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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Arnav actually seems a wee bit vulnerable here, being so concerned about Khushi's opinion of him and the impression he wants to make. I'd say this brings forth yet another aspect of the man who other wise appears absolutely impenetrable.

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 6:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by citi

Arnav actually seems a wee bit vulnerable here, being so concerned about Khushi's opinion of him and the impression he wants to make. I'd say this brings forth yet another aspect of the man who other wise appears absolutely impenetrable.
 

Arnav is a complex man, no doubt; he sees Khushi as a mystery and is eager to solve it. She is not giving him the attention he is used to from the fairer sex. I don't say everyone who interacts with him has to like him but acknowledge him yes, that he demands. When she does not do so, it irks him and also piques his interest. He reassesses his view and finds himself drawn to her and hence the need for him to make amends to the impression he has created of himself in her mind. He accepts she is beautiful and would want to be liked by someone like her; it's a primal requirement according to me, to attract. I agree with you he is penetrable after all.

Edit - don't you like him a bit more because he is like this Wink



Edited by Kalyaani - 10 September 2012 at 6:07am

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Loved it sashis an awesome father

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Kalyaani, Thx for the PM and the update! Luv how they openly communicate about issues unlike in the show, LOL. Well, there are a lot of things I like this in FF that aren't on the showWink ...


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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 11:40am | IP Logged
And my readers accuse me of cliffhangers!!!

I loved this update and this story is fast becoming one of my favorites. You have a gift of writing about such relatable characters...Look what you've done with Anjali...I have no idea what to feel about her...

I love Shashi-Khushi in this story...special the father - daughter bond. And he can see the connection, can he not? 

I am now waiting for the next update

I got here before your PM! IF's "My Posts" rocks!

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Haha..we all know which one was looking forward for the ride back home..
Its going to be a massive scene!

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged
So sorry for late edit

uni has started and it's taking over my life!! 

WOW! Loved it, Hmmm Arnav is falling her and even Anjali is being sweet to Khushi hmmm! 

I WANT A KISS *POUTS* PLEASE LOL


Edited by Aveiro - 11 September 2012 at 10:23am

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