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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 59)

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 6:41pm | IP Logged
awesume update.finally sharon got to know that swayam is her donald.flashback was so cute.nd present me swaron ki fight was so funny.loved the ending part also.
thanks for the pm nd pls update next part soon

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 3:30am | IP Logged
I really luv dis FF. Luv d way u describe! Very nice. Luv donald's expressions! Thanks 4 d pm.

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 3:46am | IP Logged

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
Yaayyy!!!Dancing Sharon finally knows that Swayam is her Donald!!!
Why did u stop here?? UnhappyContinue soon

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
Thanx for pm, and this time u create a history for me..
"itna fast update"..!! cant believe.. keep it up..
i am so happy after reading. and finally,we get sweet fight of swaron and their magical kiss..
and childhood convo of swaron was so cute..i loved it..
so this update is completely swaronilicious...
i loved this update..

but the mystery of those man is continued... so pls update fast just like u done this time...

and last,picturization part was awsum and too good..(as always)...
thanx
prateek


Edited by prateekdave7 - 18 July 2013 at 3:48am

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 7:23am | IP Logged
LLLOOOVVVEELLLYYY Heart
Awesum FF...

Read all the parts today itself...frstly thot aftr reading the 1st chap...will continue to read tom...but was tooo eager & couldnt resist myself frm reading all the partss...
Hattss offf...ClapClap


Daisy & Donald...awww shooo cuteee !!!
Swayam..Sharon...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Sharoon atlast knew abt her donald...
The fight was adorable...

But the creeep...!!! Dead
Resttt all is superbb !!!StarStar
*hugss* 

Love
Sakshi..!!! Smile

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Update nxxtt part ASAP...
Do pm me...

Sakshi...SmileSmileSmile

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 7:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tanuka_TanHa

Anindita Hug
 
I am again here without a PM
 
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Awesome update !
very well written.
i love how u use pictures in ur updates , its just make thr reading exprience more fun Big smile
finally sharon got to know that swayam is her donald .
the flashback was adorable .
present mein the way sharon was running behind swayam was cute and funny .
last mein swayam kissed sharon . awww Day Dreaming
will be waiting for the next part , update soon..
thanks for the PM.
 

hey tanuka Hug thank you so much for ur lovely comment...i am glad u liked it...thank you for ur kind words dear...love u Big smile

Originally posted by sanstina

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Awesome update Smile
Sharon finally realizes that Swayam is her Donald
She threw water on sleeping Swayam his reaction was cuteLOL
Swayam turned into white ghostLOL

thank you so much for ur sweet comment dear..i am glad u liked it  Big smile

Originally posted by swaronamit

Wow...loved it

thank you so much amit for ur sweet comment...i am glad u liked it Big smile

Originally posted by deep_Tanha

Hey My Cutie PieHug

The much much awaited chapter is here...finally ...i was waiting for this day...when sharon will know swayam is her donald..i had loads of expectations from this update...and u surpassed those expectation...beautiful update baby...so cute...

Awww...she got to know about her Donald from the baby doll she gifted him...I was literally dancing with joy...




Awww...the childhood falshback..it was too cute ...i dont have any words to praise...

Swayam: main bohot jaldi hi wapas aa jayunga daisy. Tu kisi aur ko apna dost mat banana. Mera wait karna. Aur hamara promise yaad rakhna.

Sharon: main kabhi kisi aur ko dost nahi banayungi. Hamesha apna promise yaad rakhungi. Aur tu bhi yaad rakhna. Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming


And the strond..tsunami ...aha...loved it...finally the romance...cute ..adorable...the kiss...


I LOVE THIS FF...OFFICIALLY Embarrassed


U R AMAZING SWTHRT...LOVELY UPDATE...plz update soon...






hey di Hug these pics r so so cute...i always love the pics which u add in ur comments...well about the comment again i have no words to reciprocate...thank you so so much..dilse...love u di Big smile

Originally posted by nature2

 cuteee meeting swaron
Big smilelove itBig smile
 
 
bachara swayam LOL
 
lovely part Dear ... keepit up Thumbs Up GreaT
bore ..ConfusedConfusedConfused its awoms Dear ...lovelyBig smile

thank you so much neerav for ur lovely comment Big smile

Originally posted by Joshua_TANHA

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Loved the update . Sharon didnt disappoint me , while she woke up she indeed said " how dare he " LOL
Finally sharon knows  that swayam is  Donald(cartoon)Tongue Loved their nok-jhok Smile and the kiss too Blushing
 
I love that you add pictures, 1. it helps me visualiseLOL 2. it brings back lots of old swaron memories Embarrassed
 
Now waiting for that update when swayam will ask about her fear

thank you so much dear for ur lovely comment...i am glad u liked it Big smile

Originally posted by swaron9113

superb awesme
chapter.

thank you so much for commenting...i am glad u liked it...Big smile

Originally posted by ABBY92

YEAY, I'm so happy that Sharon finally knows that Swayam is her Donald !! Loved the way she threw the bucket of water and flour on him !! He so deserved that for teasing her all those times !! This two are so cute and the romance scene was written very well too !! Not overly done but perfectly sweet, just like SwaRon !!

hey abi Hug thank you so much for ur lovely comment...thanks to you for saying that part was not overly done...i was a nervous regarding that romantic part...n yes our swaron (tanha) is just out of this world...Heart

Originally posted by Neeti96

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hey my dear baby sis Hug unres this post when u get time...take all ur time dear sis...love u Big smile

Originally posted by sweetsimi123

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR!!
Brilliantly penned update...Clap

Swaron were so cute and adorable...
Finally Sharon came to know that Swayam is her donald...
The way she took the revenge was sweet and cute...
Thnkx for the PM dear...
Update soon and Please do PM me...Star


hey simi thank you so much for ur lovely comment...Big smile

Originally posted by shaani2209

okay anu this was a super fast update from u and that to a first timeTongue...
coming to the update..
nice update...
liked the part when sharon empties the bucket of water on swayam and he wakes up thinking about tsunamiLOL
nice way of changing sides and disclosing the truth to sharon...
their tom and jerry chase was fun to read..
thanks for the pm...

thank you so much roshni for ur lovely comment Big smile n yes for the first time i updated this fast...LOL

Originally posted by sweetcherry95

thnx ani for updating
well well well is was superb update
atlast sharon knows that swayam is daisy
waiting to read further

thank you so much aruba for ur sweet comment Big smile

Originally posted by marauder

HAHAHA Sharon is not a storm or tsunami she is Calypso herself reincarnated LOL. This was just awesome. Ass I have told you I was looking forward to the moment when Sharon learns the truth about Swayam and this update crossed all my expectations. Loved that Sharon herself learned that Swayam is his donald. Their banter afterwards was awesome and kiss super awesome. And yeah thanks for the pics. They really freshen up some memories and make us visualise some new one. Superb update. Will be waiting for the next one.

P.S- Thanks. But I miss my Dazzler color. Red is just too over the top.


LOL true, very true...thank you so much shishir for ur lovely comment n for ur kind words...thank you so much for liking the idea of adding pics...i add them on a purpose...i can see the swaron scenes again n again...n to be honest i should thank u n rafi for this..for uploading the swaron scenes n episodes...thank you...n yes i also feel the colour of dazzler is really nice...very soothing...Big smile

Originally posted by Nehal92

res will unres after examz

hey nehal...take ur time dear...all the best for ur exams...i am sure u will rock Thumbs Up

Originally posted by shravani97

Kya baat hai Anindita...
Both the updates were awesome...mindblowing dear...
Finally Sharon came to know that Swayam is her Donald...
The pictures you used were very cute...
Loved this update a lot...
Great work...

hey shravani Hug thank you so much for ur kind words n ur lovely comment...i am glad u liked it...love u [::D]

Originally posted by TANHA_H

Awesome update !
very well written.

thank you so much for ur sweet comment dear...i am glad u liked it Big smile

Originally posted by lassipriya

ausum update its nt at all boring i loved it very well written..Clap
initially sharon waking up swayam n her rectn how dare he dats sharon..swayam pushg sharon.. swayam sleepg forgetg dat he slept with his daisy..Big smile 
Swaron flashback as kids was cute n adorable...Smile
Sharon knowg swayam as his donald by herself by c d deir doll she gave it to swayam was nice..Smile
sharon splashed wateron swayam.. poor swayam "OH NO MERE GHAR MEIN TSUNAMI AAYA HAI. MUJHE KOI BACHAO. MUJHE KOI BACHAO."  LOL    
at last sharon rung behind swayam..sharon throws flour n powder onhimSwayam lookg like a white ghost with flour and powder all over himLOL 
finally swayam kissing sharon..
Day Dreaming
will be waiting for the next part plz do update soon..


hey dear thank you so much for ur lovely comment...i am glad u liked it...thank you Big smile





Edited by Anindita91 - 09 December 2012 at 8:21am

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