LOVELY UPDATE
Anindita π€
Firstly M really sorry for commenting soo late'.coming to the update Amazing
amazing amazing update''Swaron lost in each other's embrace'..awwiiieee''.Ramu
kaka entered'..Sharon feeling embarrassed and Swayam said "nahi
nahi kaka god me nahi woh mujhe gale lagaye huyi thi" hehehe dat was hilarious and Ramu kaka teasing them was embarrassing''Swayam
ready to do anything for his daisy'.even to cook awww dats soo sweet''they were
soo cute can't stay without each other even for more then just 3 hours''.gosshhh
this couple just makes me go crazy over them''.
"Hie
donald, Instead of mailing I m messaging u the recipes. The ingredient for the
food is love. Only love. So make or do whatever you want to do with your love.
I only want that from you. So you decide what you wanna do or make. Love you n
missing you already. Will be back soon"
This lines were the best
lines'. Sharon want anything but should be made by Swayam and the ingredient is
love''awww how sweet and lovable couple''
Loved Swayam's and Kaka's convo'..kaka didn't want to become kabab mein haddi'hehehehe
Swayam came to Sharon's house to pick her up awwiiieee and Sharon is soo comfortable
to live with Swayam''
Swayam: [he nuzzles on the back of her head] hey you can never disturb me. Woh toh maine isliye kaha kyunki mujhe tumhare saath iss world me apna life spend karna hai as human jo hamare liye heaven hoga, hell me nahi as ghosts.
Sharon:
[sternly] shut up. Then both laughs.
This lines were hilarious''.Just love the they were soo
comfortable and enjoying spending time with each other'..
Last part of the update was superb'..Swayam planned soo much for Sharon'Awwwiiee
Sharon will be living with Swayam'Awwiiieee
Anindita Fab update you have awesomely penned down every
part of this update'Always love reading your work'..This was indeed a very long
update Can't wait to read the next chappy'.. please update soon dear'.
Luv u β€οΈ
This content was originally posted by: arch2012Me first 4 the first time hehehe
wonderful update.and the pics you used for describing the each scene is just amazing(beautiful memory of tanha *sigh*)kaka is so understanding and cute the whole convo between swayam & kaka was lovely,i loved it.swayam is so much caring and doing so much effort to make sharon happy and feel the love once again and trust herself after that ugly past becoz of that beep.i am also waiting to know his surprise so update soon
This content was originally posted by: deep_Tanhamineπ³
This content was originally posted by: Love_shantuAwww... β€οΈ β€οΈ Cho chweet... π π³ π³
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Just awesome...
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I know ur busy but update soon... π
This content was originally posted by: ...pujan...such a cute n beautiful update...π
waiting for next update eagerly...
This content was originally posted by: ABBY92Awwwhh, that was sweet of Sharon to say that she'll like anything that Swayam makes out of love !! Can't wait to see what is the surprise he has planned for her !!
This content was originally posted by: reet_26cute and awesome update
This content was originally posted by: lassipriyalovely update!!
kaka is so understandg.. swayam n kaka convo were cute..π
"The ingredient for the food is love. Only love." dat was sweet of sharon..
swayam going to sharon's home to pick her n d cycle ride part was cute..
waiting to know donald's surprise for his daisy.. so update soon..
This content was originally posted by: sanstinares
unresAwesome update πSwaron hug but kaka interruptedSwayam came to pick SharonLoved the cycle ridewaiting for the surprise to be revealed
This content was originally posted by: nature2FAb wrk ANi.
awosm LOve it 1000 ghunaaπππUpdate soon very soonπ ookkGrt Wrkππ
This content was originally posted by: swaronamitAwww...wat a lovely update...
This content was originally posted by: sadafarshaFinally aapne update kiya it was awsum as always I luved it thanx for the pm
This content was originally posted by: Tanya_SwaronluvSorry Anindita actually i am not getting much of a time to comment on anyone's work since i am hell busy! I hope you don't mind and i will surely comment properly from next time.
But still i will mention it was beautifully penned downed updated! and yes kaafi bara bhi tha, next time se itne hi acha aur bara dena!! π
Update soon and pm me.
This content was originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007Awesome Update!!πππ
Can't wait for the surprise!!Update Soon!π€
This content was originally posted by: sakshibshahAwesummm...!!
Loved it...
Update soon...
This content was originally posted by: AninditaTanHaAwesome update anindita ...
loved itπ
isbaar thodha jaldi update kara please π³
thanks for the P.M
This content was originally posted by: Neeti96Res
This content was originally posted by: raj_tanha_fanAwesome update!!Loving ur ff more nd more with each update!!Diva Sharon nd helpless swayam is so cute!!You described the cycle ride really well.I like your writing style nd the use of graphics adding to the beauty of your work.Wonderful job girl!!!Do update soon nd thanks for the PM:)
This content was originally posted by: bhanumathitanhaAwesome one dear I felt very happy for Sharon finally she is happy with swayam after going through all her insecurities . I loved it . Please update next one ASAP
This content was originally posted by: creepy_classicawesome update...
thanks for the update...update sooon...waiting for the update...
This content was originally posted by: surbhimathurAnindita i am latee dis tym too...sorryy..!
I had read the 12th chapter but i guess i forgot to comment :-|
Oke now i lovedd the 12th update!
Swayam and sharon lost in love...seems too cutee...hayyee your picturess...TanHaaa!!!
I miss them :'(
Khair..leave it...I really liked sharon here...she is so sweet and caring...and swayam toh muaahh!!
And the 13th update.!
It was funny in the starting..how swayam blurted out everything...lol and sharon glaring him :D
I am loving these pics mann :'))
And then kaka is smaartt ;p
lol koi badmaashi mat karna! hahaha!
And so sweet of sharon to msg this..!!
Cuteee and nice update.!
This content was originally posted by: Joshua_TANHA
Kaka has a very bad timing π I loved how he teased both of them π Love Kaka in this , he is caring and understanding πSwayam: nahi nahi kaka god me nahi woh mujhe gale lagaye huyi thi. π€£ Looks like swayam is in sharon land and didnt come backπ πAwieee , Sharon asked him to cook with lots of loveSwayam cant wait for her , went to pick her up in his cycle π ,Cycle ride is funny and romantic π³Iam excited for swayam's suprise ...PS: Need not to say again, how much I love the pictures again.. You put so much effort to find out appropriate picture..appreiciate that π. Your update make me watch those episodes again ...miss them so much π
This content was originally posted by: sadiyaswaronAwesome update dii
Kaka seriously have a bad timing...:p
Loved the part when swayam said god me nahi gale laga rahi thi π€£ joote kha jata sharon se ...:p
Cycle ride it remind me of swaron cycle romance n the pics was amazing as usual di...:)
Looking forward to swayam's surprise
loved the update
Waiting for next part
Update it soon n best of luck for ur practicals n exams
This content was originally posted by: sweetsimi123Anindita π€
Firstly M really sorry for commenting soo late'.coming to the update Amazing amazing amazing update''Swaron lost in each other's embrace'..awwiiieee''.Ramu kaka entered'..Sharon feeling embarrassed and Swayam said "nahi nahi kaka god me nahi woh mujhe gale lagaye huyi thi" hehehe dat was hilarious and Ramu kaka teasing them was embarrassing''Swayam ready to do anything for his daisy'.even to cook awww dats soo sweet''they were soo cute can't stay without each other even for more then just 3 hours''.gosshhh this couple just makes me go crazy over them''.
"Hie donald, Instead of mailing I m messaging u the recipes. The ingredient for the food is love. Only love. So make or do whatever you want to do with your love. I only want that from you. So you decide what you wanna do or make. Love you n missing you already. Will be back soon"
This lines were the best lines'. Sharon want anything but should be made by Swayam and the ingredient is love''awww how sweet and lovable couple''
Loved Swayam's and Kaka's convo'..kaka didn't want to become kabab mein haddi'hehehehe Swayam came to Sharon's house to pick her up awwiiieee and Sharon is soo comfortable to live with Swayam''Swayam: [he nuzzles on the back of her head] hey you can never disturb me. Woh toh maine isliye kaha kyunki mujhe tumhare saath iss world me apna life spend karna hai as human jo hamare liye heaven hoga, hell me nahi as ghosts.
Sharon: [sternly] shut up. Then both laughs.
This lines were hilarious''.Just love the they were soo comfortable and enjoying spending time with each other'..
Last part of the update was superb'..Swayam planned soo much for Sharon'Awwwiiee Sharon will be living with Swayam'Awwiiieee
Anindita Fab update you have awesomely penned down every part of this update'Always love reading your work'..This was indeed a very long update Can't wait to read the next chappy'.. please update soon dear'.Luv u β€οΈ
This content was originally posted by: binuja_Hey Ani...π€β€οΈ
Firstly i m so sorry for the super late comment..but u gave me the license again to comment late..π
Coming to the update...Ramu kaka's timings are always bad...π
Sharon blushing and swayam still lost in her land...".nahi nahi kaka god me nahi woh mujhe gale lagaye huyi thi."π
How adorable was swayam when he told that he will do anything for her...typical majnu...:)
and he is not even ready to leave her alone for few hours...naughty guy...:P
And then sharon's message was the one which i liked the most in the update...
"The ingredient for the food is love. Only love. So make or do whatever you want to do with your love. I only want that from you. " π³π³
Then comes swayam's surprise...he will do anything to make her feel special...and this was just an example...:)
and aww kaka wanted to leave them in peace...or i would rather say he wanted some peace..:P
swayam comes to pick her in his cycle...and she even goes with him leaving her luxurious car behind to carry the bags...how sweet...and their ride surely did remind me our swaron's cycle ride scene..:)
how badly i wanted to know the surprise...dont make me wait more...otherwise even i will start spamming...better update fast...π
and yeah will never forget to appreciate u for the picture selection...amazing as always...eagerly waiting for the next part...π³
This content was originally posted by: prateekdave7Hey Anindita,
I am first one reader of this Chapter,but in case of comment...i am last one...becoz i am not able to appreciate u'r work...u always rock with u'r updates...I just loved it...Firstly,i love ramu kaka's character..he is so understanding person..but their timing of entrance is so wrong...Swayam and kaka's convo after sharon leave is so sweet... Its great swayam want to cook something...and sharon help him..Well said by sharon...(indirectly well said by u).."The ingredient for the food is love. Only love. So make or do whatever you want to do with your love..".I just remember that swayam also used to say this line to sharon..not sure...(Initial swaron scenes Of D3)..so so adorable line...swayam at sharon's house and then cycle ride...Very amazing and romantic. and then description of sharon's hair and swayam reply words is awesome"hey you can never disturb me. Woh toh maine isliye kaha kyunki mujhe tumhare saath iss world me apna life spend karna hai as human jo hamare liye heaven hoga, hell me nahi as ghosts"...and last..swayam want to give surprise tosharon...and u stop at furious end...So cant wait for surprise...So reveal it asap..i.e..keep update asap... This time u'r update is so so fast..so keep it up for next update also...
pictures are so so good and truthfull regarding current scene..as always..so in total,i just loved it..amazing update as always..
Thanx a lot for Pm..and i read u'r scrap..yes,i used to visit u'r profile..butnot in wrong way...
Keep update..
Prateek
Chapter 14
Swayam's flat, Mumbai
Swayam: here is the surprise for you daisy, hope you like it.
And slowly removes his hand from her eyes. After seeing the view in front of her she had tears in her eyes. They were standing in the semi dark room. The only light which was lightening the room was the flames of the scented candles. The whole room was decorated with scented candles and orchid flowers. The floor was covered with heart shaped red, white and pink balloons. On the bed there was a big teddy bear with "I love you" written on it, one bouquet of orchids, one red coloured heart shaped pillow, one black coloured dress, one jewellery box which had a pair of black stone studded ear ring, neck piece, bracelet and one ring, with silver plating over them. It was looking like as if the jewellery set was made for only that dress which was kept beside that box. Besides all these she saw a box of chocolates, one box of jelly candy's kept on the bed.
In front of the dresser she saw he has set a table for two. In the middle of the table there was a flower vase and in it were white lilies. She freed herself from swayam's arm and moved towards the table to see what food he has made. She saw there were two bowls of soup, two plates of noodles, one bowl of chicken popcorn, one basket full of sandwiches and one bottle of coke. There was a note on the table. It was written "A special date for my love with lots of love.
Sharon was looking at all the foods and decorations with amusement and tears of happiness were constantly flowing from her eyes. Suddenly she felt swayam's arms around her waist. He hugged her from behind and kept his chin on her shoulder.
Swayam: why are you crying? Maine yaha romantic date ki setting kiya tha Halloween date ki nahi. Kuch darawna dikha tumhe?
Sharon: [grimacing] oh god Donald tum bakwaas mat karo. Its incredibly beautiful. I loved it. You did all these things for me? Thank you so much Donald.
Swayam: nahi nahi mujhe thank you mat bolo. Maine ye sab tumhare liye nahi kiya hai balki kaka k liye kiya hai.
Sharon at first glared at him then laughed. Swayam too joined her.
Sharon: waise ye food kaise bana liya?
Swayam: iske liye malls ko salute karna chahiye.
Sharon: woh kyun?
Swayam: ab waha almost har dish ka ready to made solution milta hai isiliye its easy. Mujhe jo kuch easy laga maine le liya. But kisike saath kuch bhi connected nahi hai. Ye nato full Chinese hai aur na..
She places her finger on his lips.
Sharon: par yaha ka har dish love se bana huya hai. Toh huya na ye love cuisine.
Swayam smiles and kisses on her finger. She shyly removes her finger from his lips.
Swayam: tum ready ho jao main bahar wait karta hoon.
She nods. He with a grin on his face leaves the room closing the door behind him. When he was waiting for her in the living room her driver brought her luggage for her. He took them and kept them on simran's room and came back and waited for her in the living room. After about 15 minutes when she opened the door she was showered with rose petals. He has adjusted the bucket of rose petals in that way that when the door of his room will be opened the bucket will turn and the petals will fall on that person who will open the door. She was enjoying the shower of those feather soft petals. She stretched her hands horizontically and closed her eyes to feel the soft petals on her skin. When the shower stopped she opened her eyes and saw swayam leaning over the fridge looking at her intently and lovingly. She rushed in his arms and hugged him tightly. He hugged her too in the same manner.
Sharon: thanks Donald mujhe itna special feel karwane k liye.
Swayam: ab tum mere liye special ho toh tumhe special toh feel karwayunga na. Aur tum ro kyun rahi ho?
Sharon: kyunki maine socha nahi tha main kabhi yeh happiness feel kar payungi.
Swayam: daisy I understand that. But ab main yaha hoon na. So from now onwards you will feel happiness and you will try and break that shell around you.
Sharon: haan Donald I will break that shell around me.
Swayam: I am sure you will. Now lets have lunch.
Sharon: yeah lets go.
He scoops her up in his arms and takes her to his room.
He makes himself sit on a chair and places Sharon on his lap. He wraps her waist with his left hand and held her tightly. Then they started feeding each other while talking with each other.
Swayam: [smirking] toh tumhe hamara promise yaad hai?
Sharon: [glared at him] as if you don't know. Meri sari baatein jann liya, sab kuch and now you are asking if I remember it or not.
Swayam: [chuckles] haan aur tumne mujhe punishment bhi de diya uske liye.
Sharon: [narrows her eyes] kyun tumhe kuch problem huya punishment se?
He tightened his grip on her waist and said
Swayam: [grinning] nahi problem kyun hoga? Mujhe toh faida hi huya.
Sharon: [confused] faida? Kaisa faida?
Swayam: [smirking] because of your running behind me we fell on the bed and after that what happened between us I could see you blush for the first time. So..
Sharon: [blushing remembering that moment] shut up Donald.
Swayam: but its true you look incredible when you blush and I love to see you blush because of me.
Sharon: [fake anger] whatever. Lets get the table cleaned.
They cleaned the table and their hands and came back to the room. Sharon took the bouquet and went back to the kitchen and brought the flowers back in a vase and placed it on the bed side table. When she was back in the room she heard a beautiful music playing on the stereo and swayam leaning over his cupboard. She sat on the bed opening the box of jelly candy and pops one in her mouth and again looked at him for offering him the candies. She saw swayam coming towards her with an intense look on his face. He came near her and took the box from her hand and kept it on the bed. She raised her one brow at him.
Sharon: what? Nahi khana?
Swayam sat on the floor covered with the balloons on one of his knees and forwarded his left hand towards Sharon and said
Swayam: dance?
Sharon smiles and nods her head. Then she places her right hand on swayam's hand and gets up from the bed.
Swayam wraps her waist with his hands and Sharon places her hands on his shoulder.
Then they started to sway back and forth with the rhythm of the music. With them the balloons were also dancing, those of the balloons which were near their feets. Both were looking deep into each other's eyes, lost in each other. Suddenly swayam started to sing looking intensely in her eyes.
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uhKSVJOSrW4[/YOUTUBE]
[If you have time then you can listen to this song]
Na Hai Yeh Pana
Na Khona Hi Hai
Tera Na Hona Jane
Kyun Hona Hi Hai
While singing this swayam placed sharon's hand over his heart. She could feel his heart pounding on his chest, each beat chanting her name.
Tum Se Hi Din Hota Hai
Surmaiye Shaam Aati
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi
Har Ghadi Saans Aati Hai
Zindagi Kehlati Hai
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi
He sang those lines looking deep into her green eyes. Both his hands were
wrapped around her waist. Her one hand was over his heart and another around
his neck. She was also looking intensely in his eyes where she could see pure
love for her. His eyes were sparkling with love for her. She could feel he was
singing each of the lines of this song for her meaning them from the core of
his heart.
Aankhon Mein Ankhne Teri
Bahoon Mein Baahein Teri
Mera Na Mujhe Mein Kuch Raha Hua Kya
Baaton Mein Baatein Teri
Raatein Saugatein Teri
Kyun Tera Sab Yeh Ho Gaya
Hua Kya
Mein Kahin Bhi Jata Hoon
Tumse Hi Mil Jata Hoon
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi
He turned her and now her back was against his chest. He rested his head on her shoulder and she could feel his warm breath on her neck.
She closed her eyes to feel him. He also closed his eyes. Her scent filled his lungs and with every breath he took more and more of it.
Shoor Mein Khamoshi Hai
Thodi Se Behoshi Hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Aadha Sa Wada Kabhi
Aadhe Se Jayada Kabhi
Jee Chahe Karlu Is Trah Wafa Ka
Chode Na Chote Kabhi
Tode Na Tute Kabhi
Jo Dhaga Tumse Jud Gaya Wafa Ka
He again turned her to make her face him and slowly slowly pulled her towards him. Now they hugging each other and still swaying. Their bodies have molded into one. Sharon could hear his heart beat. Her head was on his chest and his head on the top of her head. They were hugging each other tightly and their eyes were still closed.
Mein Tera Sharmaya Hoon
Jo Mein Ban Paya Hoon
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi
Raste Miljate Hai
Manzile Miljati Hai
Tumse Hi Tumse
Hi
Swayam sang these lines huskily. By now they have stopped swaying. Both of them
could feel each other's warm breath on their face as their faces were just
inches apart.
Swayam moved a little bit now touching sharon's shaky lips. He was looking into sharon's eyes and waiting for any disapproval from her. She slowly closes her eyes and moved her hands in his hair from his neck. He started to move his lips on hers slowly and softly tasting her soft rosy lips. She started to respond to his kiss with the same passion tasting his honey sweet lips. After like eternity swayam pulled away from the kiss out of breath. Sharon looked at him and then shyly looked away blushing.
He hugged her with a sweet smile playing on his face. She hugged him back. The kiss was soft yet passionate, it was their first kiss.
I am really very bad in describing stuffs, especially romantic stuffs. Hope I could do justice to this part. Please forgive me for my mistakes. Do hit the like button and leave your precious comments. Thank you.
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