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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hello everyone first of all I want to thank all of u who has liked and commented...thank u guys for such a great response...i have tried to send pm to everyone who has liked and commented...but if I have missed any one of u then I am extremely sorry for that...i request u to let me know about it by either sending me pm or commenting here itself...thank you

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Chapter 1

Shekhawat Mansion, London

Someone from the kitchen shouts...

Nandini: Dinner is ready...sab khane k liye aa jao...

[from their respective rooms]

Deepak: aaya

Swayam: coming mom

Simran: yes mom coming in two minutes

Deepak comes and takes his seat with a file in his hand. Swayam enters.

Swayam: dad aap khane k waqt bhi kaam karoge?

Deepak: haan..nahi woh yeh kuch jaruri papers hai...actually property k papers'aur yeh kisike liye gift hai...

Swayam: gift? Kiske liye?

Deepak: woh main tujhe baad me batayunga...tu bata packing ho gayi teri?

Swayam: ha dad almost done.

Deepak: mujhe ab tak samajh nahi aa raha hai tu london chodke kyun jana chahta hai?

Swayam: dad maine bataya tha na ki mujhe yaha achha nahi lagta...yeh extra attention n all I just hate it...I don't understand sabko hamesha swayam shekhawat se hi kyun friendship karni hoti hai...woh swayam se friendship nahi kar sakte kya?

Deepak: tu bhi na swayam ajeeb hai...tere age k boys girls ke attention pane k liye kya kuch nahi karte hai aur ek tu hai iss attention se bhag raha hai...

Swayam: dad please aapko pata hai na I don't like all these...aur main independent hona chahta hu...aapke k rehte aisi koi bhi chiz nahi hai jo mujhe na mile...mujhe kuch karne k bhi koi jarurat nahi paregi itna bada emperior hai aapka...par dad usme mera koi haath nahi hai...sab aapka aur aapke empoyees ka haath hai...main chahta hu ki agar log mujhe jane toh mere hard work k wajase jane...not bcoz I m swayam shekhawat the son of deepak shekhawat...

Deepak: samjha par yahi reason hai na india jane ka? Ya phir koi aur reason hai?

[simran enters]

Simran: ya bro batao na koi aur reason hai kya?

Swayam: matlab by aur reason kya mean kar raheho aap dono?

Deepak: yahi ki koi ladki hai kya india me jiske liye tu ye sabka attention chodke ja raha hai?

Simran: ha bro batao na kaun hai meri bhabs?

Swayam: what nonsense ye kya baatein kar rahe hai aap dono?

Deepak: arre tu hamesha girls se bhagta rehta hai...isiliye puch rahe hai..koi special hai kya? [looks at simran and winks]

Simran: [smiles at her dad] ha bro koi toh special hogi na...yaha toh kisi ladki ki taraf dekhte bhi nahi ho...toh of course india me koi hogi'

Swayam: dad sim bohot huya ok...aapk log ko aaj main hi mila hu leg pulling k liye...

Simran: bro hum aapka leg pulling kaha kar rahe hai...hum toh bas puch rahe hai...

[nandini enters with the food]

Nandini: bas bohot huya tum dono ka...kal woh chala jayega aur aaj aap log usse aise saata raheho..waise swayam tum unhe na saahi mujhe bata sakte ho agar koi hai toh...batao kaun hai meri bahu?

Swayam: [irritated] mom aap bhi? Not fair...[face baby]

Deepak: achha ab bas karte hai...iska face toh dekho...

Simran: ha dad mere bro ko aur mat satao...

Nandini: bro ki chamchi...come help me in serving the food...

Simran: yes mom

[both of them serve the food n they start eating]

Deepak: swayam mujhe tumhe kuch important kehna hai..

Swayam: ha dad say...

Deepak: tumhari mom aur main hamesha tumhare saath majak karte rehte hai...par one thing we want to say...we are proud of you my son..I am sure you will reach the heights...

Nandini: ha swayam hum tumhare decision se bohot happy hai...n our blessing are always with you...your the best son in this world..

Simran: best bro too...

Deepak: ha n the best boyfriend also jiske k liye ye india ja raha hai..

Swayam: dad phirse? [pouting]

[everyone laughs n then swayam also joins them]

Deepak: dekh swayam baki sab toh thik hai par ye tera rented house ka decision mujhe thik nahi lag raha...mumbai me itna bada ghar hai humhara aur tu rented house me rahega...

Swayam: dad agar main waha raha toh same chiz hi hoga na...mujhe true friends chahiye...aur us ghar me rehne se sabko pata chal jayega that I am your son...aur sab mujhse phir money k liye friendship karenge...I don't want that to happen...

Nandini: par beta waha gautam ki family bhi rehti hai...agar tumhe kisi chiz ki jarurat paregi toh they can take care of it...

[swayam remembers that he will have to visit there after reaching mumbai...after all he has waited for 11 years to meet his best friend daisy]

Nandini: swayam kya soch raheho?

[comes out of his thoughts]

Swayam: kuch nahi mom...don't worry I will be fine...aap tension mat lo...

Deepak: mujhe pata tha tu nahi manega...isiliye I have a surprise for all of you...

Nandini, swayam n simran in unision: what?

Deepak: [hand over the file to swayam] this is for you my son.

Swayam:[after checking in the file] dad aapne mere liye yeh flat kharida...iski jarurat nahi thi...

[nandini n simran smiles]

Deepak: chup kar tu...mujhe pata hai tu apne principles ka pakka hai...tujhe kisika help lena achha nahi lagta...but I am your father...so just shut up and accept it..

Nandini: ha swayam we are your parents...humse kuch lena galat nahi hai...

Swayam: mom dad of course aapse kuch lena galat nahi hai n mere paas jo bhi hai sab aapka hi toh diya huya hai...n i am so lucky to be a part of this family...aap dono se toh understanding n friendly parents aur koi ho hi nahi sakta hai...main toh bas bol raha tha mere akele k liye yeh flat lene k kya jarurat thi?

Deepak: tere akele k liye kaha? Tere chamchi ne bol rakha hai after 1 year uski school khatam hote hi she will shift to mumbai...tere paas'

[swayam looks at simran n smiles]

Simran: yes main aapne bro k bina nahi reh sakti...I will go to mumbai after completing my school [looking at swayam]aur aap aur main alag rehenge toh mere raj ko kaise dundenge? Mere raj ko toh aap hi ko dund k dena hai...

[deepak, nandini n swayam smiles at her innocense]

Swayam: ha ha meri cutie pie...main dund k dunga tujhe tera raj...par ek condition hai [swayam calls simran cutie pie pyaar se]

Simran: kya?

Swayam: promise kar mere jaane k baad mom n dad ka kheyal rakhigi n achhe se padhai karegi...n no shaitani ok? Ye sab abhi bacha k rakh..jab mere paas aayegi tab karna...

Simran: promise bro.

Next day in london airport.

Everyone goes to see of swayam. Ramu kaka their cook is putting all the luggage of swayam into a trolley. He is with them for the last 20 years. Though ramu kaka is their cook but they all love him like their family member.

Swayam: mom mera toh do hi bag tha na yeh theesra bag kaha se aaya?

Nandini: yeh tumhara bag nahi kaka ka bag hai...

[Ramu Kaka]

Swayam: kya? Kaka bhi mere saath chal rahe hai kya?

Deepak: yes.

Swayam: par dad kyun? Iski kya jarurat thi?

Deepak: mujhse mat puch...yeh tere mom ka decision hai...ab woh is ghar ki boss hai...main kya karu?

Swayam: mom?

Nandini: swayam tumhe main achhe se janti hu...tumhe coffee aur sandwich k siva kuch banana nahi aata hai...tum roj breakfast, lunch aur dinner me sandwich aur coffee toh nahi kha sakte...

Swayam: par mom aappe bohot kaam par jayega...I will manage na...

Simran: no bro main hu na mom ki help karne k liye...

[deepak, nandini n swayam look at each other n burst out laughing]

Simran: what? Aap log has kyun raheho?

Swayam: kuch nahi sim...[turns towards his mom] mom best of luck n happy cooking...

Deepak n nandini: [laughs out loud]

Simran: main kisise baat nahi karungi...main ja rahi hu[baby face]

[swayam holds her wrist n stops her from going]

Swayam: aww meri cutie pie gussa ho gayi...solli...le yeh tere liye...

[he takes out a big chocolate box from his backpack n give it to her]

Simran:[getting excited] wow chocolates...thanx bro...you are the best..but phir bhi main aap sabse gussa hu...I know how to cook ok?

Dee-Nan-Swa: ha ha humme pata hai [laughs]

Swayams flight is been announced. Everyone hugs him. Then swayam n ramu kaka leaves for mumbai..

That day after reaching mumbai they both unpack their stuffs and sets the house. its almost 12 at night... Swayam goes to sleep thinking tomorrow will be a new day. A new beginning, he will join his new college and after 11 long years he will meet his best friend daisy.

Raiprakash house, Mumbai

It was 6 o' clock in the morning. A girl comes out from the bathrroom wearing bathrob. She hears her phone is ringing. She picks it up.

Sharon: hello

Rey: hey sharon. Good morning.

Sharon: good morning rey.. tum kaha tak pohche? Main bas paanch minute me ready hoke niche aa rahi hu..

Rey: sorry sharon main tumhare saath venue dekhne nahi aa sakta...woh princi ka msg aaya tha...unhone abhi mujhe college bulaya hai...

Sharon: that's ok rey'tum college jao...koi important kaam hogana...main venue check karke college aa jayungi...

Rey: ok sharon'see you in college...

Sharon: cya..bye.

Rey: bye.

Rey hangs up the phone. Sharon gets ready and sets out for checking the venue for charity event.

Swayam's flat, Mumbai

Swayam was sleeping but he heard someone calling out his name and was jerking him.

Kaka: swayam baba utho...aaj tumhara college me pehla din hai tum late ho jaoge...baba utho.

Sw: [he gets up gives a smile to kaka] good morning kaka.

Kaka: good morning beta tum jaldi se taiyar ho jao main tumhare liye nashta banata hu.

Sw: ji kaka.

He gets up from his bed and goes to the bathroom. Takes shower. Then dresses up and goes to the hall finish his breakfast and heads for college in his cycle.

He was on his way to college when he saw a puppy in front of his cycle. To save it he turned his cycle towards the right. He didn't notice a car was proceeding towards him.

          

Here is the end of chapter one. I know this chapter is boring. No swaron in this chapter. Plz forgive me. But this was needed. Sorry. N above all plz forgive me for my mistakes. I am writing for the first time. Plz share ur suggestions. I need them...I will try to improve.

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Edited by Anindita91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i liked it, waiting 4 swaron & i guess that car is of sharon & pm me 
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey its awsum not at all boring
loved it amazing 
thnkss for the pm
:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww...swayam khud ki image banana chaata hai...good boy...and loved it when his parents and his sis were khiching his tangπŸ˜†
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago


*EDITED

BORING??? Did u just call this update boring??? 😲

By god if this is what ur "BORING" updates r then god knows how ur "INTERESTING" updates r gonna be like πŸ˜•

N man if this how u write ur "BORING" updates then I'll request u to give us loads n loads of "BORING" updates n yes bich-bich me "INTERESTING" updates v de dena πŸ˜†

Peee-leazeee don't call it boring yaar, it was super fun update 😊

I loved the bonding that Shekhawat family shares, its really sweet n cute 😊 loved the way everyone was teasing swayam n how surprisingly his mom too joins in n supports them πŸ˜†

The bro-sis bond is really sweet 😊 n Mr. n Mrs. Shekhawat seems to be one of those cool parents types n I have already started to love them ❀️ 😊

Bt ek shikayat, yeh kahan rok diya!? Why did u stop it here yaar?? πŸ˜” My gut feeling says that the car is gonna be sharon's n we might just get to see their 1st interaction or maybe a tiff too πŸ˜‰ bt since u have stopped it here, I feel like I'm gonna die out of excitement πŸ˜”

Well in short fatafati update chilo n I completely loved it 😊

Update soon n yeah nxt time ARO BORO UPDATE CHAI πŸ˜›Edited by sreya19roy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me loving this FF a lotttπŸ˜ƒ
and it was NOT at all boring it was really very nice πŸ˜Š
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
anu.πŸ€—.i loved it gal..everythin was explained in detail.πŸ‘.i loved the shekawat family..they are super cool.πŸ˜ƒ..n aww swayam is such an awesome character.❀️.i just love him..waitin fr the next update..

p.s:teri hindi intni bhi buri nahi hai..πŸ˜†
Edited by neetha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey this wasn't boring. πŸ˜ƒ
great start.
there was no swaron but the update was really cute. πŸ‘ the pictures were awesome & they make update more interesting.
Keep it up good work.
πŸ‘πŸΌ
continue soon & thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...i luved the airport moments.