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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 59)

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 9:27am | IP Logged
The way Ramu Kaka entered was hilarious and I'm sure Sharon must have looked extra cute in Swayam's clothes !! Just imagining her in that big sized clothes puts a smile on my face !! I'm happy that Swayam managed to convince Sharon to tell him the truth and now, the suspense is killing me as who was in the lift !!

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 9:49am | IP Logged
res after examz sorry dear Disapprove
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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 9:52am | IP Logged
awesome update...

thanks for the pm...

update soon...

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 10:03am | IP Logged
loving ur awesome update

continue sooon

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 10:07am | IP Logged
last ko chod kk
 
awosm update ClapClapClapClap fab workBig smileBig smile
 
 
cuteee jab ramu kaka aayeLOLLOLLOL dem nyc
 
update soon next chpBig smile

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 11:03am | IP Logged
oo my my..!!

anu dis was a fantastic part..

ok il call u barbie frm now on coz ur really lyk a doll to me..!!

seriosuly u wrote d chappy so well n u say u mess up n dnt knw to write duffer..!!

i loved deir bonding yaar..

hope dat cheap creep hasnt done nythng bad plz..

update soon..!!

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 11:07am | IP Logged
this was yet another beautiful one...but again cliffhanger...Confused
u really know how to test ur reader's patience..since when we are waiting for sharon's secret...better reveal it in the next update...Wink

kaka should have come after sometime...Tongue and swayam is always mr.perfect...even in FFs...Embarrassed
i loved the way she let out her tears in front of him...it shows how much she trust him...hopefully she vl reveal it in the next update...

overall awesome Anindita...Hug

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 11:23am | IP Logged
ausum update..
swaron first kiss disturbed by kaka n kaka teasg dem.. Wink
bohot jaldi hai mujhe bhagane ki. Their white cheeks turned red listening to that. dekho toh kaise tum dono ke gal lal ho rahe hai."
sharon cleaning d mess created in d room n decoratg it.. room interior was nicely discribed "it was looking presentable, bright, romantic and pure. Just like their love."
Sharon in swayams clothes LOL
swayam askg her who was he in d lift n sharon getg afraid dat swayam hate her nswayam makes her belive dat he can never hate his daisy...Swayam consoling her n helpg her to cumout of her insecurities was nicely penned down..Thumbs Up
as already said pics  in ur f r cherry on d cake.. dey fit d story well n also brings d old sweet memories of our beloved swaron Day Dreaming

eager to know the truth wat happend in sharon's life.. waitg for nxt part..


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