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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update swayam ne to ravan (vikrant) ki bolti bnd kar di hehe 😆
Vikrant is such a 🤬
Anyways nice update
Thnx for the pm
Do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
this chapter is a mix of cuteness and seriousness !!
Brilliant chapter!!
happy that shars dad is back!
but the way swayam protects his daisy from that creep is really amazing!
i am glad to see that papa rai prakash actually feels guilty for leaving his daughter alone!!
and the way he sharon reveals the truth is also amazing!!
well written!!
this is actually one of the few writings that still touches my heart!
thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 10 years ago

it was an awesome update I was right it was vikrant.

 Sharon was so sacred but she knew her Donald is there.
I like mr raiprakash angry  man but when he knew it was Swayam he was so happy
I liked there bond
I like that mr raiprakash trust swayam so much and his teasing bechare swayam and Sharon
vikrant is so evil minded person
thanks for the pm
nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
[B][/B] Omg this is like the best of best OS ever...my most fav...ani hats off to u yaar...i mean u must very beautiful ciz this beautiful concept can only be thiught by a person wuth beautiful heart...trust me i enjoyd each and every chapter...it was awesomly amazing...the innocense that reflex in tge story is clearly saying alot about ur personality and on top of that very cool pix collection makning it even fab as it help us reader visualisation...having said all that i am stll struggling to put it right words that do justice to the amazing writng u do...but i fail to do that xoz words are just not eniugh for this piece of writing to be decribed...eagerly waiting for next update...plz plz plz asap...update...and do nt forget to pm thus new fan of urs..

Love & blessing to u
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Posted: 10 years ago
auasum update.. well written
Luved the way swayam didnt leave his daisy's hand n assured her n sharon feelg secured in presence of swayam..😊 I love the bond dey share n really like d way ur making dier bond grow stronger..👍🏼
Swaron - sharon's dad scne was good..though intially i didnt like mr. raiprakash for leavg his daughter alone but now i lyked how he trusted swayam n defended him.. n how positive he was towards swaron relationship.. i hope he gets to knw the truth soon! 
i liked d idea of using d pic of swaron glareg at vikrant where originally in serial dey were glaring at each other...😆




Edited by lassipriya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ergghhh...
that j**k
i think they shud tell Mr. Gautam abt him...
i know he will feel guilty but at least he wud know...
apart from it...
i loved Mr Gautam's and swaron bond...
the he was so cool with them being together and even cherishing it was awsm...
and watever that vikrant says...he trusts swayam as his own son...
the glaring pics were too gud...
swayam has a plan????hmmm
vry much excited about it...so
UPDATE SOON!!!!

the whole conversation in the the projector room was damn nice...and describes beautiful...the feeling of a father's trust for his daughter and for swayam too as his own son was really a bliss...also before i forget...swaron holding hands widout leaving it for a sec too...awww

Rohan :)


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Posted: 10 years ago
That chep enters again 🤬 
Somewhere I sympathize with Sharon's dad .same time angry on him as a  father he is clueless about his daughter s life or what happened to her! Only positive  he was cool about sharon and Swayam more over trusts Swayam !

Loved how protective Swayam was  

Loved the pics again  🤗 !!selected apt pics 👍🏼 TANHA, they just speak through their eyes 👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
but hated that demon so much 
but liked the way mr riaprakash trusted swayam 
n hope dat he comes to knw the truth 
n the best was swayam did not leave sharons hand 😛
that demon 😡...😡😡😡
but waiting for ur next chp 
update soon 
thanx for the pm 

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Posted: 10 years ago
I liked the whole flow of the update, and every detail so clearly put! 👍🏼
Swayam not leaving sharon's hands, so cute! 
This whole update was cute except 'who-must-not-be-named' 🤣
And sharon's dad trusting swayam was good. 
That evil is in hell now, as donald is back 😉

I look forward for the next one 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update 😊
Loved the convo b/w Sharon's father n Swaron