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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 110)

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Posted: 26 July 2013 at 5:47am | IP Logged
edited my comment on pg 107

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Posted: 26 July 2013 at 6:09am | IP Logged
Loved the update..
Everyone knws abt swaron now..
Liked rey's concern here..

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Posted: 26 July 2013 at 10:19am | IP Logged
                                                          -Chapter-17-

Awesome update after all u are back in writing..So i just loved the new character of Rohan as a sharon's brother..i like the jealousy of swayam,how much he loves sharon..Truly the whole scene was funny..Poor rohan got hurt by swayam's cricket bat..Loved the way u described the past memories of rohan with SwaRon..Sharon teasing swayam for getting jealous.!! After then college scene was awesum,sharon getting lost in swayam and he is trying hard to handle that..And thats great sharon want to show her real image to her friends and loved the way swayam supports her..So it was lovely update..

                                                          -Chapter-18-

Now the complete paso double sequence with song haye rama was just awesome to realive TanHa again..And u added Tanha pics is just mindblowing..Trully the update was wonderfull and very well written..Loved the way u  penned the emotions of sharon after dance..beautifully done..They were completely lost in each other that they are in a verge of kiss in front of all..Loved the way u showed how swayam handled her in that condition..She was scared of her friends reaction and he consoled her..Now,i loved the friendship bond of rey with sharon,i like the concerned rey for sharon..So again it was lovely update..

                                                         -Chapter-19-

Finally the truth is out and gang reaction was usual..Everyone was shocked..Loved the each lines where u showed how much she trust,love him, that she bursted out on rey...i like swayam, the way he calmed her was amazing..The emotions of sharon was beautifully penned..And finally SwaRon told the truth to everyone..And thats good sharon's personal truth is'nt out yet..So it was amazing and emotional chapter..i loved it and enjoyed..Now u ended at a crusial,curious end..i am really excited for next update..Do update as soon as u'r comfort..

Great work
And yeah,Thanx for all PM's
Sorry,i am very late here..

Prateek

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Posted: 26 July 2013 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
I am really sorry anindita, i am coming here after 6 updates!
I was having exams and there was too much stuff which kept me occupied besides studies, sorry!

I will comment altogether now, what i actually feel after reading all the updates together.
Sharon and swayam spending time together was the most adorable thing! Those gifts and the food. Lol it was so yummy! Your picture teased my stomach anindita! LOL
Then the dress and their dance! TumseHi Day Dreaming today itself i saw this song! I love it!!
Then the kiss was very well put!
Then aftermaths of the kiss were very interesting LOLEmbarrassed
You described it so well! Thumbs Up
Then the phone talk ROFL Oh god swayam's family is such a tease! Especially his sister!
Then the next update was light hearted and romantic! Swayam and sharon sleeping together and then the jealous game!! Interesting!
Then i really laughed at the next update! Swayam beating that guy who turns out to be sharon's brother with a bat! ROFL Damn man!
Then the the last three updates were a roller coaster ride!
With swayam and sharon going to college and doing fake fights to which they epicly failed!
And the pasa doble! Gawd they had lost it completely man!
Then rey and swayam clash over sharon, rey is being a good friend here.
But then the truth has come out and i like how swayam is handling sharon and gang teasing them!
The mysterious man is back! Gosh.

Great updates!
Will wait for the next anindita!

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 5:44am | IP Logged
awesome update 
loved the whole chappy 
nothing to say bcoz the chappy nly describes everything 
n the pics added eplains it more clearly
thanx for the pm 
update soon 
loving this ff

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 6:46am | IP Logged
rey is the best friend anyone can have.the gang was so supportive and worried for her.
it was not boring at all.
she couldn't hear anything against her donald and that gave her the courage to tell them the truth.
true love does make us better people.
love how Swayam silently supported her.
you've again left it on a cliffhanger!
so you better update soonTongue

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 7:13am | IP Logged
I was waiting so badly for this FF to be updated ...finally it is updated glad too read 3 parts consequently Big smile...though first I revised previous chapters LOL
SwaRon finally are together Embarrassed loved how they accepted their feelings..I pity rohan [=))loved how Swayam supported Sharon ...And that paso doble part was amazing ..and that pics added charm to the chapter ..I remembered actual sequence of TANHA Day Dreaming
I loved the way Swayam supported Sharon to tell truth to her friends Embarrassed
I liked Rey's concern for Sharon..loved their friendship :)
Now I'm excited to see how story turns up and waiting to know who is that mad man :)





Edited by swaron_pk - 04 August 2013 at 10:06am
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Posted: 28 July 2013 at 1:44am | IP Logged
HI, ANANDITA AWESOME JOB DEAR SORRY FOR COMMENTING LATE N THANKS FOR THE PM WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPTOR.Day Dreaming

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