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~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF (Page 11)

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Superb start .. loved swayam's family ... the whole family convo was awesome ... 

Update soon ..

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 3:24am | IP Logged
Sorry Anindita i'm late but was a l'il busy as u know i wasn't even well...i rlly liked it and wud surely be waiting for next part so update soon and surely pm me...

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 4:10am | IP Logged

 i loved it... awesome

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 4:51am | IP Logged
sorry sorry sorry!! i knw apne mujhe bahut pehle pm kiya tha nd mai itna late hun but mera pc kaam nhi kr rha tha so!!
i really luv d concept of dis ff!
puchne ki toh zarurat hee nhi thi ke continue krna hai ya nhi!!
d names..daisy nd donald dey're mah personal favourites too specially d baby daisy nd donald!!
 
very cute...hope ke woh Sharon ki car ho lekin sirf Shar use pehchane not Swayam...:)
 
pange to unme hone hee hain...
 

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 7:51am | IP Logged
cant wait!!! jaldi update kro!!

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 11:21am | IP Logged
awessome!!
PLSS AGLI BAAR mujhe bhi PM KAR DEna !
i read all of dem.. and was a Very Beautiful Presentation.. and Beautiful Concept!
wid awessoem Ppl !
Plsss... UPDATE SOON...

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 11:22am | IP Logged
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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 9:50pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by swayamsharon

i liked it, waiting 4 swaron & i guess that car is of sharon & pm me 

Thank you so much for liking it...will surely pm u...ur wait is going to end now..i m updating...

 

Originally posted by -Ripal-

hey its awsum not at all boring

loved it amazing 

thnkss for the pm

:)

Thank you so much ripal  for liking it...

 

Originally posted by Rutu

Aww...swayam khud ki image banana chaata hai...good boy...and loved it when his parents and his sis were khiching his tang

update soon

Thank you so much for commenting...updating...

 

Originally posted by sreya19roy

 

*EDITED 

BORING??? Did u just call this update boring???  

By god if this is what ur "BORING" updates r then god knows how ur "INTERESTING" updates r gonna be like  

N man if this how u write ur "BORING" updates then I'll request u to give us loads n loads of "BORING" updates n yes bich-bich me "INTERESTING" updates v de dena  

Peee-leazeee don't call it boring yaar, it was super fun update  

I loved the bonding that Shekhawat family shares, its really sweet n cute  loved the way everyone was teasing swayam n how surprisingly his mom too joins in n supports them  

The bro-sis bond is really sweet  n Mr. n Mrs. Shekhawat seems to be one of those cool parents types n I have already started to love them   

Bt ek shikayat, yeh kahan rok diya!? Why did u stop it here yaar??  My gut feeling says that the car is gonna be sharon's n we might just get to see their 1st interaction or maybe a tiff too  bt since u have stopped it here, I feel like I'm gonna die out of excitement  

Well in short fatafati update chilo n I completely loved it  

Update soon n yeah nxt time ARO BORO UPDATE CHAI 

 

Wow sreya such a big comment...thank you so much dear...aro boro update dile sobai hapiye jaye Jodi porte porte... ;) :D

 

Originally posted by mahirahmarium

Me loving this FF a lottt

and it was NOT at all boring it was really very nice 

update soon

Thank you so much mahi for liking it...updating

 

Originally posted by neetha

anu..i loved it gal..everythin was explained in detail..i loved the shekawat family..they are super cool...n aww swayam is such an awesome character..i just love him..waitin fr the next update..

 

p.s:teri hindi intni bhi buri nahi hai..

Thank you so much neetha for liking it...me too...i love swayam too...updating...mujhe bohot soch soch ke likhna padha taki hoga hogi na ho jaye n hogi hoga na ho jaye...hamesha yaha maine galti karti hu hindi bolte waqt... :D

 

Originally posted by swaronland

hey this wasn't boring.  
great start.
there was no swaron but the update was really cute.  the pictures were awesome & they make update more interesting.
Keep it up good work.
 
continue soon & thanks 4 pm

Thank you so much for liking it...updating now...

 

Originally posted by kritzzz_ArSha

amazing

Thank you so much for liking it...

 

Originally posted by Coolioqueen

Nice update...i luved the airport moments.

Thank you so much for liking it...

 

Originally posted by Sravani...

Yay Yay I love the family conversation at the dining table here.It shows the Indian way enjoying food.I liked Ramu kaka.Swayam's such a sweetheart.He doesn't like attention?? Great.

Thank you so much sravani for commenting...

 

Originally posted by nature7

 loved it

 WAiting.NExt 

Thank you so much for liking it...updating...

 

Originally posted by shaani2209

Anindita..this is awesome buddy...

Swayam's character is awesomely written...

liked the friendly family atmosphere you have written...

thank you for the loonnnggg update...please dont reduce the size*baby face*

thanks for the pm...

Thank you so much shaani for liking it...i will try to keep the length of every chapter same...but the length will depend on the situation n how much to give in one chapter...so can't say for sure...but definitely i will try to... :)

 

 

Originally posted by cenation123

brilliant update man so awesome and the pics made it even more fab yaaar and swayam ki leg pulling and he is pouting awww the family moment was too cute cant wait for sharon and swayam to meet pls pls pls update soon

Thank you so much for liking it...updating...

 

 

Originally posted by ABBY92

Loved the fact that it was such a long update and yes, it was absolutely needed to set the base of the story !!! I'm loving the way you write...Simple yet perfect !!! Can't wait for chapter 2 !!!

Thank you so much abi for loving the way i write...but i still fear whether i am explaining it properly or not...i am really glad u liked it...

 

Originally posted by marauder

Did you just clled this update boring  ? From which angle this seems boring to you. It is one of the best begining i ever read for any FF. Loved the detailed manner in which you explaind everything . And the dialogues were so realistic like the one which we uses everyday. It was indeed a pleasure to read them. And the bond between Shekhawats were beautifully penned. Waiting for the next update . 

Shishir thank you so much for that compliment...i m glad u liked it...m updating now...

 

Originally posted by surbhimathur

Swayam is soo adorablee! He wants to create his own image! D family part was very sweet..especially wen dey wre teasing swayam :D:D And dat car obviously is of sharon :)) And puhleasee dun b sry..dis ws sucha nycc updatee..nd moreover it ws required to show d family part na! So chill :)) I like the pace of ur ff...smooth! waiting fr d nxt :)

Thank you so much surbhi for liking it...m updating now...

 

Originally posted by ShrutikaSwaRon

Awesome...swayam's family conversation was well written...love d way his family teases him...d pics also supported d descprition very well...update soon

Thank you so much shrutikafor liking it...updating...

 

Originally posted by misha24

Nice update... waiting fr the nxt part... continue soon

Thank you so much misha  for liking it...updating...

 

Originally posted by swaron_d3

it was awesome! 

great start...! waiting eagerly for swaron to meet!

loved it amazing !

thnkss for the pm

Thank you so much ananya for liking it...ur wait is going to end now...m updating...

 

Originally posted by sadafarsha

it was awsum yaar mind blowing keep it up have a nyc day  

Thank you so much for liking it...



Edited by Anindita91 - 25 July 2012 at 11:21pm

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