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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 44)

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 10:13am | IP Logged
Fabulous update dear...
Beautifully written...
Nice pics...
Flashback was really very sweet...
Sharon is so possesive towards her Donald...
Loved it to the core...

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Hey, first of all a huge thanx for pm... i enjoyed this part... and the sharon pic is awsum.. u definitly posted the perfect sharon's expression.. i like it...
and swaron "momma dadda" scene was extreamly funny and interesting.. i enjoyed each and every part of u'r ss (as usual)...
yes, this part was so small but exam are more important.. so all the best for u'r exams...
waiting for next update...
goodluck...

Prateek


Edited by prateekdave7 - 18 July 2013 at 3:46am

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
awesome one...
shot and sweet...
thanks for the pm...

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
Awesome update...luved swaron as kids n their vaada...but what is it that sharon is hidding from swayam...continue soon n thnx for pm.

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 2:41am | IP Logged
First of all amar kan dhora uchit!!!!!!! Confused
so dhorlam..*Tongue*

Mar dite chaile dite paris coz I deserve a slap!! Ouch for being super late!!! Confused

Then comes a tight hugie for my Ani... Hug



Then about this update.. Big smile


1.Again a superbly decorated update... Clap mood fresh ho gaya ekdum!! Embarrassed

2.Awesome connection with the childhood,esp that pic of da
Doll..Awweee..cho chweet... [:D/]

3.Baby Daisy and Donald as Momma and Dadda..
Silly


4.Sharons dialogue...-Agar koi bhi ladki Donald ke pass bhi haya naa toh uss ladki ki khyer nahi..HE IS MINE!!! Embarrassed Day Dreaming

Loved this chweet chweet yummy yummy my ani ani update Embarrassed

Edited by tanzz15 - 12 November 2012 at 2:45am

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 10:21am | IP Logged

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
Cute one again..5 year old SwaRon and dere conversation was so CUTE.

P.S Love the Sneha pic you have used in this update...Miss her SO much. 

Thnx for the PM..all the best fr you exams Smile

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 7:28am | IP Logged
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hey anindita di Hug
i love ur ff
donald n daisy
i love them too
watched a lot of them as a kid 
and its a treat to imagine swaron as donald n daisy
the beginning when swaron meet n sharon scared of dogs and both of them remembering donald and daisy due to their actions
then swaron meet in college
and swayam being selected as the 6th dancer Party
swayam on his way to meet daisy and finds sharon in that park where he n his daisy used to play
sharon trying to ignore him ans finally swayam recognised his daisy yeahhh
awww sharon told swayam that donald is her best friend
and swayam wanting to tease sharon so called donald a cartoon
hehe
sharon ka gussa was fun to read
and swayams smile when sharon called him "mera donald"
awww sharon visits swayams house every sunday coz it would remind her of donald Smile
she renovated his room
and that flash back was sooo cute
both of them promising to be together for ever and swayam would be the dada  of sharons baby LOL
im so glad both of them kept their promise
wait what was that di
what happened to sharon in her past
please dont seperate them 
hope swayam tells sharon soon that he is her donald
continue soon
all the best for ur exams
will pray for u Wink


Edited by sajan_swaron - 14 November 2012 at 7:35am

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