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meera06 Goldie

Joined: 12 July 2011
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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 11:11am | IP Logged
I can feel Khushi's irritation..Look at the man..First he just kisses her and then when she retaliates ,he talks about composing her feelings during non working hours...He never bothered to see that he was kissing her during working hours ...
But in spite of all this it is very exciting to read Arnav n Khushi's interactions
Love how Mamaji supports Khushi..

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norolim Goldie

Joined: 10 June 2012
Posts: 1422

Posted: 22 August 2012 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Okay. Double take.
Did he actually DO that? Like kiss her? In fact, not once, but twice?
Well, that was a bas***dly move -..-
Poor Khushi. Having some experience in this department would have helped her to deal with ASR. It was her first kiss (not counting the hospital one. This involved tongue Tongue) and she didn't even know how to respond.
Add to that, who wants to have their First Kiss like that? -..-
Wait a second. Isn't he STILL in a relationship with Lavanya? Confused Holy mother of Jesus. Whatta bas***d.
I appreciate Khushi's unruffled demeanor; shows how strong she is.
ROFL at the tri-logue between Mahi-Arnav-Khushi LOL
Very interested in seeing future developments between ArHi. And although every feminist shall argue my next statement, I must confess;
Arnav's roguish ways did charm me as well. Wink
Loved the update (As usual) Kalyaani! Very well written (as always) It kept me entertained throughout Big smile
Continue soon!
Cheers, Avi.

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Kishmish IF-Rockerz

Joined: 08 February 2012
Posts: 5325

Posted: 22 August 2012 at 11:21am | IP Logged
What a start to the week ... kissed as soon as she walked into his office !   Shocked

Then gets a call from Mahi ... 
" She cursed her luck, no respite from this Mama-Bhanja duo today "  poor Khushi ... caught between the Devil and the Deep Sea ... 

Khushi is not going to get a minutes respite from Arnav Singh Raizada till she is working in AR ... 
He seems hell bent on fingering her but at least has realised that she is good at her work ... 

Thanks for the PM ... Was waiting patiently for an update ... Loved it 

Edited by Kishmish - 22 August 2012 at 12:20pm

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Shoe12 Senior Member

Joined: 24 March 2012
Posts: 342

Posted: 22 August 2012 at 11:27am | IP Logged
uurrghh! he's so annoying! smack him khushi! smack him HARD! 

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starrystar Groupbie

Joined: 09 March 2012
Posts: 73

Posted: 22 August 2012 at 11:31am | IP Logged
nice update !!
arrgg arnav is shameless, irritating the hell out of  khusi ..
Good that mahi stopped arnav

ooh oh arnav is joining them for luch ...

Can't wait to see what will happen

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nj.123 Senior Member

Joined: 18 May 2012
Posts: 334

Posted: 22 August 2012 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Gosh Arnav is being such an irritating jerk but I can't deny that I enjoyed every moment of the update.Big smile

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catalyst IF-Dazzler

Joined: 15 November 2011
Posts: 3962

Posted: 22 August 2012 at 11:58am | IP Logged
i m pissed at arnav...i mean professionalism is what i wanted to see from his end and he's out there flirting out with a not-so-cool but an extremely intriguing lady according to him...hell, what is he upto?

ahh khusi...hurray i mean the calm and the composed look she maintained...years of patience and practice...over the edge responsible and spantenous as far as her work is concerned!

the kiss i didnt really expect it:) way too fast!

ps it was a wonderful update!

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summaiyasayed IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 10 February 2012
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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 12:00pm | IP Logged

thanks for pm

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