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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 16)

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 7:56am | IP Logged
nice update...
thanks for the pm...

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Anindita91

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 9:30am | IP Logged
wow.. wat a cute update...
yaar wo puppy toh bahot pyari thi...
Sharon r hothat ki holo?? i guess Donal chole jaoar por theke orokom type hoe gache...Smile

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 10:51am | IP Logged
Hey it was an awesome update...i loved it when Swayam was confused so as to whom he should comfort first Sharon or the puppy.ROFL
Loved their first meet after many years, they really missed each other na??
update soon dear

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
Very adept story telling...luvd the way they meet after so many years without knowing each other yet feel within their heart that they know each other...it was hilarious to imagine Swayam holding Sharon in one hand & the puppy in the other wondering who needs more attention...hope u update soon

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 7:41am | IP Logged
hey anindita i knw m too late so sorry for commentng dat late..

concept-awesome concept..as wel as cs

chap1- loved swayam's family n deir family talks..his dad, mom n sis pulling his leg dat was soo sweet..

chap2-swaron's first meet kya intrestng hui boss..ek puppy ne milwaya dono ko..LOL..n wat happened to sharon 4 yrs back dat she never wanna be her real self again..?? very eager to knw..
waitin for d next update..update it sooon...



-monica

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 8:49am | IP Logged


Pehle toh u stop saying things like ur updates r "BORING" or u "MESSED IT UP" Ermm warna I warn u, u r gonna get a6a wala beating from me Angry


Hmm now coming to the "FILMY FACTOR"...arrey bhai hum to filmy chizo pe hi marte hai aur filmy updates ka hi wait karte hai Wink see the thing is ki no guy in real life is actually so filmy n romantic yet nt cheesy (atleast I haven't seen any Stern Smile) n neither do in real life we see such eye-lock scenes or the girl falling n guy catching her n then those "look-look-hawa-hawa" moments [:">] Embarrassed n that is why we love these "FILMY ROMANCE" Heart Big smile so chill n give us more such "FILMY" romantic moments Wink


A6a now coming to the update...do I still need to say that I LOVED IT??? Confused God damn I nt only loved it, it was FREAKING AWESOMEEE MAN...LIKE WOW Big smile


N u know the best part was when sharon jumping n shouting seeing that puppy...it was HILARIOUS ROFL ROFL ROFL


Hmm n something happened to sharon 4yrs back...so the suspense n mystery ki kahani has already started...hmm interesting...swayam k aane se pehle hi kuch ho gayaShocked chalo waiting to see ki mystery kya hai..


N one thing ur really wanna say...the best part about this whole FF is the way u r describing the whole situation n every feeling that the characters r having, it kinda makes every thing so real Smile so kudos to u [=D>] Smile

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 9:02am | IP Logged

Oh I forgot to mention...update jaldi koris bt monday er pore koris Smile amar exam sesh hoe jabe r amae erom sobar last e cmnt korte hobena tahole Unhappy

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 9:39am | IP Logged


 aww the puppy incident was funny

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