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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 7:48am | IP Logged
So Khushi is going to be spending more time with Arnav, can't wait for it! Let us see who gives whom hell Mr. Raizada. Big smile
Nice update.

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 8:05am | IP Logged
A short one but hadd all in it.  Next one will be Face Off with arnav and am so eager about it. waiting...Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
Khushi is garima and mahi's daughter.  How did that happen?  I am going to read it all over again to see if I missed this crucial thing incase you mentioned it before.
 
Dadi sounded so formal and up tight about khushi.  Is it just my feeling?
 
Why does Mahi giving more attention to khushi if he knows that she doen't like him well????
 
Her lil' talk with sudhamma is so cute. She is like mother hen.

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lovespell

A short one but hadd all in it.  Next one will be Face Off with arnav and am so eager about it. waiting...Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
Khushi is garima and mahi's daughter.  How did that happen?  I am going to read it all over again to see if I missed this crucial thing incase you mentioned it before.
 
Dadi sounded so formal and up tight about khushi.  Is it just my feeling?
 
Why does Mahi giving more attention to khushi if he knows that she doen't like him well????
 
Her lil' talk with sudhamma is so cute. She is like mother hen.
 
A short one????? Close to 2000 words dear Shocked
 
Not reading properly?????? Very bad...very, very bad.
 
Dadi is...wait and read Wink
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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 10:13am | IP Logged
amazing story ...
hmm  did mahi sense something ... is that why he  is so protective and fond of her??
OR maybe he thinks of her like his own daughter. 
Khushi is really lucky to have sashi in her life, so supportive and full of love for his daughter. 
bua is also nice ..

and arnav hahaha 

Can't wait to see how the story will unfold 



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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 10:35am | IP Logged
u r an amazing writer!love dis more wid evry update!Smile

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 11:26am | IP Logged
I just caught up on all the chapters thus far - lots of intrigue and maybe even a little scandal - it's been a wonderful read so far.  I like your Khushi - smart, strong and intuitive.  I'll be rooting for her in her interactions with Arnav and Mahi. looking forward to the next chapter!

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
This girl is grounded and has a firm sense of balance and love that about this character. So both Ajit and Dadi know...does anyone else in the family also know?
ASR seems to be the only one who upsets her equanimity somewhat. Mahi did initially but she seems to be at ease with him now. It is gradually building up...waiting for more. 

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
nice updt

thanks continue soon Smile

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