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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 29)

abhilasha_dream IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 8:31am | IP Logged
Plz update soon, its such a long tym since u updated it last

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--Rose-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Hey When will u update this ff?? PLEASE PM ME OK:-) I love this ff:-):-) please update na...

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Anindita91 IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3409

Posted: 26 October 2012 at 12:15pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by kritzzz_ArSha



thank you so much Smile



Originally posted by TANHA_H



thank you so much Smile



Originally posted by swayamsharon

hey it was good!!!! i really like your pic selection!!!! so specially for pic & yes waiting for swaron... 


thank you so much Smile



Originally posted by Mahirah


hayeee M just loving this disney romance of SwaRon



thank you so much Smile



Originally posted by sachiarsha


ausum update anindita...
pic queen han!!! u chose such perfect pics for each...
n yup nice fights n challange...
update jaldi n thnx for pm...


thank you so much sachi for liking it...jaldi update toh chodo main years ke baad update kar rahi hu...sorry Ouch




Originally posted by neetha




sorry anu fr late editin..actually long back pad liya tha..but unres karna bhool gayi thi..

well loved ReYam friendship n the challenge between swayam n sharon..god kitna jhagadthe hai yaar..awesome..update soon..


neetha maine kaha tha na mujhse sorry mat kehna...not fair...Disapprove btw thanx for liking it..Smile


Originally posted by --NishaGoyal--

Nice update..loved how swaron were fighting..and swayam challenged sharon...thanks for the pm..and waiting for the next update.


thank you so much nisha...Smile



Originally posted by Neeti96

Awesome FF..Sorry m a little late but i loved all the updates! Thanks for the pm! pls keep me updated! 

P.S - Even i have a Ramu Kaka in my OS..But he;s works in Sharon;s house 

Oh yeah n i loved Neha,Amar G,Bharat and Vishakha's style of talking which u used in this ! And awesome use of pics


thank you so much neeti for liking it...Smile



Originally posted by ShrutikaSwaRon

Nice update...luved d cute swaron fights...n gangs fun n masti...waiting eagerly for more swaron...thnx for pm.


thank you so much shrutika...Smile



Originally posted by cenation123

*facepalm* kitna ladte hai ye dono hai raam poor rey bas calm down hi khta rhta hai awesome update par wha ku stop kia audition bhi include karna tha *pouting* anyways fab update update asap


sorry dear...update asap k jaga main years k baad update kar rahi hu...sorry...Unhappy



Originally posted by Tanuka_TanHa

 awesome update anindita !!

swayams entry in college and meeting rey and the gang was nice

swaron fights are mast

hope to get more swaron part next time .

will be waiting for the next part , update soon...

thanks for the pm.



thank you so much tanuka...yeah there will be swaron parts in this chappy...Tongue



Originally posted by ABBY92

Liked the starting of ReYam's friendship and LOL at Bharat's comment to Sharon !! So, it's basically a love hate relationship going on for SwaRon...that's going to be interesting !!!


thank you so much abi for liking it...Smile



Originally posted by shaani2209

awesome update anindita...loved the reyam part thanks for the pm...


thank you roshni for liking it...Smile



Originally posted by Rutu

hey this one was awesome

sharon the liar haww

and swayam toh first day se studies mein engaged

he is gonna give audition for the 6th dancer i am gonna love the next update

update soon anindita


She did that coz she din't want anyone to know about her real side...n sorry rutu for being so late...thank you for commenting...Smile



Originally posted by mohitmohanty19

ass always...u r too goood...this chapter even mor awsmmm...:)


thank you so much mohit...Smile



Originally posted by Nehal92

wah!! just amazing!! :)


thank you so much nehal...Smile





Originally posted by -Jum-RulzZ-


gud dat yu kept yur promisee! :D :D 
chal coming to the Updateee.. 

FABulous presentation! :D :D 
really loved the pics and thE REYAM <3 part was awesssome! 
swayam toh will win the auditions and melt sharon down by his dance! :D

Dont worry! 
sharon will drop her mouth wen she sees our majnu bhai dance! :D 

Dont worry! :D 

and UPDATE wwas AWESOME do continue 
and mis Bhulakar! 

Demand batake jaana!



vese Anindita!

DEMAND TOH BOLDO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

WAITING SOOO LONG I AM!! - neha style!! 

telll.. re! 
or else tell the 


ON WEN YUR UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Varna dhamki dene ki kaam mein shuru kardoongi 
iss baar arshak bhi hain! :P :P 
dont worry! 
Hum sab tujhe dhamki denge ! 
Just tell us wen u'll update! PLSSS
cant wait much LONGER!! 




hey jum thank you for commenting...he he yes after all our majnu bhai is an awesome dancer...n yeah i am a big bhulakkar...pata hai mujhe chapter 3 pura read karna pada taki chap 4 likh saku...bhul gayi thi kaha kaise end kiya tha LOL



ye sab kaise bolti my cute lil spammer...i know how much u have missed spamming a lot...i am so happy that now r u bak in action Wink


My dear so sorry to make u wait this long...aapke kripa karke shant ho jayiye...main abse regularly update karungi...pagal hain tu...missed all these a lot...its great u r back...Big smile


Originally posted by misha24

Awsum update


thank you so much misha Smile



Originally posted by Sudha-SK

Awesome update Anandita, loved the pics you added. 

Swayam is going to give auditions for the 6th dancer and Sharon is going to be judging sure she is going to be impressed. Loved the lil tiff between SwaRon. The gang convo was nice. Looking forward to your next update. 


thank you so much sudha Smile



Originally posted by Luvsd3

read both the parts today...both were amezing...luvd the part when Swayum holding sharon with right hand and puppy with the other hand...Waiting for the next part...the additions...update soon and thanks for the pm


thank you so much himani...sorry for updating so late...Unhappy

Edited by Anindita91 - 26 October 2012 at 12:24pm

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Anindita91 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 12:16pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by tanzz15

hi ani,thanks 4 d pm.i must say u r a witty writer!class update,as a true writer u r able to keep suspenses amongst ur readers!!awesum write bud,keep going,huggs;) 


tania thank you so much...amar mone ache tui amay marbi abar update na ami finally update korchi...Tongue



Originally posted by marauder

In dono ka naam Donald aur Daisy nahi Tom and Jerry hona chaiyhe tha. Jab dekho ladte rehte hain. Waise awesome update. Loved the begining of Reyam's friendship and also loved the equation of gang. Waiting for the next update to see how Swayam dazzles everyone with his dance.
P.S - Loved how you presented this update. Awesome work.


LOL ha sahi hai tom n jerry suits them the best...thank you so much shishir for liking it...Smile



Originally posted by sreya19roy

Again an awesomeee update...superbly written yaar, amazing  

Its really nice to see that the ReYam friendship/special bond has already started  

Loved the fact that u have kept all the characters as it is in show  I personally feel that the way they were created is the best possible way they can be...every character was perfectly created n each one of them were perfect in its own way (nt anymore though, cvs have ruined all the characters n r still doing the same ) 

Anyways coming back to the update...I'm eagerly waiting to see sharon's reaction after our Majnu Boy leaves her mesmerised with his audition performance...super excited about the audition sequence  

Oh btw I loved those pic selection of urs...they perfectly suit those scenes n I really love the of presenting every scene with those pics, it kinda brings alive the whole situation n the characters...superb effort there Clap 

Fantastic update it was...really loved every bit of it  

Update soon btw 


1st of all I'm really sorry that I was sooo late regarding replying to ur pms and then commenting I have mentioned abt y I was sooo late...hope that u'll understand me n forgive me  bt agar fir v koi kami reh ay jaye to mai kan pakad k mafi mangti hoon  


cvs its better to leave that topic...Broken Heart thank you so much for liking it sreya...n so sorry for updating so late...Unhappy


Waise iss bareme baat toh ho chuki thi...phir bhi i do understand...n plz dear don't say sorry to me...i am ur friend... Smile



Originally posted by nature2

waiting for swaron... 


sorry dear for making u wait for so long...Unhappy



Originally posted by namratajadhav

Awesum update dear loved it..!!
Awaiting swayam's dance..!!
Update soon..!!


thank you so much namrata for liking it...n sorry for updating so late...Unhappy



Originally posted by gunnu1

Uh-maze-Ing!!! lovd it


thank you so much gunnu...Smile



Originally posted by Ananya.SwaRon

luved the update!
sorry,for the late reply!

loved they way you've described sharon hiding the truth'

swayam in turn is behaving calmly...and last but surely not the least..they think the other of being somewhat like daisy and donald'

awesome work! update soon!


hey ananya don't say sorry...did u forgot abt our rules of no sorry n thank you...btw i will have to say Tongue thank you so much for liking it...Smile



Originally posted by pratik54000

superb update...i know swaron moments were not so much but the story is progressing so i am very happy about that...

thanx for pm...and update next part soon...


thank you so much pratik...with time swaron moments will increase...Smile



Originally posted by AmritaluvSwaRon

Nice update and milte hi fight shuru...Sharon as usual yelling to hide her reality i love that about her and swayam as usual calm n compose ...cutie pie. Update soon and thnx fr PM. 


P.S The screenshots adds a lot more fun while reading 




thank you so much amrita for commenting...Smile



Originally posted by neeliyer

loved the reyam convo in class along with the prof ..  .. bharat's dailog was the best in this update .." arre tu isse kya puch raha hai thik hai ya nahi. Us insaan ke bareme soch jispe ye baras ke aayi hai. Mujhe toh taras aa raha hai us bechare par. "   



Update soon .. 


thank you so much for commenting Smile



Originally posted by meevee

Another awsum update...just waiting to c how Swayam changes Sharon's notions abt him with his dance...luking forward again to ur update!!!!!


thank you so much meera di for commenting...Smile



Originally posted by TanHa_Forever

doing great.loving how the characters are eing shown.very nice update :) keep writing it beautifully 


thank you so much dear for commeting...Smile



Originally posted by surbhimathur

The update was really nyc anindita! Swayam meetin d gang...nd wow he vl giv audition! And dun be sorry yar..update ws nyc! Waitin fr d nxt :))


thank you so much surbhi for commenting...Smile



Originally posted by frankyfio

like @swayamsharon mentioned 
i, too, liked ur pic selections

tnx for the pm 

pls updateee sooon


thank you so much for liking it dear Smile



Originally posted by -Alinaa-

Liked your writing. do pm me.


thank you so much for liking it...Smile



Originally posted by Coolioqueen

Late to read. Nice update. Good pics


thank you so much for commenting Smile



Originally posted by toshanaik3011

amazing update...

thanks for the pm...



thank you so much for commenting Smile



Originally posted by -mimi-

aree darun hoche..

sorry for late comment..

n amio amar college r 1st din e late hoechilam..

r ora ki 1st year r?? byt 1st year hole Rey GS ki kore hobe??


thank you so much mimi for kobe tor ff ta k update korbhi...kotodin hoye galo...Cry

Originally posted by swaronland

 so sorry for late

the update was awesome

continue soon & thanks for pm



thank you so much for commenting...Smile



Originally posted by Gaveshni



 nice frndship shown louisans


thank you so much gaveshni for commenting...Smile

Edited by Anindita91 - 26 October 2012 at 12:29pm

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Anindita91 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 12:17pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by -Nia-

Amazing FF Anindita! Donald-Daisy how cutee is that !!

Waiting for next update...Update soon and PM me! (:


thank you so much nia for liking it n commenting...Smile



Originally posted by sadiyaswaron

Last update was awesome
But I didn't get pm
Pls when u update


thank you so much for liking it n i am so so sorry sadiya for not sending u time se pakka i will send u pms...Smile



Originally posted by asmaju

Wonderful one...

Sorry for commenting late...



thank you so much asma for commenting...n plz don't say sorry...Wink



Originally posted by --Rose--

Nice ff:-)


thank you so much dear Smile



Originally posted by prateekdave7

waho..!!!! great story... today i just check IF forams and i found this beautiful post "dil hai tumara" swaron "ff"... now i m fond of this story... great work.. so now just check it out next chapter-3... (i m really interested and hope for swaron first meeting)... check it out...
thanx for giving us this swaronlicious story...


hey prateek thank you so much for liking it n commenting...Smile



Originally posted by SwaRon_Dreams

nice work and plz plz plz plz pm me!


thank you so much tanya...i will surely pm u...Smile




Originally posted by dazzlingmanavi























thank you dear for liking n commenting...Smile





Originally posted by 1D_D3-Crazy

Well I'm a new reader of this ff and I love the concept and really everything about it

I hope you get better soon and I hope you pm me when you continue :D


Nikki <3


i will surely pm u dear n thank you so much for liking it...Smile

Edited by Anindita91 - 26 October 2012 at 12:31pm
Anindita91 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 12:17pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by shaani2209

anindita update karo na please


Originally posted by -Jum-RulzZ-

Preeettty please UPDATE! :)


Originally posted by Mahirah

update please

update please !!


update please 

please update ...its been sooo long..!!

cant wait to read your awesome FF 

please do update soon *BABY FACE*


#Update Please 


pleeejjj update :)

Please update...

cant wait to read more :) 




Originally posted by sreya19roy

Eije...keo ki amae sunte pa6e?? Update ta kobe deben madam?? 

Jaldi update kor na re *puppy face*


Originally posted by swayamsharon

plz update!!!

hey plz update!!!! 


Originally posted by SwaRonLuver

anindita pleeezzz update kr do na... 


Originally posted by abhilasha_dream

Wen r u updating next... waiting for it eagerlyyy...


Originally posted by tanzz15

Ei tor beypar ki bol to???? r u ok????plz taratari update koris,


Originally posted by d3lover90

Hey pls update


Originally posted by toshanaik3011

update plzzz


Originally posted by swaronland

please update soon


Originally posted by abhilasha_dream

Plz update soon, its such a long tym since u updated it last


Originally posted by --Rose--

Hey When will u update this ff?? PLEASE PM ME OK:-) I love this ff:-):-) please update na...


Originally posted by nature2

update sooon

Extremely sorry everyone to make u all wait this much...really sorry...Cry it won't happen again...pakka Smile

Edited by Anindita91 - 26 October 2012 at 12:33pm

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 12:17pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by swaronamit

@ani: take ur time dear but we need a big i mean a very big update as a compensation...


Originally posted by Sudha-SK



How are you? I hope you are feeling much better.

Don't worry about the update take your time..i am glad you are back to the forum 


Originally posted by Rutu

Hey anindita 

Saw you after a long time. Hope you are feeling good.

And about update, take your own time dear


Originally posted by marauder

Take ur time. We will wait :) 


Originally posted by shaani2209

Anindita welcome back...

hope your fine...

will wait...but dont forget u gota give a long update...


Originally posted by Luvsd3

hey dear welcome back...hope u r fine now...take ur time dear..we will wait!!


Originally posted by pratik54000

hey anandita how are you now? take care of your health...we will surely wait for your update...


Originally posted by frankyfio

take ur tym
u knw v need our haq 


Originally posted by ABBY92

No worries, take your time !! We don't mind waiting a little longer !! 


Originally posted by TANHA_H

welcome back...


Originally posted by damonelena

Hey! :)

I hope you're feeling better now. :D

It's okay. Take ur time. :D


And Take care. :)


Originally posted by tanzz15

Hey dear, take you time and come back with a longgg post!!!


Originally posted by sachiarsha

awww Anindita ur back i soo missed u sacchi...  


hawww jaundice??????? how ru now????? 


are u take ur time for updates and haan araam se read ur pms i was soo freakin' waiting for ur comments haye i missed u my spamming queen...


Originally posted by Tanuka_TanHa


i am glad you are back !!


i missed u and this ff like hell

take ur time , we will be waiting 


Originally posted by abhilasha_dream

Hey welcome back... and how r u feeling now ? its ok, take as much time as u want, first is ur health then only other things... only if ur health permits do the updates, take plenty of rest...


get well soon :-)


Originally posted by ShrutikaSwaRon

Take ur time for the update...n take care.


Originally posted by meevee

Anu sorry for late response, i am almost in teh same state as u at present in terms of pending PMs so i do relate to that...hope u r much better healthwise...take ur time dear and take care


Originally posted by sadiyaswaron

Welcome back
update when u r free n pls pm me


Thank you so much for understanding my problem...for the warm welcome...for wishing me for my health and for waiting...thank you all...  

Edited by Anindita91 - 26 October 2012 at 12:36pm

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Chapter 4

St.Louis College, Auditorium

They all reached the  auditorium. Everyone was wishing swayam luck.

Sharon: guys isse luck ki nahi humme zarurat hai. After all iska dance jo tolerate karna parega. I am sure isse dance toh aata nahi hai and now we will have to tolerate his nonsense dance.  

Swayam: nonsense dance? Kuch der mein tumhari thoughts change ho jayegi. Just wait for it.

Sharon: yeah i am waiting for it. Dekhte hai tum kya karte ho.

Rey: guys not again. Stop you two. Swayam tum jao all the best.

Swayam: thank you rey. [He gives a look to Sharon and goes to the place where other participants were waiting for the audition to start.]

The audition started. There were many dancers who were giving audtions. There were good, bad, worse dancers. But no one was capable of being the 6th dancer of team weaklings. Now it was time for swayams dance. He came on the stage and directly looked at Sharon. She showed him thumps down. 

He smiled and mouthed "will see" and after that the music played and he started dancing. 

He was doing a free style number. While he was dancing everyone was surprised and shocked at the same time how can anyone dance so well. Kriyaansh at that moment decided that swayam will be the 6th dancer of team weaklings. The dance finished and everyone ran towards him and started to hoot for him.

Rey: wow dude you are just awesome.

Kriya: ha swayam aapne toh kamal hi kar diya.

Sharon: kya kamal kiya isne? Yeh bhi koi dance tha kya?

Neha: Sharon what saying you are? Kitna achha dance kiya isne.

Rey: ha Sharon he did a great job.

Sharon: khak great job tha rey. Aisa dance toh koi bhi kar sakta hai. Yeh toh hamare samne khara bhi nahi reh payega.

Swayam: achha? Then dance with me. Dekhte hai main khara reh pata hoon ya nahi.

Sharon: dance aur woh bhi tumhare saath. Please i have better things to do.

Swayam: kyun darr rahi ho?

Sharon: main aur darungi woh bhi tumse. Dream on.

Swayam: then dance with me.

Sharon: fine. Harne k liye ready ho jao. Mere samne khare bhi nahi reh paoge.

Swayam: sure dekhte hai.

Everyone else left the stage and took their seats. The music started. Swayam takes Sharons hand and pulled her towards him. Their eyes met and they started to dance. 

They were lost in each other. Their bodies were moving in sync. They didn't know what steps they were doing. They were just dancing together perfectly. The music stopped but their dance didn't stop. They were still dancing lost into each others eyes. As if they were dancing on the rhythm of their hearts. After some time they stopped dancing. But still they were looking deep into each others eyes holding each other. 

Their friends started to clap for them and they came back to their senses. They left each other.

Rey: wow guys you two were just awesome. Lag hi nahi raha tha ki tum dono pehli baar dance kar raheho ek dusre ke saath.

Kriya: ha aur woh bhi bina rehearsal kiye kitna achha dance kiya aap dono ne.

Neha: neha loving your dance.

Everyone were praising their dance. But both of them were still lost in each other.

Swayam: [in his mind] wow she dances so well. Jab baat karti hai toh bilkul siren ki tarha shout karti hai. Siren Sharon. But when she dances woh bilkul alag hoti hai. So pure and innocent just like daisy. Par mujhe hamesha Sharon daisy ki yaad kyun dilati hai.

Sharon: [in her mind] aarrgghh mujhe ho kya jata hai. Hamesha main iske samne kho kyun jati hu. Jab bhi uske akhon mein dekhti hu mujhe lagta hai main Donald ko dekh rahi hu. Iski har baat har cheez Donald ki tarha kyun hai. Jaise Donald mujhe challenge karta tha waise hi yeh mujhe.. nahi nahi Sharon stop thinking about him. I will have to stop thinking about him. Mujhe iss idiot se dur rehna hoga.

Without saying a word to anyone she left from there.

Swayam: is she okay? Aise kyun chali gayi? Maine usse hurt toh nai kiya.

Rey: no no don't worry main usse baad mein baat kar lunga. Filhal humme 6th dancer kaun hai woh announce karna hai. So lets go and put it on the notice board that its you. So congrats swayam.

Swayam: really thank you rey.

Everyone else congratulated him and they went and put up a notice about the 6th dancer selection.

Swayams flat, Mumbai

Its a Sunday morning. Swayam was super excited. He was going to meet his best friend daisy after 11 years. He quickly got ready had his breakfast and head out for daisys house on his cycle. Near their house there was a park which everyone has to pass before going to their house. Deepak and gautam has jointly built that park so that swayam Sharon and their friends can play there together. Swayam while riding his cycle.

Swayam: [in his mind] finally aaj main itne saalon ke baad daisy se milunga. Mera jo bhi confusion hai Sharon aur daisy ko leke aaj woh sab dur ho jayega. Finally. I am really very happy today.

He was now passing by the park which was there near their house. After watching something he stopped with a jerk.


I know this chapter is little small than usual. I have exams on the month of november. Please bear with me. Pakka the next update will be a long one. Please forgive me for my mistakes. I haven't read it. Sorry.

If i have missed sending pms to anyone please do inform me. Thank you.

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Edited by Anindita91 - 01 November 2012 at 11:39pm

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