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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 9:09am | IP Logged
I like Lavanya, she has a edge to her character. And Arnav, tell me why do I feel like slapping him? :P
Lovely chapter :D

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 10:53am | IP Logged
I am following both ur ff's ( Raizada & Sons) and they both r beautifully written...

looking forward to ur nxt update...


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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Arnav is so mischievous ..Doesn't leave a chance to flirt with Khushi..
I have started to like Mahi and this line from him was just hilarious..

Arnav, I think you got you hug and kiss from Lavanya, shall we get to work? Sit Khushi and ignore the fool, he is getting old and showing all signs of it.

But I don't approve of the way Arnav kisses Khushi whenever he wants..I actually wanted Khushi to give him a slap but then she is also attracted to him..
I liked lavanya in this update,the feelings which she has now is so real...In all the effort she put to satisfy and please Arnav,she forgot about herself..

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Brilliant update...loved it...thanks for the PM

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
I adore this Fic.
I really do.
 
AMAZING! Once again Kalyaani, you've managed to make it even more awesome!
Oooh Arnav, jabbing points when you know that she has no boyfriend? Insecurity making the lad jealous eh? Wink
Khushi! Wooh! You go girl! Show him what you got Big smile
 
Mahi LOL
 
Khushi is such a darling by trying to put La at ease. But will La retaliate when she finds out that Arnav and Khushi have the hots for each other? Confused
 
Loved it!
 
And I can say it even more?
Update soon woman! You drive me crazy when you update late LOL
 
Cheers, Avi.

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
I just found ur FF and read it in 1 go!!
Its great. Plz do pm me wen u update next

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
wow nice updt

thanks for pm

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
wow, thats a surprise, Lavanya and Khushi bonding...
and what the hell, Mr. Raizada,  stop Demanding, start asking...and please grow a romantic bone! LOL, but the conversation between them hilarious!


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