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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Nice update. Really loved reading it. Waiting to read next part

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aveiro

That was an amazing chapter. 

They had a pretty much decent conversation.

Arnav was trying his best to impress her!

WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME? 

YOU HAVE MADE ME FALL IN LOVE WITH TWO ARNAV'S FROM BOTH YOUR STORIES.

When is the KISS coming?
 

Candy, I am going to come all the way to London, to beat your butt for demanding a kiss, silly girl. He is in the 'impress the girl' mode, if he kisses her now, heaven knows how long they will be crossing swords.

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
nice

beautiful descriptions

thanku
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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:41pm | IP Logged
oh no...was looking forward to reading abt their first date...but alas, Dadi had to intervene...

probably found out his single status & now has found suitable bahu???

K is acknowledging her feelings, at least to her self...

-Sona
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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
fantastic update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 6:50pm | IP Logged
awsum update...
hes tryin to impress her...
n shes cumin to knw tat shes fallin for him...
i wish they had dinner together...
tanx 4 d pm...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 7:13pm | IP Logged
The awkwardness, the nervousness to talk, or make polite conversation was all written very nicely by you. Khushi was opening up, and I enjoyed reading how she told him  about his father, and their closeness. And also when she said yes about going for dinner so she wouldnt have to make food for him, because she wouldnt be able to concentrate with him around. LOL!
Arnav, I see a naughty streak in him since the beginning, but this was cute and funny. He feeling weird to use different talks to impress a girl...
All in all, good conversation, if only Dadi wouldnt have been Kabab main haddi!


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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by segad

I protest!  Bait and switch!

I expected fireworks, fights, arguments, witty repartee and I get a guy dropping a girl home Confused
 
I was in two minds, it could be the dinner or the damn call, and I opted for the call. It was too early and honestly it would seem forced, they are warming up to each other and I rather they plan and go on a date. This would be too much of a chance pe dance kind of a situation. Hopefully they do get down to being more than civil in future.

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