey its awsum not at all boring
loved it amazing 
thnkss for the pm

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Phantasm IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 3:14am | IP Logged
Aww...swayam khud ki image banana chaata hai...good boy...and loved it when his parents and his sis were khiching his tangLOL
update soon

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sreya19roy Goldie

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Posts: 1277

Posted: 22 July 2012 at 3:20am | IP Logged


BORING??? Did u just call this update boring??? Shocked

By god if this is what ur "BORING" updates r then god knows how ur "INTERESTING" updates r gonna be like Confused

N man if this how u write ur "BORING" updates then I'll request u to give us loads n loads of "BORING" updates n yes bich-bich me "INTERESTING" updates v de dena LOL

Peee-leazeee don't call it boring yaar, it was super fun update Smile

I loved the bonding that Shekhawat family shares, its really sweet n cute Smile loved the way everyone was teasing swayam n how surprisingly his mom too joins in n supports them LOL

The bro-sis bond is really sweet Smile n Mr. n Mrs. Shekhawat seems to be one of those cool parents types n I have already started to love them Heart Smile

Bt ek shikayat, yeh kahan rok diya!? Why did u stop it here yaar?? Unhappy My gut feeling says that the car is gonna be sharon's n we might just get to see their 1st interaction or maybe a tiff too Wink bt since u have stopped it here, I feel like I'm gonna die out of excitement Unhappy

Well in short fatafati update chilo n I completely loved it Smile

Update soon n yeah nxt time ARO BORO UPDATE CHAI Tongue

Edited by sreya19roy - 22 July 2012 at 4:56am

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