lovely update dear...
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Thank you so much shaani
lvoed the first meeting of swaron it was amazing
nd swayam is donald nd sharon is daisy haha soo cutee
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loved donald-daisy
sharon getting scared of the dog and swayam comforting her was really cute
will be waiting for the next part , update soon...
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Thank you so much shishir...thanx for liking their nick name...donald n daisy..
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Thank you so much namrata...yaar i am really sorry...dubara nahi hoga...kan pakad rahi hu...sorry :(
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Thank you so much neetha...nahi nahi woh puppy mera nahi hai...woh toh swaron k liye cupid hai for 1 chap :P :D
The best part was when Swayam holds both Sharon and the puppy and the puppy starts licking Sharon's hand
And i could just imagine Sharon jumping around screaming and the puppy being scared as well..kya confused shocked look hoga Swayam ke face pe..
They were lost in each others eyes and were thinking about each other was cute, looking forward to the next update and their next meeting.
Thank you so much sudha.. i m updating in few minutes...
Edited by Anindita91 - 11 years agoThank you so much prathik...m updating...
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hahaaha
swaron's first meet was damn cute!
and the puppy,well he played a major part in the story!
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Thank you so much dear...thanx a lot for thinking i am doing justice to swayam's character n thinking that i can continue the story well...it really encouraged me...i hope i stand up to everyone's ur expectations...n don't let u down.. :)
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poor swayam..bechra ek taraf innocent puppy or ek taraf innocent sharon:)))
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yaar wo puppy toh bahot pyari thi...
Sharon r hothat ki holo?? i guess Donal chole jaoar por theke orokom type hoe gache...
Thank you so much mimi...ota pore jana jabe kano Sharon arom hoye geche...aktu wait kor... :)
Loved their first meet after many years, they really missed each other na??
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concept-awesome concept..as wel as cs
chap1- loved swayam's family n deir family talks..his dad, mom n sis pulling his leg dat was soo sweet..
chap2-swaron's first meet kya intrestng hui boss..ek puppy ne milwaya dono ko...n wat happened to sharon 4 yrs back dat she never wanna be her real self again..?? very eager to knw..
waitin for d next update..update it sooon...
-monica
Thank you so much monica...dear plz no need to say sorry...its absolutely fine...i m glad u liked it...u will come to know about that secret in few more updates...n i m updating in few minutes...
Oh I forgot to mention...update jaldi koris bt monday er pore koris amar exam sesh hoe jabe r amae erom sobar last e cmnt korte hobena tahole
Thank you so much sreya...wow this time such a biiig comment...so sweet...n i got ur warning dear...i will not give my opinion for the updates...:P :D Ami aaj evening a update korchi as per tor demand...but tui koi gayeb hoye royechish??? Reply korish online hole... ;)
aww the puppy incident was funny
Thank you so much gaveshni...
kar rahi hu update kuch der me...i will not break my promise :)
Edited by Anindita91 - 11 years agoChapter 3
St. Louis College, Mumbai
Swayam reached college. He was already late. He quickly parked his cycle in the parking lot. Then by asking a peon he gets to know where his class fyb.com is. He then runs towards his class.
Swayam: sir may i come in?
Prof: yes..who r u?
Swayam: sir swayam shekhawat new admission.
Prof: oh yes prof dixit told me about u. But u r late.
Swayam: sorry sir. It won't happen again.
Prof: today is your first day that's why i am letting you in..from the next class i will not tolerate all these excuses..
Swayam: no sir i won't be late from the next day.
Prof: come in and take your sit..
[he goes in and looks around the whole class and finds one empty seat next to Rey. He sits there]
The prof again starts teaching. In between the class
Rey: [forwading his hand] hey dude i m rey. The GS of this college.
Swayam: [shakes his hand with him] hi rey. I m swayam.
Rey: hey swayam. So half of the semester khatam ho gaya hai n tum abhi join kar raho. Where were you till now?
Swayam: ha woh main dusre college me tha par as St. Loius is the best college in Mumbai i always wanted to join this college. So here i am..
Rey: that's great toh ab tak kaun se college me the?
Swayam: [in his mind] ab main kya bolu..agar maine sab kuch bata diya toh phir baat toh wohi ho jayegi..yaha sabko pata chal jayega main kaun hu..
Rey: dude where are you lost?
[swayam comes out of his thoughts.]
Swayam: ha woh main..
THAP THAP
The prof smacks on their head and shouts..
Prof: stop talking in the class otherwise i will throw you out.
Reyam: sorry sir.
Swayam: [in his mind] bach gaya isbar..thank you sir..
After the class rey introduces swayam to everyone.
Rey: hey guys meet swayam n swayam they are my friends.
Kriya: hi swayam i am kriya, welcome to our college.
Neha: ha swayam welcoming you are. Me neha. [turns towards vicky] N this is my deewana Vicky. Together we are bagu.
Swayam: what bagu?
Vicky: main aur meri deewani. Babu n kagu. In short bagu.
Swayam: that's sweet. [laughs]
Nilesh: yaar tum dono kahi pe bhi suru ho jate ho. hey swayam this is nilesh.
Bharat, vishaka, simmi n rinni also introduces themselves. They all became friends with swayam. He then excuses himself and goes to the library for issuing books. While coming back he saw in the notice board that team weaklings need its 6th dancer. The audition is hold today after college. He loves dancing. Dancing is his passion. In Londan he was famous for his dancing. Actually not only dancing but studies, basketball. He is an all rounder. Best in everything he does. So he thought of giving the audition in the evening.
[Note: here the dazzling and weakling fight is over. They all are friends now. Team weakling's lead male dancer has left the college for some personal reasons. Because of that the team needs its 6th dancer.]
In the college canteen.
Everyone was present there except swaron. Sharon is still not back in college.
Kriya: pata nahi humme 6th dancer milega ya nahi. Universeji please aap sambhal lena. Aaj auditions thik se ho jaye aur humme ek achha sa dancer mil jaye.
Vishaka: ya dude don't know aaj kya hoga.
Neha: tensioning neha is.
Rey: guys tum log itna tension kaise le sakte ho. Don't worry sab achha hi hoga. After all audition sharon main aur meri baat cutter...[vicky cuts him in between]
Vicky: kya bola baat cutter. Ye baat cutter kaun hai. [kriyaansh are couple n it is a secret]
Nilesh: ha rey bata ye baat cutter kaun hai.
Kriya: [glares at rey]
Rey: arre nahi nahi kuch nahi guys chodo na. Hum log bhi kya baatein kar rahe hai. Main toh bas keh raha tha ki auditions achha hoga. So don't worry.
Rinni: par guys auditions toh tab hogi na jab sharon yaha hogi. Woh toh abhi bhi aayi nahi hai.
Amar: ha shalon ko toh ab tak aa jana chahiye tha.
Just then sharon enters.
Sharon: hey guys.
Simmi: hey sharon tum aa gayi. Itna late kaha ho gaya.
Sharon: pucho mat simmi. Raste mein ek idiot mil gaya tha. Cycle bhi thik se chalana nahi aata usse. Uski wajase main late ho gayi venue pe pohoch te.. [in her mind] main in logo ko sach toh nahi bata sakti ki actually me kya huya tha..usne..
Rey:[breaks her thoughts] sharon calm down. It's ok. Hota hai. Tum thik toh hona?
Bharat: arre tu isse kya puch raha hai thik hai ya nahi. Us insaan ke bareme soch jispe ye baras ke aayi hai. Mujhe toh taras aa raha hai us bechare par.
Sharon: [glares at bharat] tumhe kya lagta hai main...[someone cuts her in between]
Swayam: hi guys. [he can't see sharon because she is facing her back and sharon can't see swayam because he is behind her]
All turns to look at swayam including sharon. Both look at each other.
Swayam: tum?
Sharon: tum?
Chorus: you both know each other?
Sharon:[shouts] ha guys yahi woh idiot hai jiske bareme main bol rahi thi. [looks at swayam..she was determined not to show her real self again] tum yaha kya kar rahe ho? Just get lost. Tumhari wajase main late ho gayi venue pe pohoch te..
Swayam: [calmly] lekin late mere wajase kaise huyi tum batao..
Sharon: maine kaha na main tumhari wajase late huyi hu..na tum mujhe milte aur na main late hoti..
Swayam: late tum meri wajase nahi huyi thi..woh puppy..[Sharon cuts him in between]
Sharon: just shut up..
Rey: guys guys stop. Sharon please calm down.
Kriya: ha sharon aap calm down ho jao. Swayam aap hamare saath audtions dekhne chaloge.
Swayam: ha kriya main chalunga toh sahi par auditions dekhne nahi balki dene.
Bharat: kya tu auditions dega.
Vishaka: wow dude that's great.
Sharon: what great vishaka? Isse pucho isse dance ka D bhi aata hai kya.
Swayam: arre what do mean dance ka D bhi aata hai. I know dancing..isiliye toh audition dunga na..
Sharon: listen auditions main lungi. So don't dare to lie.
Swayam: tum phirse chillane lagi..tum chilla kyun rahi ho? Aur main jhut kyun bolunga. Auditions tum lo ya koi bhi le tab prove ho hi jayega main jhut bol raha hu ya sach.
Sharon: will see..
Sw: surely you will..
Rey: guys stop bohot huya. Auditions pe sab dekha jayega. Abhi fight mat karo. Chalo auditions ka time ho gaya hai. Chalte hain.
Sharon: ha chalo.
Swayam: yeah.
While walking swayam and sharon were stealing glances and were thinking why they felt like this for the other person in the morning and why they felt the other person is Donald/daisy.
Here is the end of chapter three. i know very less swaron..i will consider it to be no swaron and i will make it up in the next chapter..Thanx all of u for ur comments. It really encourages me...forgive me for my mistakes. Thank you. Jum see i didn't break my promise...i updated today itself... π
Edited by Anindita91 - 11 years ago