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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 45)

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
Hey Anindita, really sorry for such late comments but you know as to why right..so please forgive Embarrassed Coming to the update it was awesome as usual loved the childishness in the the flashback part and that was adorable :) Both Swayam and Shaorn thinking about the promises was nice. The fear in Sharon for what happened 4 years before is intriguing..and i want to read further to know the changed in dimensions between swaron. As always loved the pics :) a very nice touch you give. A lil small as you yourself said so..so update soon :) 

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 3:19am | IP Logged
d update wass sooo cute!! 
Nd Im sorry for being late!! 

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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 5:08am | IP Logged
hi lovely ff ..
plz pm me wen u update

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 4:18am | IP Logged
another mystery. now wht happened to sharon 4 years back that changed her so much. 
update soon and do pm me

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plz update soon

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Nice update

eagerly waiting for update

Pls PM me

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 7:59pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Neeti96

Amazing update as always!

I loved the use of the pictures!

The flashback was really cute and sweet! SwaRon were so adorable as kids!

And I loved Sharon's possessive behaviour towards her Donald

I can't wait for her to find out he is none other than Swayam!!

Short and sweet update. Thanks for the PM

Best of luck for ur xams

 

hey neeti Hug thank you so much for ur sweet comment n for ur wish...Big smile


 

 

Originally posted by sreya19roy

Amazing update sleeping beauty  

SwaRon were so so sooo cute n adorable as kids n that promise part...awww it was chooo chweeet...their innocence took my heart way...super duper adorable  

I loved how Sharon got possessive n all about her Donald...I wonder what her reactions will be when she will get to know about swayam n realise that all this while swayam was jaan-boojh k teasing her 

Gosh I'm dying to see her reaction after she finds out that swayam is none other than her very own Donald...it would be really really funny  

All in all a short bt really sweet n cute update  

Best of luck for ur xams SB 

 

hey sreya thank you so much for ur sweet comment n wish... Hug

 

 

Originally posted by --NishaGoyal--

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busy with exams??? Wink all the best cutie... Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by deep_Tanha

Hey swthrt

this is not fair...how can u write sooo cute updates...hehe...this update was so damn adorable...i don't have any words...m spellbound...swaron monologues..

jab maine mere Donald kaha tha toh swayam inta smile kyun kar raha tha jaise woh bohot khush ho.

Sharon: kar raha tha toh mujhe kya. Donald ko cartoon bolta hai. How dare he say that?  Idiot, gadha, ullu..awww...she is so cute


toh tumhe woh promise yaad hai. Tum kuch nahi bhuli daisy. Bohot jaldi hi tumhe pata chal jayega tumhara Donald tumhare pass aa chuka hai.  goshh...i can visualize him...saying this n flashing that smile...



their promise...

Swayam: [he extends his tiny hand towards sharon] toh vaada kar ki main hi hamesha tere baby ka dadda  rahunga. Kabhi koi aur nahi banega. Main hi hamesha tera dost rahunga.

Sharon: [she places her tiny palms on his] ha vadda.

 

so adorable...so pure...childhood love...

the twist...she is having a past...u left it on a cliffhanger...plz plz update soon swthrt...after ur exams ..will be waiting...luv u swthrt 

PS- the dolll is sooo cuteee 


 

hey di Hug thank you so much for ur sweet comment...love u too di...

 

 

Originally posted by Mahirah

The update was soo chootuu and soo cute 

 

iLoved SwaRon ke bachpan ka romance, it was indeed beautiful and perfectly penned 

 

And I cant wait to read wat happened with sharon 

 Please update as soon as possible ^^

And all the very best for your exams :)

 

thank you so much for ur wish and ur sweet comment mahirah...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by namratajadhav

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unresd

glad u updated b4 i go..!!

well dat was so swt of both of dem to keep up d promise yaar..!!

 d entire convo was fun to read..!!

bt wat did happen 4 years ago..?

do let us knw soon..!!

n sry dint knw tere xamz chalu hai..
all d best darling..!!

 

hey candy plz don't say sorry yaar...n thank you so much for ur wish...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by marauder

This was such a cute update. I really liked the begining where Sharon was full on angry and calling Swayam name for calling her Donald cartoon. It was cute as well sweet and not to mention amusing. It was good to see a memory from their childhood. There was certain innocence and purity in the way you wrote about it. Loved reading that part. And going by last part it looks like there are some mystery coming our way, may be the incident which turned Sharon so cold. Looking forward to the next update. 

 

thank you so much shishir for ur sweet comment...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by arjuhiswaron007

Aww!! Such a sweet update

But am eagerly waiting to know what is the twist!

Update asap after Exams!!

Once Again, Best of Luck

 

thank you so much vedika for ur wish and comment...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by surbhimathur

Anindita...i am so sorry i didn't commented on the last chap! 

But finally swayam came to know that sharon in her daisyy!! 
yayyy!! 
and i too loved that--mera donald!! awww...!! 
and sharon getting gussa on swayam...lol!! amazing! 

and which incident is hampering sharon? 

all the best for your exams! 
Do well!! and rock itt! 

 

hey surbhi plz don't say sorry dear...its absolutely alright...n thank you so much for ur wish...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by shaani2209

aww adorable update...

thanks for the pm...

 

thank you so much roshni for commenting...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by Ananya.SwaRon

lovely update BBM.

i loved the Sharon and Swayam childhood. the doll added to the charm. would love to read the next chapter and would like to know what made Sharon doubt her inner self. thanks for the PM.

 

hey sissy Hug thank you so much for ur lovely comment...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by sadiyaswaron

Aww It was soo cute update
Lol sharon cursing swayam n swayam laughing thinking about sharon's reaction  
The best part was flashback little swaron were more cuter n adorable
Sharon have a past that we know but what is it that she doubt about herself??
Waiting for next part
Once again best of luck for ur exams Di

 

thank you so much sadiya for ur wish n ur sweet comment..Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by Joshua_TANHA

what happened with sharon 4 years back :O :O

 

hey joshua...thank you so much for commenting...n to know what happened 4 years back u have to read further Tongue

 

 

Originally posted by nature2

 The update was soo chootuu and soo cute 

iLoved SwaRon ke bachpan ka romance, it was indeed beautiful and perfectly awosm

n 4 saal bad  mer khayaal say swayam  uk  chal gaya

 

thank you so much dear for commenting...Big smile

 

Originally posted by binuja_

Aww it was too cute...how do u manage to create so cute FFs...  
Eagerly waiting for what hppnd to Sharon before 4yrs... 

 

thank you so much dear for ur sweet comment Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by Rutu

That was the sweetest update I have ever read Anindita. The doll talk was sooo adorable and cute. The promise which they made when they were just five year old, the innocence was aptly brought out by you. So now its sure that they consider each other as more than friends, but the last bit confused me. Something happened kya 4 years back, because thinking about the same Sharon is sad and is guilty ? Oh the suspense will kill me. But can't help studies are more important. Do well in exams. But by the time you will update after 22nd november, mere exams tabhi start honge 

 

aww all the best rutu for ur exams...i am sure u will rock...do well...n thank you so much for ur lovely comment dear Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by Edlyn

Amazing updatee ! Hope we get to knw what happened with Sharon. Updatee soon xx

 

thank you so much for commenting dear...Big smile



Edited by Anindita91 - 29 November 2012 at 8:03pm

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 7:59pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by frankyfio

awesome
loved it

 

thank you so much for commenting dear Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by pri_swaron

Amazing as usual but chotu sa tha!! but no probs...u found tym to update between ur exams..thanks for that

can't wait for the moment when Sharon will come to know about Donald...n yes woh toh bahut zyada handsome ho gaya hai

 

yup true LOL bohot jyada hi handsome ho gaya hai...thank you so much for ur sweet comment dear Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by sweetcherry95

chooo shweet and cute update

love it truly

update next soon

 

thank you so much aruba...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by swaron9113

nice update

 

thank you so much dear Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by 1D_D3-Crazy

Thanks for the pm and nice update :D sweet flashback

 

Nikki <3

 

thank you so much nikki...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by TANHA_H

 Amazing update as always!

 

thank you so much dear Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by princessaaliya

wow..as always brilliant update!

 

thank you so much dear Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by ABBY92

That is so sweet of Sharon to keep Swayam's old room so up to date in his memory !! The part where small Swayam and Sharon make the promise of being together always was so cute !! I wonder what happened 4 years ago that Sharon is so upset about !! I hope she finds out soon that Swayam is her Donald !!

 

thank you so much abi for ur sweet comment Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by sweetsimi123

Hey all the updates/chapters were Awesome...please update the next chapter soon...

 

 

i am glad u liked them...n thank you so much for ur comment...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by shravani97

Fabulous update dear...
Beautifully written...
Nice pics...
Flashback was really very sweet...
Sharon is so possesive towards her Donald...
Loved it to the core...

 

thank you so much shravani for ur lovely comment...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by prateekdave7

Hey, first of all a huge thanx for pm... i enjoyed this part... and the sharon pic is awsum.. u definitly posted the perfect sharon's expression.. i like it...
and swaron "momma dadda" scene was extreamly funny and interesting.. i enjoyed each and every part of u'r ss (as usual)...
yes, this part was so small but exam are more important.. so all the best for u'r exams...
waiting for next update...
goodluck...

 

hey prateek thank you so much for ur wish and for ur sweet comment...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by toshanaik3011

awesome one...

shot and sweet...

thanks for the pm...

 

 

thank you so much dear for commenting Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by ShrutikaSwaRon

Awesome update...luved swaron as kids n their vaada...but what is it that sharon is hidding from swayam...continue soon n thnx for pm.

 

hey shrutika thank you so much for ur sweet comment dear...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by tanzz15

First of all amar kan dhora uchit!!!!!!!  
so dhorlam..**

Mar dite chaile dite paris coz I deserve a slap!!  for being super late!!!  

Then comes a tight hugie for my Ani...  



Then about this update..  


1.Again a superbly decorated update...  mood fresh ho gaya ekdum!!  

2.Awesome connection with the childhood,esp that pic of da
Doll..Awweee..cho chweet... [:D/]

3.Baby Daisy and Donald as Momma and Dadda..
 


4.Sharons dialogue...-Agar koi bhi ladki Donald ke pass bhi haya naa toh uss ladki ki khyer nahi..HE IS MINE!!!   

Loved this chweet chweet yummy yummy my ani ani update  

 

awwiee my dear friend...Hug i know tor exam...so plz no kaan dhora dhori...thank you so much dear for ur sweet comment...Big smile 

 

 

Originally posted by AmRiTa_S

Cute one again..5 year old SwaRon and dere conversation was so CUTE.

 

P.S Love the Sneha pic you have used in this update...Miss her SO much. 

 

Thnx for the PM..all the best fr you exams 

 

thank you so much amrita for ur sweet comment...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by BusyIndivaBee

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-unres-

 

hey anindita di 

i love ur ff

donald n daisy

i love them too

watched a lot of them as a kid 

and its a treat to imagine swaron as donald n daisy

the beginning when swaron meet n sharon scared of dogs and both of them remembering donald and daisy due to their actions

then swaron meet in college

and swayam being selected as the 6th dancer 

swayam on his way to meet daisy and finds sharon in that park where he n his daisy used to play

sharon trying to ignore him ans finally swayam recognised his daisy yeahhh

awww sharon told swayam that donald is her best friend

and swayam wanting to tease sharon so called donald a cartoon

hehe

sharon ka gussa was fun to read

and swayams smile when sharon called him "mera donald"

awww sharon visits swayams house every sunday coz it would remind her of donald 

she renovated his room

and that flash back was sooo cute

both of them promising to be together for ever and swayam would be the dada  of sharons baby 

im so glad both of them kept their promise

wait what was that di

what happened to sharon in her past

please dont seperate them 

hope swayam tells sharon soon that he is her donald

continue soon

all the best for ur exams

will pray for u 

 

aww thank you so much lalita for ur wish n for commenting...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by Sudha-SK

Hey Anindita, really sorry for such late comments but you know as to why right..so please forgive  Coming to the update it was awesome as usual loved the childishness in the the flashback part and that was adorable :) Both Swayam and Shaorn thinking about the promises was nice. The fear in Sharon for what happened 4 years before is intriguing..and i want to read further to know the changed in dimensions between swaron. As always loved the pics :) a very nice touch you give. A lil small as you yourself said so..so update soon :) 

 

hey sudha thank you so much for ur sweet comment dear...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by gunnu1

d update wass sooo cute!! 

Nd Im sorry for being late!! 

 

thank you so much dear for commenting n no need to say sorry...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by lassipriya

hi lovely ff ..
plz pm me wen u update

 

thank you so much for ur comment dear n i will surely pm u...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by an_skyfighter

another mystery. now wht happened to sharon 4 years back that changed her so much. 

update soon and do pm me

 

hey i will surely pm u...thank you so much for ur comment...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by reet_26

plz update soon

 

sure reet...thank you for ur comment Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by Suni1986

Nice update

eagerly waiting for update

Pls PM me

 

thank you so much dear...i will surely pm u Big smile



Edited by Anindita91 - 29 November 2012 at 8:06pm

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