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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 50)

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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 10:24am | IP Logged
wonderful update!
very interesting..waiting eagerly for the next part!
thnx for the pm

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ami majhe koekta chaptr ms krchilam.. ekhn porlam.. khub cute hoeche..
loving it..

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 12:32am | IP Logged
sorry for late reply..
read 4 chapter together..all r awsum..
really loved it...
swaron first dance and both lost in their own world..cute vada in childhood and still following...
swayam know sharon is his daisy and teasing sharon lol..sharon is so possessive about her donald hayee..
swayam enjoying sharon blush and wanting sharon to comeout of diva shell..
really loved your pic selection
thanks for pm..

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 4:45am | IP Logged
thanks for d pm
lovely part..
Swaron cute little fights
loved it..
Swayam teasg sharon..
donald - monkey LOL
and sharon goes all defensive was really cute
"Mujhe tumhari help ki zarurat nahi hai. Samjhe tum?"
"toh kya apne Donald ki hai?""ha bohot hai. After all i lov..""after all you?""nothing." "ekdin tum khud hi is sentence ko complete karogi daisy."
Blushing
Swaron Jelly candy part was sweet..Smile
eager to know who was the person that made sharon go numb...
waiting for the next part!!


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Originally posted by nature2

.cuteee update 

 

kafi time baad 

 

 

swaron cute fight 

 

lovely part

 

update soon next chp soon plzz

 

i am glad u liked it...thank you so much for ur lovely comment... Big smile

 

Originally posted by Tanuka_TanHa

Anindita 

you are finally back with the update .

 

 

Awesome update anindita !!

the way swayam continously teases sharon by calling names to donald and sharon goes all defensive , is really cute .

swayam selected as the assistant culture sec for sharon .

why did u end there ??? , eager to know who was the person that made sharon go numb .

will be waiting for the next part , update soon..

thanks for the PM.

 

 

hey tanuka Hug thank you so much for the lovely comment...Big smile n i am really for that cliffhanger..Unhappy

 

Originally posted by Joshua_TANHA

 I loved the update !!!!

Swayam irritating sharon was cute !!  sharon's love for jellies  

 

Iam curious why she is like this ?? 

 

cliffhanger?? You had to stop there  who is the one who entered the lift 

 

 

hey joshua thank you so much for ur sweet comment dear Big smile

n i am really sorry for that cliffhanger Unhappy

 

Originally posted by arjuhiswaron007

Awesome Update style='orphans: 2;text-align:start;widows: 2;-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;word-spacing:0px' alt="Big smile" border=0 v:shapes="_x0000_i1034">

Loved the cute little fights!

 

thank you so much vedika for ur sweet comment Big smile i am glad u liked it Smile

 

Originally posted by deep_Tanha

Super adorable update dear...Star

Loved sharon saying she loves donald..Tongue
Loving it...Embarrassed
Awww...that candy part was cute...
U left it with a cliffhanger...Ouch
Plz plz update soon dearBig smile
 
PS- this is the cutest FF on swaron Embarrassed

hey di...Hug thank you so much for u lovely comment...i am glad to know from u that it is a cute FF...Embarrassed
love u di 

 

Originally posted by prateekdave7

Hey, thanx for pm, i enjoyed this part but u stop writing at a big suspense... who is the person..?? big question.., so pls update next part asap...
and yes, this part is long and awsum... i love to read this ff...

thanx
prateek

 

hey prateek i am glad to know that u like really this FF...thank you so much...it means a lot to me...n about the suspense u will get to know about it very soon...Big smile

 

Originally posted by sweetsimi123

Awesome Update dear...
Loved Swaron's cuteee fights...
Donald and Monkey...LOL
Swaron Jelly candy part was sweet...
The whole chapter was Amazing...
But i waiting eagerly to know who is the person who made Sharon go numb...
Thnkx for the Pm dear...

Update the next chapter soon dear...
Please PM me as always...

 

hey simi thank you so much for ur sweet comment...u will get to know that person very soon...Big smile

 

Originally posted by Mahirah

OMG OMG the last line scared me  Kaun hai woh ?!?!?!

 and the SwaRon romance and their nok jhok was very cutely penned 

 

iLoved the way Swayam was teasing his girl It was soo sweet..

 Cant wait to read more update soon 

 

thank you so much mahirah for ur sweet comment...Big smile

 

Originally posted by marauder

Fabulous update. I really liked reading the part where Swayam was teasing Sharon. It came as something really pleasant as well as amusing in its own way. Loved the cange of equation between the two. And then the way you showed the whole jelly candy thing was simply sweet and completely in sync with the SwaRon we know. And now by the looks of it, it feels like we will get to know something about Sharon's past too. Looking forward to it.

thank you so much shishir for ur lovely comment...Big smile i glad u liked reading the teasing part...Smile n yes very soon u will get to know about sharon's past..Approve]

 

Originally posted by sweetcherry95

update after a long tym

well i loved it

cute swaron fights

waiting for next

 

hey aruba i am glad u like it...thank you so much for ur comment dear..Big smile i know i was late in updating...i became late coz of my exams...sorry...Unhappy

 

Originally posted by binuja_

Hey anandita...  
Yet another cute update...loved swaron nok-jhoks...they re too cute to be true...  
My favorite is this one:

Swayam: thank you sir and don't worry how can i disappoint her. After all she is my boss. [in his mind] meri dil aur meri zindagi ki boss hai daisy. She is the one who rules my heart and will rule my life. 
How sweet swayam is and loved their first fight as cs and acs...  And cliffhanger...u really had to stop there??  style='orphans: 2;text-align:start;widows: 2;-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;word-spacing:0px' alt=Confused border=0 v:shapes="_x0000_i1050"> 

But anyways it was overall very beautifully penned down..  style='orphans: 2;text-align:start;widows: 2;-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;word-spacing:0px' alt=Clap border=0 v:shapes="_x0000_i1051">

 

thank you so much dear for ur sweet comment...Big smile n really sorry for that cliffhanger...Unhappy n i am glad u liked that line...thank you...

 

Originally posted by surbhimathur

Anindita...back finally! 

It was a very cutee update! Swayam teasing sharon for donald...lol that was funny! 
Waiting for sharon to know about his real donald!! 
Your screenshots literally reminded me of the diva!!!
    sigh. 
But It was amazinggg!!
 
Majnu pana i remembered! Lovelyyy 

Update soon!
I too wanna know who is that man! 

hey surbhi thank you so much for ur lovely comment...n i know how it feels like remembering about sharon the diva (sneha kapoor)...Ouch

thank you dear for ur comment...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by swaron20

superb update !!! :D loved the cute fights. wonder who dis guy is ? waiting for the next update.

thank you so much for commenting dear...i am glad u liked it...Big smile

 

Originally posted by Tanya_Swaronluv

It was soo good..i loved this update..oh please it was still short haan..next time aur bara...please jaldi jaldi update kia karona..i love reading this FF..and y do u have to stop there..cliffhanger pe chor dia...and please bus next chp main donald aur daisy reveal kardena please haa..
Love u...

hey tanya i am glad u liked the update n u like reading this FF Big smile u think its short??? Shocked isse bhi long kaise likhu?? i will try to do so...but not sure haan...n yes i will try to update soon this time...love u too Hug

 

Originally posted by Edlyn

Very cute update! I loved the first part of the update- the jelly candy one!  style='orphans: 2;text-align:start;widows: 2;-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;word-spacing:0px' alt=LOL border=0 v:shapes="_x0000_i1061">Wondering who's the new person is?! Update soonish ;)

thank you so much for commenting dear...it means a lot...thank you...Big smile

 

Originally posted by an_skyfighter

why did u have to stop at such a cliffhanger ??
update soon plzzz

 

thank you for commenting n so sorry for that cliffhanger..thank you for the comment Big smile

 

Originally posted by sadiyaswaron

Awesome update
It was really cute.Swayam teasing sharon alt=LOL border=0 v:shapes="_x0000_i1062"> was adorable
Cliffhanger?? plz update next part soon

thank you so much sadiya for the sweet comment...Big smile

 

Originally posted by TANHA_H

 loved the update 

Swayam irritating sharon was cute !! sharon's love for jellies 

N THANKQ SOOO MUCH TO PM ME

 

 

UPDATE SOON NEXT CHP

 

thank you so much dear for ur sweet comment...i am glad u liked it...Big smile

 

Originally posted by dvmishra

Nice update. Plz update soon

 

thank you so much for the comment dear...Big smile



Edited by Anindita91 - 06 December 2012 at 1:08am

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 1:12am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Neeti96

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Lovely update di!!

I loved each n every part!

U included dat she likes those jelly wale candies..aww how cute!!

And as always, the use of pics was just awesome!!

Update soon!

And sorry for the late unres!

hey neeti Hug how many times i will have to tell u don't say sorry to me Unhappy plz dear don't do these formalities with me...Smile n yes thank you so much for ur lovely comment..love u sweets Big smile

 

Originally posted by swaron09

this was sooo adorable...

just loved 

waiting for the suspense to be opened. plz update soon!

thank you so much for commenting dear...i am glad u liked it...Big smile

 

Originally posted by sanstina

Awesome update 

Reveal the suspense soon

thank you so much for commenting tina..i am glad u liked it Big smile 

 

Originally posted by shravani97

Welcome back Anindita...
Awesome update...
Waiting for the suspense to be revealed...
Loved it to the core...

 

hey shravani Hug i am glad u liked it...thank you so much for the sweet comment...Big smile

 

Originally posted by ABBY92

LOL, That was sweet of Swayam to bring those jelly candies for Sharon and I love how he continues teasing her about Donald !! I wonder who entered the lift in the end !!! Hopefully, now Swayam and us will all know why Sharon changed so much and maybe Swayam will reveal to her that he is her Donald !!

 

hey abi Hug thank you so much for ur lovely comment...yup very soon u all n swayam will get to know why she changed so much...thank you so much for the comment Big smile

 

Originally posted by Sudha-SK

Another awesome update dear :) Loved the cute tiffs between SwaRon. Swayam teasing Sharon about her Donald and her reaction to it were amusing. The whole jelly candy part was nicely done and i liked how you got this side of Sharon out that only Swayam knew...i see he is confused as to what changed her and how you ended the update tells me we will soon get to know about Sharon's past. Looking forward to the next update..and please update soon this time since you left as on a cliffhanger. 

hey sudha Hug thank you so much for the lovely comment...n yes very soon sharon's past will be revealed...i know last time i was very late in updating Unhappy really sorry for that...thank you so much for ur comment..Big smile

 

Originally posted by shaani2209

After a long time anindita...

coming to the update...

swayam is now her ACS... so waiting to read how he tells her about he being her donald...

and sharon likes jelly candy's thats my fav too...

do update soon..

thanks for the pm...

hey roshni really jelly candy's r ur fav too...thats great...btw thank you so much for ur sweet comment dear...Big smile

 

Originally posted by 1D_D3-Crazy

thanks for the pm and nice update :) atleast SwaRon will be closer that now he's her assistant 

 

Nikki <3

hey nikki thank you so much for ur sweet comment...Big smile

 

Originally posted by pri_swaron

Funfilled chp!! Kitne tym k baad Swaron ka cute fyt dekhne ko mila n the pictures were just icing on the cake
Eagerly waiting for Swayam to reveal his surprise n knw abt Sharon's behaviour

 

hey pri thank you so much for commenting...i am glad u liked it Big smile

 

Originally posted by frankyfio

aftr a long tym reading one of my fav. FF
tnx

awesome 
n btw u got to update sooon
cuz u have made us impatient by the cliffhanger


waiting for the next update

i am glad to know this is one of ur FF...it really means a lot to me...thank you so much...n yes thanks a lot for ur lovely comment dear...Big smile

 

Originally posted by toshanaik3011

after a long time reading this FF...

awesome update...

thanks for the pm...

update soon...

 

hey thank you so much for ur sweet comment dear Big smile

 

Originally posted by princessaaliya

wonderful update!

very interesting..waiting eagerly for the next part!

thnx for the pm

 

thank you so much for commenting dear...i am glad u liked it..Big smile

 

Originally posted by princess_mimi

ami majhe koekta chaptr ms krchilam.. ekhn porlam.. khub cute hoeche..

loving it..

hey mimi Hug amar khub bhalo lagche toke onekdin por comment korte dekhe...thank you so much for the sweet comment dear Big smile

 

Originally posted by swayamsharon

sorry for late reply..
read 4 chapter together..all r awsum..
really loved it...
swaron first dance and both lost in their own world..cute vada in childhood and still following...
swayam know sharon is his daisy and teasing sharon lol..sharon is so possessive about her donald hayee..
swayam enjoying sharon blush and wanting sharon to comeout of diva shell..
really loved your pic selection
 
thanks for pm..

its okay dear...no need to say sorry...i am glad u liked the pics which i added...thank you so much for ur lovely comment...Big smile

 

Originally posted by lassipriya

thanks for d pm
lovely part..
Swaron cute little fights loved it.. 
Swayam teasg sharon.. 
donald - monkey  and sharon goes all defensive was really cute
"Mujhe tumhari help ki zarurat nahi hai. Samjhe tum?""toh kya apne Donald ki hai?""ha bohot hai. After all i lov..""after all you?""nothing.""ekdin tum khud hi is sentence ko complete karogi daisy." 
Swaron Jelly candy part was sweet..

eager to know who was the person that made sharon go numb...

waiting for the next part!!

hey dear i am glad u liked it...thank you so much for commenting dear...Big smile



Edited by Anindita91 - 05 December 2012 at 1:16am

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