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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 9:45pm | IP Logged
Oho!!! Their "kissa" has started with a kiss!!! Hmmm.. Arnav is really an arrogant b%##%^^^^ LOL

But don't we all know he can be as adorable and charming as he can get!!!!!!

This is indeed going to be fun! But on the other side , wonder how he'll react when he gets to know khushi's truth!!!!

Great update!!!! Thnx for the pm

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 10:00pm | IP Logged
What is up with Arnav? I think he is conflicted between the annoyance he feels at how Khushi has managed to charm his family and this tug of attraction that is pulling him towards her causing him to react like a jerk! And respect for Khushi for holding steady and giving it back to him. Btw, love your writing style! Simple yet highly effective! :)

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nimra21

What is up with Arnav? I think he is conflicted between the annoyance he feels at how Khushi has managed to charm his family and this tug of attraction that is pulling him towards her causing him to react like a jerk! And respect for Khushi for holding steady and giving it back to him. Btw, love your writing style! Simple yet highly effective! :)
 

I took nearly 2000 words to get this across and you do capture the essence in four sentences. You are bang on with you conclusion, it is attraction and annoyance; he is vacillating between the two emotions.

In all honesty, I am really enjoying people's reaction to the kiss and his behavior. There is more to the man than his eagerness to rile her, he has more than one reason and she is the one giving them to him.

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
Forget the reservation I made.

Can I just say that Arnav is such a heel? What the hell is wrong with him? Or does he need to go into rehab for addiction to.. His tongue in Khushi's mouth? (LOL)

Loved the update. :D

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
Arnav and his cocky attitude. I want to laugh at his antics, and smile at how amazing the whole chapter turned out. I can so easily imagine that horrified, shocked expression on Khushi's face. Arnav has git it bad for Khushi. And this story is going to be one hell of a ride :)

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 11:51pm | IP Logged

love this story...

ok...Arnav kissed Khushi again...OMG..Tongue...wonder how long when Khushi starts reciprocating??
Mahi calling ASR as Arnie...i wonder is ASR ok with such a pet name?? but i do love it...
Wonder when are u going to write about mahi's wife...ManoramaWink...i am highly curious about her...also Does Mahi know that Khushi is Shashi-Garima's legal daughter?...cant wait for the layers of suspense to openShocked
Thanks for the PM...update soon

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 1:42am | IP Logged
Just caught up with your story... Loved the scene with Arnav and Khushi, that was so typical of him!
But I love ow Khushi held her own without being flustered.
Can't wait to read what Arnav is upto at the team lunch!
Happy writing!

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 1:59am | IP Logged
I wud cry harassment, harassment all over the place till i went blue in the face Geek
But since we are talking about Arnav and Khushi here, what i did instead was re-read the previous sentence to make sure i did see that he had closed the door of the cabin - so used to creepy interruptions !! LOL

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