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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Inked

I'm patient and am enjoying reading this phase as you slowly build your story. I appreciate that is part of storytelling-- the pace. Your work has an underlying calmness to it. Probably a reflection of you.  Look forward to more  Thank you for PM.
 
 
Gee Maya, that is awfully sweet of you, I am the opposite of calm in life. Short tempered and sharp tongued, these are the words that are often used to describe me and would now tell everyone that calmness can be associated with me too. I hope to pick up the pace, as it may get boring otherwise, keep the comments coming in, it helps.

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by meera30

I like the pace you are going ahead with! I like how you are building up Khushi's decisions and actions even though we don't know the motivations behind most. Clearly it is something worth waiting for!

So Mr. Raizada isn't going to South Africa. Interesting.

Looking forward to more!
 
Thanks Meera, I always wanted Khushi to be a well etched out character, she could be weak, insecure or whatever but certainly not vague. I sure hope the Khushi in my story has more "dum" than the one in the serial.

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
like how d story is going.can't say i'm not curious about 
Khushi's past though,buh i'm sure it'll be worth d wait! thnx fo d pm.

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 11:13pm | IP Logged
Raizada not going to South Africa, very interesting.

What I love in this story is that there is a certain calmness attached to this story, makes you feel peaceful after reading it. Lovely chapter!:)

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 1:29am | IP Logged
Oh my! This is so reserved, for a big comment!

For now, make do with a

"absolutely loved the update, and happy with the pace of the story"

Love,
V

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 4:33am | IP Logged
Hey there!

Sorry, I could not comment earlier...completed last 3 updates in a single

The pace for build up is absolutely perfect and it intrigues me more to know about Khushi and Ajit's private talk...Ah, Mr.ASR is not going anywhere...Looking forward to next update

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 5:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mistyrains

Raizada not going to South Africa, very interesting.

What I love in this story is that there is a certain calmness attached to this story, makes you feel peaceful after reading it. Lovely chapter!:)
 
Thanks a bunch dear a Hug from me to you
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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
I like this pace; it gives me time to let it all sink in. Thanks for the update and PM!

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