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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Hey just finsh reading the whole story n what a facinating story it is
Love ur way of writing
Would really appreciate if u pm me d next update sending u a buddy request nw

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 4:59am | IP Logged
so arnav is baby sitter?
great

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 11:10am | IP Logged

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Res*
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FIRST FIRST FIRST
 
Damn Khushi. You go girl!
But was she said was so true! Just because a girl believes in having a liberal lifestyle, doesn't make her a bad person. Just becuase she has slept with multiple men, doesn't make her a bad person either. No one has the right to judge a person on their bedroom activities. Not men and not women.
 
Its funny how virginity is accounted for morality even in today's times! But that thought is crap at its best. What one wishes to do with their body is solely their own decision.
 
And I also liked how although Khushi is a virgin, she argued for Lavanya. It shows that although she makes her own decisions, she stands up for others as well.
 
Poor Farhan. I feel really bad for him and his son. Divorce is never a good thing, especially for the child becasue it scars them.
 
And anyway, the only reason to judge a person (you actually never should judge a person, btw) is based on their behavior towards you. Your judgement is merely an opinion based on your experience. It cannot be generalized and treated as a fact.
 
Moving on,
Loved the chapter Kalyaani! You brought out a very controversial topic in today's Indian society and did it very well. As usual, I adored the writing and thank you for updating!
 
Continue soon!
Cheers, Avi.


Edited by ArShifan1997 - 02 September 2012 at 11:21am

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Well this chapter was intriguing. Nice to read more about Farhan. 

Also I believe Khushi is right you can't just judge someone over what you have seen, as I can see Lavanya is trying to fit and change herself. Which is great to see

Hmmm I missed Arnav LOL

Update soon 


Edited by Aveiro - 02 September 2012 at 2:26pm

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 11:23am | IP Logged
missed ASR in this update.
Khushi was quite forthright in pointing out double standards to Payal.
But why so much focus on Lavanya suddenly?Sorry but this kind of felt like a filler update without moving story forward.


Edited by shree10 - 02 September 2012 at 11:43am

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 11:23am | IP Logged
nice update

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Great update!!!
 
Really great!
 
jebwhrbgter fef... sleepy. School tomorrow.
 
buh byee!!
 
-V
 
PS- yep, I agree with Khushi. Its eacy to judge people. But the way I see it, you don't know their story, so you sure as hell can't judge their path.
 
-V
 
 

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