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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 36)

--Tanzz-- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 6:33am | IP Logged
Hi ani... Hug
Dear,it was a super sweet update.. Embarrassed
Swayam resisting her from falling down was ...aweee... Embarrassed ...and loved that pic.. Smile
Loved that part where Daisy's donald,hold her hand coz she feared dogs... Wink
And at last donald gets to know his daisy...aweee...great... Embarrassed Clap
hugs... Smile
sorry for being late... Dead

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Crazy4AshVik IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Superb Update!!Big smile
and All the Best for your examsHug

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nj_SRKholic IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 9:31am | IP Logged
oo finally... atleast ek ko to pata chala ki ye ek dusre k frnds he..
ab ayega asli maja..
donald ka naam leti hi shaorn itz gonno b fun yaar..!!

all d best for ur examz update soon ab raha nahi jaata.. n bada vala update okk..!!

loved it to d core..!!

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marauder IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged
This was bit small but still good update. All though you could have spiced it up bit more with more fight :P. So wahi hua jaisa maine socha tha, Swayam recognized his daisy and decided to not disclose hi secret. I like it. And I am seriously looking forward to further updates to see how he messes with Sharon more and more. Nicley penned conversation sequence. Best bit was how Sharon tends to forget she is diva infront of him and start behaing naturally infront of him. Waiting for the next update.

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_Deepika_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged
comment edited 30 & 35Embarrassed

Edited by deep_Tanha - 02 November 2012 at 1:54pm

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prateek.007 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
First of all,thanx for pm.. so this part is awsum and i like the picture of mahesh... very funny... if i am not wrong, this guy is milimeter from 3 idiot movie...
so u done some diffrent aspects, which is pictures between story...
i am really appreciate u for this entique creation... becoz i never seen characters pictures in ff or ss. so i love this new adventure...
this part is gud that swayam is completely known about his daisy and his behaviour of flirting with sharon is interesting and funny... so i am waiting for the moment when swayam and sharon both collaps in swayum's house..
so update asap..
and last,all the best for u'r exams...


Edited by prateekdave7 - 18 July 2013 at 3:45am

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Snowey IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 4:15pm | IP Logged
Anindita this again was a super sweet update. Loved it and enjoyed reading it.
Actually i am on a away from IF mission as exams are close..but i just logged it today for some time off..and your PM and the update both made the visit worthwhile. I liked this new side of Sharon you showed..the one who is the real deal, Swayam's daisy..loved how you showed her playing with kids. Swayam on the other hand was so confused seeing her in the park and i liked how you did not imd gave in but kept the update flow and make it clear in the end that Sharon is Daisy. Swayam as expected did not tell her about it and is planning a surprise..looking forward to read how Sharon will react when she gets to know but more so i am waiting for Swayam's reaction and his change in equation towards Sharon in the college. 

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TANHA_H Goldie

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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 9:19pm | IP Logged

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