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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by citi

The interview's been well done and I'd say an excellent idea as this brings into focus, forcefully, the businessman side of Arnav. And you have managed to do it in a very real, serious manner conveying his skills as an entrepreneur and his standing in the world of business, subtly shifting the focus away from A the playboy.
I think Ms. Gupta must be just one many young maidens sighing over the article and it's accompanying photographBig smile but then he is interested in Ms. Gupta's interest.
 

You got me here, the whole mall incident and the interview was to get the reader to view Arnav not just in 2D but 3D. Yes, he is a lot more than a boss sitting on a high horse kissing an attractive female employee, a hell of a lot more.

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kalyaani

Originally posted by citi

The interview's been well done and I'd say an excellent idea as this brings into focus, forcefully, the businessman side of Arnav. And you have managed to do it in a very real, serious manner conveying his skills as an entrepreneur and his standing in the world of business, subtly shifting the focus away from A the playboy.
I think Ms. Gupta must be just one many young maidens sighing over the article and it's accompanying photographBig smile but then he is interested in Ms. Gupta's interest.
 

You got me here, the whole mall incident and the interview was to get the reader to view Arnav not just in 2D but 3D. Yes, he is a lot more than a boss sitting on a high horse kissing an attractive female employee, a hell of a lot more.


He definitely becomes more likable as other interesting facets of his personality are revealed.

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 4:35am | IP Logged
Very nicely written. Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Updated on page 72. but for your convenience here I go again.

I just liked the interview very much. It came out as very real one , projecting Arnav as an astute and diplomatic (He was quite to the point) businessman.

I wish the actual show had been true to this ASR character.

I had fun reading Khushi's reaction , the way she read the i'view again and again. And ASR is also wondering what her reaction will be.

Do you plan to have their encounter in next update? That would be fun. We missed their interaction in last 2 updates.

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 6:26am | IP Logged
Beautiful!
 
It is difficult writing an interview... AND make it sound exceedingly believable and to the character. So AMAZING job on that!
 
The idea of "Hai Re Nandkissore" wearing jeans and skimpy tops... and leaning over the brown mahogany desk to peck ASR on his cheek, right before his too important meeting. ROFL OH GOD!!
You crack me up!
 
Thankyou for the PM!
 
-V
 
 

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 6:32am | IP Logged


Edited by LoLo - 14 January 2013 at 8:24pm

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 7:02am | IP Logged
I've really enjoyed the past couple of updates - it gives us a chance to see how Khushi's viewpoint on Arnav is evolving.  Reading the same article over and over - that's the least I would do when it comes to a crush.  My heart did a little flip at Arnav wondering about Khushi's reaction to the article - he cares what she thinks of him! 

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 7:14am | IP Logged
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