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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 114)

-Raj- IF-Dazzler

Joined: 04 January 2013
Posts: 3793

Posted: 31 July 2013 at 1:54am | IP Logged
this chapter is a mix of cuteness and seriousness !!
Brilliant chapter!!
happy that shars dad is back!
but the way swayam protects his daisy from that creep is really amazing!
i am glad to see that papa rai prakash actually feels guilty for leaving his daughter alone!!
and the way he sharon reveals the truth is also amazing!!
well written!!
this is actually one of the few writings that still touches my heart!
thanks for the pm.

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swaronarshi Senior Member

Joined: 25 October 2012
Posts: 686

Posted: 31 July 2013 at 2:38am | IP Logged

it was an awesome update I was right it was vikrant.

 Sharon was so sacred but she knew her Donald is there.
I like mr raiprakash angry  man but when he knew it was Swayam he was so happy
I liked there bond
I like that mr raiprakash trust swayam so much and his teasing bechare swayam and Sharon
vikrant is so evil minded person
thanks for the pm
nice update

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AJ.morgan IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 19 July 2013
Posts: 11612

Posted: 31 July 2013 at 3:14am | IP Logged
[B][/B] Omg this is like the best of best OS most fav...ani hats off to u yaar...i mean u must very beautiful ciz this beautiful concept can only be thiught by a person wuth beautiful me i enjoyd each and every was awesomly amazing...the innocense that reflex in tge story is clearly saying alot about ur personality and on top of that very cool pix collection makning it even fab as it help us reader visualisation...having said all that i am stll struggling to put it right words that do justice to the amazing writng u do...but i fail to do that xoz words are just not eniugh for this piece of writing to be decribed...eagerly waiting for next update...plz plz plz asap...update...and do nt forget to pm thus new fan of urs..

Love & blessing to u

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Lassi_TanHa IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 20 November 2012
Posts: 15550

Posted: 31 July 2013 at 4:39am | IP Logged
auasum update.. well written
Luved the way swayam didnt leave his daisy's hand n assured her n sharon feelg secured in presence of swayam..Smile I love the bond dey share n really like d way ur making dier bond grow stronger..Thumbs Up
Swaron - sharon's dad scne was good..though intially i didnt like mr. raiprakash for leavg his daughter alone but now i lyked how he trusted swayam n defended him.. n how positive he was towards swaron relationship.. i hope he gets to knw the truth soon! 
i liked d idea of using d pic of swaron glareg at vikrant where originally in serial dey were glaring at each other...LOL

Edited by lassipriya - 31 July 2013 at 4:38am

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RoHaNmAlHoTrA Senior Member

Joined: 06 November 2012
Posts: 464

Posted: 31 July 2013 at 6:35am | IP Logged
that j**k
i think they shud tell Mr. Gautam abt him...
i know he will feel guilty but at least he wud know...
apart from it...
i loved Mr Gautam's and swaron bond...
the he was so cool with them being together and even cherishing it was awsm...
and watever that vikrant says...he trusts swayam as his own son...
the glaring pics were too gud...
swayam has a plan????hmmm
vry much excited about

the whole conversation in the the projector room was damn nice...and describes beautiful...the feeling of a father's trust for his daughter and for swayam too as his own son was really a bliss...also before i forget...swaron holding hands widout leaving it for a sec too...awww

Rohan :)

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Joshua_TANHA IF-Addictz

Joined: 23 February 2012
Posts: 60408

Posted: 31 July 2013 at 10:37am | IP Logged
That chep enters again Censored 
Somewhere I sympathize with Sharon's dad .same time angry on him as a  father he is clueless about his daughter s life or what happened to her! Only positive  he was cool about sharon and Swayam more over trusts Swayam !

Loved how protective Swayam was Day Dreaming 

Loved the pics again  Hug !!selected apt pics Thumbs Up TANHA, they just speak through their eyes Clap

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vrushanharshi Goldie

Joined: 06 November 2012
Posts: 1295

Posted: 31 July 2013 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
awesome update
but hated that demon so much 
but liked the way mr riaprakash trusted swayam 
n hope dat he comes to knw the truth 
n the best was swayam did not leave sharons hand Tongue
that demon Angry...AngryAngryAngry
but waiting for ur next chp 
update soon 
thanx for the pm 

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surbhimathur IF-Rockerz

Joined: 16 December 2011
Posts: 6082

Posted: 31 July 2013 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
I liked the whole flow of the update, and every detail so clearly put! Thumbs Up
Swayam not leaving sharon's hands, so cute! 
This whole update was cute except 'who-must-not-be-named' ROFL
And sharon's dad trusting swayam was good. Approve
That evil is in hell now, as donald is back Wink

I look forward for the next one Smile

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