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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 1:35am | IP Logged
waiting for ur update 
only thing i didnt like abt the charcter arnav is that he is taking kjushi for granted and she is not even retorting.

 sorry if i have spoken to hurt

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 2:08am | IP Logged
Jhanvi is adorable. I loved how you penned down an interaction between Khushi, Jhanvi and Arnav, bringing out a whole new dimension to the story. I like how Arnav is amused, and intrigued, and it also gives us an insight to what Khushi might be thinking. I love the way the story is moving:)

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 2:15am | IP Logged
I love this chapter!!! I liked Jahnvi! And i may have said this before •- but I absolutely love the way the story os moving forward. He... AFR. Why you like to kiss khoosi bitiya so muchwa? Its annoying-wa I tell you. X_X

My horses are all bridled and ready, KBR ji. Just you wait. Till a month. Till then ji, just make do-wa with these chhotte chhotte comment-wa :D

I love you, dammnit.

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Hey just finsh reading the whole story n what a facinating story it is
Love ur way of writing
Would really appreciate if u pm me d next update sending u a buddy request nw

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 4:31am | IP Logged
nice story

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 4:59am | IP Logged
so arnav is baby sitter?
great

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 11:10am | IP Logged

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