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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 47)

Mahirah Senior Member
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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
OMG OMG the last line scared me ShockedShocked Kaun hai woh ?!?!?!
 and the SwaRon romance and their nok jhok was very cutely penned EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

iLoved the way Swayam was teasing his girl Big smileIt was soo sweet..
 Cant wait to read more update soon Star
 


Edited by Mahirah - 29 November 2012 at 11:34pm

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Anindita91

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 12:00am | IP Logged
Fabulous update. I really liked reading the part where Swayam was teasing Sharon. It came as something really pleasant as well as amusing in its own way. Loved the cange of equation between the two. And then the way you showed the whole jelly candy thing was simply sweet and completely in sync with the SwaRon we know. And now by the looks of it, it feels like we will get to know something about Sharon's past too. Looking forward to it.

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 12:33am | IP Logged
update after a long tym
well i loved it
cute swaron fights
waiting for next

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Hey anandita... Smile
Yet another cute update...loved swaron nok-jhoks...they re too cute to be true... Smile
My favorite is this one:

Swayam: thank you sir and don't worry how can i disappoint her. After all she is my boss. [in his mind] meri dil aur meri zindagi ki boss hai daisy. She is the one who rules my heart and will rule my life.
How sweet swayam is and loved their first fight as cs and acs... Wink And cliffhanger...u really had to stop there?? Confused

But anyways it was overall very beautifully penned down.. Clap

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 1:32am | IP Logged
Anindita...back finally! Big smile

It was a very cutee update! Swayam teasing sharon for donald...lol that was funny! LOL
Waiting for sharon to know about his real donald!! Embarrassed
Your screenshots literally reminded me of the diva!!! Cool   sigh. Ouch
But It was amazinggg!! Clap
Majnu pana i remembered! Lovelyyy Day Dreaming

Update soon!
I too wanna know who is that man! Shocked

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 1:45am | IP Logged
superb update !!! :D loved the cute fights. wonder who dis guy is ? waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 2:45am | IP Logged
It was soo good..i loved this update..oh please it was still short haan..next time aur bara...please jaldi jaldi update kia karona..i love reading this FF..and y do u have to stop there..cliffhanger pe chor dia...and please bus next chp main donald aur daisy reveal kardena please haa..
Love u...Big smile

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 3:00am | IP Logged
Very cute update! I loved the first part of the update- the jelly candy one! LOL Wondering who's the new person is?! Update soonish ;)

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