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kinjalcp87 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 26 April 2012
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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
poor khusi...
how she will work...
arnav is staring her each and every time.

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Kalyaani IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 15 March 2012
Posts: 21397

Posted: 24 August 2012 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by serialwatcher16


I have a question. Sorry if you have mentioned it but I have not caught on.
Why does arnav call Mahi 'mama'.

As far as i Understand their family structure, Ajit is arnav's chacha (father's brother) and mahi is married to manorama who is ajit's sister who then also becomes arnav's bua.

So is Mahi also arnav's mother's brother. I must have missed that somehow. Let me do some revision.

Chapter 11
The Raizadas were a rather unique family; he had been surprised with the friendships that resulted in marriages. Anjali's Mama for example he was married to her Bua he had found this all very complicated initially and now laughed at any one who failed to understand it. He held Anjali's family in high regard, especially her brother Arnav and her Mama; those two men were worth being admired.
I am sure confusing my readers Big smile

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inspiringstars Goldie

Joined: 27 January 2012
Posts: 2167

Posted: 24 August 2012 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
I recently started reading the story. This story touched my heart for a no of reasons. The character os Khushi and her background is very thought out. At first, I saw her as a mysterious being, who is not sure what she wants. But now as it develops it impresses me how much she is enduring, and how she is dealing with all this. 
Special mention is the chapter where she goes to was the best one...her constant chatter with her Sudhamma...and her fun loving family...I loved all of it.

Also, love the characters Mahi and Ajit, quite fatherly but very calm and composed in their attitude, and very respectful. Akash and Payal both cute and funny. I am surprised at Payal and Khushi's bonding , they have chemistry!

Arnav...I am not sure how his character will develop yet. Very intriguing personality he has, and he is a curious soul, wants to know everything about everybody. Too overbearing at times, but has attitude and arrogance that matches his personality.

Only recently A and K have started interacting, so looking forward to their chemistry developing, and their romance blooming..hahaha! After all, thats what we all want.

I am loving this story, Kalyaani...havent read Chapter 17 yet...but will read after posting this.

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meera06 Goldie

Joined: 12 July 2011
Posts: 2240

Posted: 24 August 2012 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
What do I say?Another brilliant update!!
Loved the initial part where Khushi has an erotic dream..So she is affected by the kiss..
Arnav doesn't miss an opportunity to tag along with Khushi...
Loved the way Khushi was talking about her father and she surely is a daddy's girl..!

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inspiringstars Goldie

Joined: 27 January 2012
Posts: 2167

Posted: 24 August 2012 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
The conversation between mahi and Khushi was brilliantly written.

Arnav realizes he is attracted, but cannot stop his inquisitive brain from working..LOL

I am enjoying this...

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fffan123 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 17 March 2012
Posts: 11936

Posted: 24 August 2012 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
ASR has started pursuing her and Khushi is sticking to her game plan. Clap Clap Clap Let us see who is the winner in this game.

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serialwatcher16 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 18 September 2010
Posts: 5656

Posted: 24 August 2012 at 11:39pm | IP Logged

Thanks K for the clarification. I was sure i had missed something. LOL

This story is a great read. I am thoroughly enjoying it.

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citi Senior Member

Joined: 25 May 2012
Posts: 599

Posted: 24 August 2012 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
It is very interesting to read their thoughts about each other. So she is getting into his system and he is honest enough to admit the changing interest he feels for her. I simply adore this Khushi...has a balanced, calm approach that speaks a lot about her upbringing. Love the repeated references to her father and her adoration of him. Does Mahi have any idea that he might have a child somewhere out there in the world?

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