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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 8:14pm | IP Logged

Awesome update...

loved Khushi-Shashi interaction...they are friends n it reflects in thier conversation! Also its cute for Khushi to call all names to her father!Big smileBig smile
It was good to read Arnav's perspective to the break-up too...we cant make him the only villian in there...Clap
bua-shashi hush-talk was fab too!!
Thanks for the PM...update soon!

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
This is a warm and fuzzy update.  Father daughter conversation, brother sister conversation and a friendly good bye between Arnav and Lavanya.  Like the last one the most because when a heart gets broken, there are no heroes and no villains.  

Meant to comment in Raizada and Sons and here too...love it when you describe what people are wearing in so much detail that I can almost see it.


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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anamika100

This is a warm and fuzzy update.  Father daughter conversation, brother sister conversation and a friendly good bye between Arnav and Lavanya.  Like the last one the most because when a heart gets broken, there are no heroes and no villains.  

Meant to comment in Raizada and Sons and here too...love it when you describe what people are wearing in so much detail that I can almost see it.


 

You said it right; there are no heroes and villains, just humans. We like them one day and hate them the next, take Lavanya's case here; everyone was like she is nothing but a bimbo but now seeing her maturity in handling the break up the opinion changes and that is what I like. Readers reacting to each and every update, this gives the pleasures of writing another high. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 12:49am | IP Logged
So now shashi knows abt arnav but willkhushi acknowledge her attraction towards him
Loved the easy banter between dad and khushi sometimes poppy shashi dad
It reminds me of me calling my dad by his name and speaking to mom as mom

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 1:28am | IP Logged
awesomely written chapter
loved the trio r/s btw shashi bua and khushi
and woah shashi and bua knows abt khushi falling for arnav waiting to see how they got abt foging the relationship between them

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 2:15am | IP Logged
Chapter Twenty - two
Hee hee hee...Liked how u tagged Sana's new show with Lavanya's projects in Mumbai - tht was very pleasant!
Wonder if she will keep in touch with Khushi and Farhan even later , wont she be surprised to know ASR's interest is flowing in Khushi's direction now who apparently Farhan the dramabaazi says is "Nauseated with ASR" !
Their banter over the article turned out to be real good, Khushi seems very comfy with Mahi now! I keep wondering if Mahi has an inkling of who she cud be or if ASR is interested in her !

Chapter Twenty - three
"What now? The channel of communication is not open for this topic, is it?" LOL I love the interactions between Khushi and Shashi - so easy , comfortable and he is such a nice,level-headed father!

"Lavanya, you know I will always be there for you, if you need anything at all; just let me know" he said, voice soft and meaning every word he said.
I am glad to see he is talking to her and not making her feel like a sore thumb!

OOh Buaji is not all brawn :))))
Poor "poppy" he's such a dear "I hope her heart does not get broken Jiji, she may be able to handle it, I sure cannot"

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Arnav actually seems a wee bit vulnerable here, being so concerned about Khushi's opinion of him and the impression he wants to make. I'd say this brings forth yet another aspect of the man who other wise appears absolutely impenetrable.

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 6:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by citi

Arnav actually seems a wee bit vulnerable here, being so concerned about Khushi's opinion of him and the impression he wants to make. I'd say this brings forth yet another aspect of the man who other wise appears absolutely impenetrable.
 

Arnav is a complex man, no doubt; he sees Khushi as a mystery and is eager to solve it. She is not giving him the attention he is used to from the fairer sex. I don't say everyone who interacts with him has to like him but acknowledge him yes, that he demands. When she does not do so, it irks him and also piques his interest. He reassesses his view and finds himself drawn to her and hence the need for him to make amends to the impression he has created of himself in her mind. He accepts she is beautiful and would want to be liked by someone like her; it's a primal requirement according to me, to attract. I agree with you he is penetrable after all.

Edit - don't you like him a bit more because he is like this Wink



Edited by Kalyaani - 10 September 2012 at 6:07am

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