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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 30)

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
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awesome update ani di...Clap
loved it...
swayam dazzled everyone with his dance.
Day Dreaming
loved swaron dance
their chemistry was very well described...Big smile
swayam gonna meet his daisy/sharon...
waiting for it...
update next part soon...
Thanks for the pm!!
ps..Loved the pics you added...Smile





Edited by --NishaGoyal-- - 28 October 2012 at 4:11am

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
*UNRES*

This was such a cute, sweet n most importantly this was such a "SWARON LIKE" update Big smile

I was watching that thumbs down wala scene kal hi, so kinda connected with that scene very very well Smile

Their fight, dance n strong irresistible pull towards each other seemed completely perfect n it was most definitely very well executed...Brilliant writing I wud say...keep it up Thumbs Up

All in all it was an awesome update, simply outta this world...Superb Smile

Enjoyed every bit of it...loved it to the core Smile

Thanx a lot for the pm n update fast next time Smile

Edited by sreya19roy - 27 October 2012 at 4:09pm

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Hey swthrtHug

i am extremely late to comment on this chapter...i knowOuch...i read the update as soon as u updates it...was not having time to comment that time...i read the update again..before commenting...goshh...it was mind blowing..loving Diva sharon and attitude wala swayam...wow...his dance...Day Dreaming Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming...i was lost in dreamland...swaron dance part was awesome...dancing to the theme of heart beats...awww...loved their monologues ..they could recognize each other... from each move...wow...pure love...u r awesome my cutie pie...luv u EmbarrassedHeart


Edited by deep_Tanha - 02 November 2012 at 1:53pm

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Aah...so finally we are getting an update!! Wink

A really nycc update!! Thumbs Up
Swayam ka danceee...even wen i think abt that performance of his i go into a trance Day Dreaming
Then SwaRon ka dance together! Awww...! Embarrassed
Wow now swayam will go to sharon's house..or daisy's house!! Shocked
This is getting interesting! Big smile
Update soon!! Smile

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
Nice update dear!!! Excited to read further
pls update soon n thnx fr d pmSmile

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Finally you updated. This time it was a long break :) So finally the coveted dance performance happened. And Swayam surely dazzled everyone. Nicely written dance sequence of Swayam. But what stole the show in this update was Swayam's and Sharon's combined dance performance. It was wonderfully written and the explosive chemistry of the two was brought out in an awesome manner. Ending portion was intriguing as I think Swayam will realise that Sharon is her daisy and then he will not disclose his identity. Looking forward to the update.


Edited by marauder - 27 October 2012 at 4:11am

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
Anandita a pleasure read the update was. Loved the dance part and Sharon being true to her self will not agree to anything unless she gets proof..but looks like even the dance she shared did not convince her enough. Looks like Swayam is soon to find out Sharon to be his daisy..wondering what change it will bring in Swayam and to the equation they share. All the best for your exams..looking forward to the next update. 
P.S - As always loved the pics you added. 


Edited by Sudha-SK - 26 October 2012 at 3:03pm

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I loved the update..donald and daisy things were too good...i hope they met soon as daisy and donald...UPDATE soon,and Pm me...next time long wala...SmileBig smile

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