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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
Cute one again..5 year old SwaRon and dere conversation was so CUTE.

P.S Love the Sneha pic you have used in this update...Miss her SO much. 

Thnx for the PM..all the best fr you exams Smile

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 7:28am | IP Logged
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hey anindita di Hug
i love ur ff
donald n daisy
i love them too
watched a lot of them as a kid 
and its a treat to imagine swaron as donald n daisy
the beginning when swaron meet n sharon scared of dogs and both of them remembering donald and daisy due to their actions
then swaron meet in college
and swayam being selected as the 6th dancer Party
swayam on his way to meet daisy and finds sharon in that park where he n his daisy used to play
sharon trying to ignore him ans finally swayam recognised his daisy yeahhh
awww sharon told swayam that donald is her best friend
and swayam wanting to tease sharon so called donald a cartoon
hehe
sharon ka gussa was fun to read
and swayams smile when sharon called him "mera donald"
awww sharon visits swayams house every sunday coz it would remind her of donald Smile
she renovated his room
and that flash back was sooo cute
both of them promising to be together for ever and swayam would be the dada  of sharons baby LOL
im so glad both of them kept their promise
wait what was that di
what happened to sharon in her past
please dont seperate them 
hope swayam tells sharon soon that he is her donald
continue soon
all the best for ur exams
will pray for u Wink


Edited by sajan_swaron - 14 November 2012 at 7:35am

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
Hey Anindita, really sorry for such late comments but you know as to why right..so please forgive Embarrassed Coming to the update it was awesome as usual loved the childishness in the the flashback part and that was adorable :) Both Swayam and Shaorn thinking about the promises was nice. The fear in Sharon for what happened 4 years before is intriguing..and i want to read further to know the changed in dimensions between swaron. As always loved the pics :) a very nice touch you give. A lil small as you yourself said so..so update soon :) 

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 3:19am | IP Logged
d update wass sooo cute!! 
Nd Im sorry for being late!! 

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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 5:08am | IP Logged
hi lovely ff ..
plz pm me wen u update

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 4:18am | IP Logged
another mystery. now wht happened to sharon 4 years back that changed her so much. 
update soon and do pm me

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Nice update

eagerly waiting for update

Pls PM me

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 7:59pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Neeti96

Amazing update as always!

I loved the use of the pictures!

The flashback was really cute and sweet! SwaRon were so adorable as kids!

And I loved Sharon's possessive behaviour towards her Donald

I can't wait for her to find out he is none other than Swayam!!

Short and sweet update. Thanks for the PM

Best of luck for ur xams

 

hey neeti Hug thank you so much for ur sweet comment n for ur wish...Big smile


 

 

Originally posted by sreya19roy

Amazing update sleeping beauty  

SwaRon were so so sooo cute n adorable as kids n that promise part...awww it was chooo chweeet...their innocence took my heart way...super duper adorable  

I loved how Sharon got possessive n all about her Donald...I wonder what her reactions will be when she will get to know about swayam n realise that all this while swayam was jaan-boojh k teasing her 

Gosh I'm dying to see her reaction after she finds out that swayam is none other than her very own Donald...it would be really really funny  

All in all a short bt really sweet n cute update  

Best of luck for ur xams SB 

 

hey sreya thank you so much for ur sweet comment n wish... Hug

 

 

Originally posted by --NishaGoyal--

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busy with exams??? Wink all the best cutie... Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by deep_Tanha

Hey swthrt

this is not fair...how can u write sooo cute updates...hehe...this update was so damn adorable...i don't have any words...m spellbound...swaron monologues..

jab maine mere Donald kaha tha toh swayam inta smile kyun kar raha tha jaise woh bohot khush ho.

Sharon: kar raha tha toh mujhe kya. Donald ko cartoon bolta hai. How dare he say that?  Idiot, gadha, ullu..awww...she is so cute


toh tumhe woh promise yaad hai. Tum kuch nahi bhuli daisy. Bohot jaldi hi tumhe pata chal jayega tumhara Donald tumhare pass aa chuka hai.  goshh...i can visualize him...saying this n flashing that smile...



their promise...

Swayam: [he extends his tiny hand towards sharon] toh vaada kar ki main hi hamesha tere baby ka dadda  rahunga. Kabhi koi aur nahi banega. Main hi hamesha tera dost rahunga.

Sharon: [she places her tiny palms on his] ha vadda.

 

so adorable...so pure...childhood love...

the twist...she is having a past...u left it on a cliffhanger...plz plz update soon swthrt...after ur exams ..will be waiting...luv u swthrt 

PS- the dolll is sooo cuteee 


 

hey di Hug thank you so much for ur sweet comment...love u too di...

 

 

Originally posted by Mahirah

The update was soo chootuu and soo cute 

 

iLoved SwaRon ke bachpan ka romance, it was indeed beautiful and perfectly penned 

 

And I cant wait to read wat happened with sharon 

 Please update as soon as possible ^^

And all the very best for your exams :)

 

thank you so much for ur wish and ur sweet comment mahirah...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by namratajadhav

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glad u updated b4 i go..!!

well dat was so swt of both of dem to keep up d promise yaar..!!

 d entire convo was fun to read..!!

bt wat did happen 4 years ago..?

do let us knw soon..!!

n sry dint knw tere xamz chalu hai..
all d best darling..!!

 

hey candy plz don't say sorry yaar...n thank you so much for ur wish...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by marauder

This was such a cute update. I really liked the begining where Sharon was full on angry and calling Swayam name for calling her Donald cartoon. It was cute as well sweet and not to mention amusing. It was good to see a memory from their childhood. There was certain innocence and purity in the way you wrote about it. Loved reading that part. And going by last part it looks like there are some mystery coming our way, may be the incident which turned Sharon so cold. Looking forward to the next update. 

 

thank you so much shishir for ur sweet comment...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by arjuhiswaron007

Aww!! Such a sweet update

But am eagerly waiting to know what is the twist!

Update asap after Exams!!

Once Again, Best of Luck

 

thank you so much vedika for ur wish and comment...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by surbhimathur

Anindita...i am so sorry i didn't commented on the last chap! 

But finally swayam came to know that sharon in her daisyy!! 
yayyy!! 
and i too loved that--mera donald!! awww...!! 
and sharon getting gussa on swayam...lol!! amazing! 

and which incident is hampering sharon? 

all the best for your exams! 
Do well!! and rock itt! 

 

hey surbhi plz don't say sorry dear...its absolutely alright...n thank you so much for ur wish...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by shaani2209

aww adorable update...

thanks for the pm...

 

thank you so much roshni for commenting...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by Ananya.SwaRon

lovely update BBM.

i loved the Sharon and Swayam childhood. the doll added to the charm. would love to read the next chapter and would like to know what made Sharon doubt her inner self. thanks for the PM.

 

hey sissy Hug thank you so much for ur lovely comment...Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by sadiyaswaron

Aww It was soo cute update
Lol sharon cursing swayam n swayam laughing thinking about sharon's reaction  
The best part was flashback little swaron were more cuter n adorable
Sharon have a past that we know but what is it that she doubt about herself??
Waiting for next part
Once again best of luck for ur exams Di

 

thank you so much sadiya for ur wish n ur sweet comment..Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by Joshua_TANHA

what happened with sharon 4 years back :O :O

 

hey joshua...thank you so much for commenting...n to know what happened 4 years back u have to read further Tongue

 

 

Originally posted by nature2

 The update was soo chootuu and soo cute 

iLoved SwaRon ke bachpan ka romance, it was indeed beautiful and perfectly awosm

n 4 saal bad  mer khayaal say swayam  uk  chal gaya

 

thank you so much dear for commenting...Big smile

 

Originally posted by binuja_

Aww it was too cute...how do u manage to create so cute FFs...  
Eagerly waiting for what hppnd to Sharon before 4yrs... 

 

thank you so much dear for ur sweet comment Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by Rutu

That was the sweetest update I have ever read Anindita. The doll talk was sooo adorable and cute. The promise which they made when they were just five year old, the innocence was aptly brought out by you. So now its sure that they consider each other as more than friends, but the last bit confused me. Something happened kya 4 years back, because thinking about the same Sharon is sad and is guilty ? Oh the suspense will kill me. But can't help studies are more important. Do well in exams. But by the time you will update after 22nd november, mere exams tabhi start honge 

 

aww all the best rutu for ur exams...i am sure u will rock...do well...n thank you so much for ur lovely comment dear Big smile

 

 

Originally posted by Edlyn

Amazing updatee ! Hope we get to knw what happened with Sharon. Updatee soon xx

 

thank you so much for commenting dear...Big smile



Edited by Anindita91 - 29 November 2012 at 8:03pm

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