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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 2:32am | IP Logged
I am so charmed by is update...that my toes are curling!!!!!! I thoroughly enjoyed the return of ASR and he is already shaking up Khushi's world.  What a rogue.  Arnav is intent on finding out what makes Khushi tick because (as you said), he is attracted and annoyed by her and wants to understand who she is and what her game is.

Want  to hear her monologue on what she feels, thinks, perceives about him after the kissing incident.

Enjoyed Khushi's pushback to ASR and her telling him off.  He was surprised because he does not get this kind of lecture often.  



Edited by Anamika100 - 23 August 2012 at 2:32am

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 3:35am | IP Logged
"Mr. Raizada, please sir, we have to work together and such kind of 
behavior is uncalled for, not to mention disgusting, whatever may have 
caused it, I hope you will not repeat it. I on my part have given no 
reason for you to believe that you can take liberties with me. I repeat,
 please do not do anything this unsavory again.Clap


lov this update!

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 8:32am | IP Logged
What was that? She was stunned, yes, but maintained her dignity. Her come back about never inviting such behaviour was spot on. He needs to learn to respect a woman and her wishes, period.

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 9:35am | IP Logged
loving this...

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 10:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anamika100

I am so charmed by is update...that my toes are curling!!!!!! I thoroughly enjoyed the return of ASR and he is already shaking up Khushi's world.  What a rogue.  Arnav is intent on finding out what makes Khushi tick because (as you said), he is attracted and annoyed by her and wants to understand who she is and what her game is.

Want  to hear her monologue on what she feels, thinks, perceives about him after the kissing incident.

Enjoyed Khushi's pushback to ASR and her telling him off.  He was surprised because he does not get this kind of lecture often.  

 
Toe curling indeed...I too would be curious like Arnav...she is everywhere and he is an astute businessman so would be ultra careful about most things...
 
This is fiction so he is not going to push her to the door and look into her eyes for minutes on eye, so the kissing is allowed I guess...anyway no SP to censor...will make my leads kiss...
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 10:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ArShifan1997

Okay. Double take.
Did he actually DO that? Like kiss her? In fact, not once, but twice?
Well, that was a bas***dly move -..-
Poor Khushi. Having some experience in this department would have helped her to deal with ASR. It was her first kiss (not counting the hospital one. This involved tongue Tongue) and she didn't even know how to respond.
Add to that, who wants to have their First Kiss like that? -..-
 
Wait a second. Isn't he STILL in a relationship with Lavanya? Confused Holy mother of Jesus. Whatta bas***d.
 
I appreciate Khushi's unruffled demeanor; shows how strong she is.
 
ROFL at the tri-logue between Mahi-Arnav-Khushi LOL
 
Very interested in seeing future developments between ArHi. And although every feminist shall argue my next statement, I must confess;
 
Arnav's roguish ways did charm me as well. Wink
 
Loved the update (As usual) Kalyaani! Very well written (as always) It kept me entertained throughout Big smile
Continue soon!
Cheers, Avi.
 

This is such a holy cow kinda comment...you have covered it all...are you psychic? My next update is almost done and does cover many issues you raise...cool...hope you like the next one too...

 

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 1:03am | IP Logged
read this ff in one go...loved the updates...thanks for d pm...

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 9:49pm | IP Logged

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